When they knew (drabble series)(3rd pg13 27/4/22) - Page 10

Awww..

The caring shiva is so cuuttteeeee...

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Beautiful❤

Love caring shiva❤️

Sathya🤗 what a cute drabble! ❤️

Shiva got the pads just for Raavi 😍😍 and other things too. How thoughtful and caring is he!

So can I assume he is somewhere between 18-20 and Raavi is 16-18? perfect teenage love 😆

Anita figured before Dhara that both are attracted to each other❤️ This brings back the FB scene we had everyone was down with covid, they brought the kids back on the show. Dhara felt by looking them when they were kids, both will eventually be together but in your story, Anita is the first one to figure things between them 😆

Do write more drabbles when you do get a chance! 😃

Sathya! This was so much fun to read.

Anita being slightly scared of Shiva, and then her shock of seeing Shiva go out of the way for Raavi, and then her eventual amusement at knowing she figured this out before Dhara.

Shiva being awkward while wanting to be helpful was so cute! And then helping Raavi sit up, getting her the pads & the chocolates, and keeping the hot water bottle. He is all kinds of sweet and adorable.

Loved it!

This drabble is love.❤️ Shiva taking care of Raavi is one of my dream plots. Shiva was so cute acting all Tsun-Tsun.😆 I enjoyed reading this very much.🤗

But it was a bit short drabble, hain na? The dil wants more~😳

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Give the woman a break she sacrificed water for this. Period. 😕

BUT YEAAASSSS HAYILOOO???!!

How come 90% of your updates are incidentally set for last post on a page? HOW? 🤔

I don't know!!! Maybe because I never check before posting? I only check when I have to edit the topic to add in the page number and all... 😆🤪

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Great🥰🥰

Caring shiva is love😘😘

And finally anita got something nice in reel and FF both😃

Glad you loved this too Odette! And Anita definitely deserved to be more than a vamp! 🤪😭

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

I'm a sucker for Shiva taking care of Raavi on her periods, so needless to say, I most definitely enjoyed this cute little piece ✋🏻❤️

Glad you did, Meghna! This the moment I tell you that your Chocolates and Cuddles is one of your best pieces so far? In my opinion, atleast!

Originally posted by: mandira2

OMG SATHYAAAAAA! THIS WAS SO GOOD!

I really enjoyed reading this! Honestly, I find this series very unique and authentic! I've never read something like this, where we get to see Shiva and Raavi's story from different characters' pov.

I absolutely loved reading Anita's side of the story! Yk I kinda wish the show didn't make her completely evil 🤢 Her character had so much potential (especially with the Hardik thing) but they just ruined everything... However, I think you explored her character pretty well!! (it seems like fanfic writers do everything a tiny bit better than the actual writers of the show LMAO)

Our baby was so worried about Raavi that he went to Maami's house he even went to Raavi's bedroom and comforted her ☺️ The fact that he couldn't bear Raavi being in discomfort was so heartwarming ❤️ We all need this version of Shiva Pandya to be our aashiq's 🤪

Also, I loved the tiny detail about Shiva lifting her top to place the hot water bag on her stomach! It was pretty minute but I think it brilliantly showcased how comfortable they are with each other!

Thanks for this! It was very refreshing!!

I know you're pretty busy with college but please try to update this story whenever you have time 🥱

Mandira🤗! Glad you loved this❤️!

I think there's a certain beauty to seeing a story in third person POV. After all, isn't the world responsible for telling our stories more often than not? 😳

Anita is the one character that PS had done better then the OG initially! Her and Hardik were very cute, right up till the wedding actually happened. Even the Haveli times Tel Kaand could have been a bit of grayness before her redemption, you know? But then they turned her into a complete Vamp!!! 😕

He he, who doesn't want the best of Shiva Pandya for themselves? Anyone? Certainly not me! ☺️🤣

Shivi are definitely physically comfortable in this one, and I might show exactly how much in one of the upcoming drabbles, I think... 😆