Hold me some, kiss me more | MaAn TS| updated page 3

Posted: 3 years ago
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Disclaimer: Read at your own risk of being disappointed...planned something longer as always but couldnt find the time, toh no joote chappals please...also, wrote something after a good couple of months so dont mind the rusty writing, dhanyawaad!


edited: added part 2 on page 3😳




*knock knock* he heard someone banging the door


“ek minute” he said and rushed to unlock it


“Anu tum? kya hua?” he asked looking at his flustered wife to be.


She walked into the room slamming the door behind her when he said “mai abhi bahar aa hi raha tha, woh actually meri sherwani par mehndi lag gayi thi toh Samar ne mujhe change karne ke liye kurta toh de diya par iske buttons gayab hai”




“Anuj darwaza lock kar dijiye please” said Anu pointing to her mehndi laden hands making him raise his brows curiously.



Bolting the door he turned around to ask “Anu? kya hua hai? kisi ne kuch kaha tumse? Vanraj ne toh kuch...” and before he could finish she wrapped her arms around his chest in a firm embrace.



Hugging her back, he was still confused as to what could have brought on the sudden urge but decided not to prod.



“I love you Anuj” she whispered and her warm breath on his bare skin made him pull her closer and drove him into a frenzy when she pressed her lips onto his chest.



Panting heavily, he cherished the feel of her lips on him.



While he could barely contain his emotions from her first intimate touch, she looked up to meet his passion clad eyes and pulled her arms up to wrap them around his neck.



He bent his head a little to help her out. There was something very new and tempting in her eyes that said she was only getting started and he couldnt be more joyed to share this unexplored intimacy.



He looked her in the eye for a brief moment and sensing a glint of shyness in her as she looked down he bent a little more and brushed his cheek with hers.



His stubble tickled her skin and her senses as she tightened her grip on his neck. With one hand behind her head, he sensuously grazed the other down her back and settled on her waist that he hadnt touched before...



She tipped up to him as he pecked her cheek lightly but reluctantly pulled his face back before he couldnt resist crossing the line.



But she had other plans...



Tugging him back to meet her face, she gave him a long passionate stare and looked at his lips suggestively announcing her intentions.



Bemused, he arched his brows and braced himself when she locked her lips with his.



He clasped his hands around her back and pulled her up by the waist to kiss back harder.




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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

more tags, sorry if I didnt include any of you its been too long.



Happy Sunday!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Lovely Hina

Good to see your OS after long.

It's beautiful....right on time to Increase our expectations for the upcoming track.

Thanks for sharing.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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WHY AM I BLUSHING SO HARD RIGHT NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW


(and why am i warm?)


thanks Hina. 🙈🙈🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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k, let me stop being a dork and write a proper comment. 🤪

well, your OS couldn't have come at a better time. 😳

it slides perfectly into the episode right after their date at the college.

coming off of last week, where we finally see her opening up to him physically, this OS just makes sense. ^ this is what OS/FF is all about ppl ! smiley32

i can actually visualize her doing all of this and it doesn't seem out of character. 😙

i like how you included it from his perspective. i feel like it must be hard to write from a man's perspective, but good job. it was hot. lol. ❤️‍🔥

you do slice of life so well hina, you always have a balance between physical and emotional.

and you always have me all up in my feelinggggggs. 😩 😘 🥹

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: BaAZiGar0

k, let me stop being a dork and write a proper comment. 🤪

well, your OS couldn't have come at a better time. 😳

it slides perfectly into the episode right after their date at the college.

coming off of last week, where we finally see her opening up to him physically, this OS just makes sense. ^ this is what OS/FF is all about ppl ! smiley32

i can actually visualize her doing all of this and it doesn't seem out of character. 😙

i like how you included it from his perspective. i feel like it must be hard to write from a man's perspective, but good job. it's was hot. lol. ❤️‍🔥

you do slice of life so well hina, you always have a balance between physical and emotional.

and you always have me all up in my feelinggggggs. 😩 😘 🥹

All of the above from my side as well Hina. And yes, since u r writing, his kurta buttons had to be missing!

Lovely to read your os after a long time, thanks for finding some time. And yes, I think MaAn have reached this point in the show so this is quite believable. Please continue this one. I wanna know what made Anu come after Anuj for a kiss!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bahut dino baad aaj ye beautiful os tumhari taraf se...it made my sunday❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Koms9

All of the above from my side as well Hina. And yes, since u r writing, his kurta buttons had to be missing!

Lovely to read your os after a long time, thanks for finding some time. And yes, I think MaAn have reached this point in the show so this is quite believable. Please continue this one. I wanna know what made Anu come after Anuj for a kiss!

we are responsible for making our dreams a reality 😎
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Posted: 3 years ago
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So sensual.. Hinziii 🤗... aur likho bro.. iske baad kya hua? Thank you for sharing 💜💖

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice to see you back. I always enjoy Anuj's point of view and a bold Anu, which we know she secretly is 😉Is fun to read. 🤗

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