When they knew (drabble series)(3rd pg13 27/4/22) - Page 12

Originally posted by: Prizi

Beautiful❤

Love caring shiva❤️

Glad you loved it! ❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Sathya🤗 what a cute drabble! ❤️

Shiva got the pads just for Raavi 😍😍 and other things too. How thoughtful and caring is he!

So can I assume he is somewhere between 18-20 and Raavi is 16-18? perfect teenage love 😆

Anita figured before Dhara that both are attracted to each other❤️ This brings back the FB scene we had everyone was down with covid, they brought the kids back on the show. Dhara felt by looking them when they were kids, both will eventually be together but in your story, Anita is the first one to figure things between them 😆

Do write more drabbles when you do get a chance! 😃

Akka🤗!!! Yes, in my head, Raavi's in Senior Secondary when they realise they're more than exclusive frenemies in Metamorphosis. Shiva's about to enter college then. And at the end of Metamorphosis' timeline, Raavi's a first year college student, and Shiva's a senior there. I'm thinking there's a 2 year gap between them academically speaking.

Dhara, I think, is too motherly at times to really SEE her children. Blinded by a mother's love and trust, you know? Anita would see all the kids as more of siblings, on the other hand, and so EXPECT more mischief from them... 😆

Of course I'll write more when I get the time! 😳

PS What did you think of the latest chapter of the FF Akka? I don't think you ever commented, or was it me who missed it? 😒

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

This drabble is love.❤️ Shiva taking care of Raavi is one of my dream plots. Shiva was so cute acting all Tsun-Tsun.😆 I enjoyed reading this very much.🤗

But it was a bit short drabble, hain na? The dil wants more~😳

Pooh🤗! Glad you loved this one! Google tells me Tsun Tsun is a Japanese Onomatopoeia that refers to someone who sticks there nose up in the air, acts coldly. I'm assuming you're referring to Shiva's behaviour towards Anita at the store, then? Or am I getting this all wrong?

If I did get it right, then that's because I feel that in ANY universe, Anita and Shiva would always, by their most basic nature, have bones to pick between them. Shiva prefers to make ways for himself, while Anita seems to be the type to bend to use what path is available to her. Fundamentally clashing characters! 🤣

My Dil wants to write more too! But time time time! Also, inspiration? 🤪😭🥱

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Thank you! ❤️ Also, hai naaaaaa????!!!!!!

Haaa, sooo much❤️

Originally posted by: VNuts

Sathya! This was so much fun to read.

Anita being slightly scared of Shiva, and then herYoun shock of seeing Shiva go out of the way for Raavi, and then her eventual amusement at knowing she figured this out before Dhara.

Shiva being awkward while wanting to be helpful was so cute! And then helping Raavi sit up, getting her the pads & the chocolates, and keeping the hot water bottle. He is all kinds of sweet and adorable.

Loved it!

Vandana🤗! Glad you loved this! You seem to be one of the few who caught on to the Shiva-Anita vibe really well!!! Her amusement was a joy to write for me... Refreshing after all the angsty pieces I prefer to do!

Shiva is just our adorbs next door baccha, isn't he😆? A character anyone and everyone can love! 🤣

i found this piece a few months back and i really wanted it to continue

but i totally forgot about it🤣🤣

now me re-reading it....

will leave a lamba comment soon but for now i think you are suprememly talented and i have read all your works and they are phenomenal❤️❤️

p.s. i think hamara introduction properly nahi hua......i am shree

p.p.s. neenga tamizha?

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

but you still write ..in your busy schedule 🤗thank you for that ❤❤

Awwiee!!! You're welcome! 😳🤗

This whole series is just amazing

It was just heart warming to see Suman loving this couple😍

And Anita's part was fun😆

We all love the smitten loving and caring Shiva and you potrayed it soooooo beautifully❤️

Loved it Sathya♥️

Waiting for the next part🤗

Originally posted by: qwerty.shivi123

i found this piece a few months back and i really wanted it to continue

but i totally forgot about it🤣🤣

now me re-reading it....

will leave a lamba comment soon but for now i think you are suprememly talented and i have read all your works and they are phenomenal❤️❤️

p.s. i think hamara introduction properly nahi hua......i am shree

p.p.s. neenga tamizha?

Aww! Glad you've loved this series so far! I'll look forward to that lamba comment of yours, and I'm flattered you think so highly of my writing.... ☺️

PS Hello Shree, I'm Sathya🤗. What do you do?

PPS Yes I'm Tamil! Perhaps the only one on this forum who actually lives in TN😆. Are you Tamil too, or do you just know the language? 🤪