MaAn Drabble : A Sagaai sneak peek🫣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Seeing the sagaai segment, felt writing a small drabble. Posting the same, hope you guys will like it😳

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Scene: Anuj in Anu’s room before MaAn Sagaai



Knock, Knock



ā€œKya mai andar aa sakta hoon,ā€ he seeked permission while standing at the doorstep of her room as the door was slightly ajar.



ā€œAap idhar kaise… aise kaise.. koi dekh lega toh kya kahega..ā€ she quizzed him as she opened the door.



She stood there wearing a tie dye saree matching the dupatta of his sherwani with a pink mirror work blouse. Hair tied in a bun, adorning a maang tikka and matching jewelry, she looked gorgeous.



She… Anu… Anupama… who he hadn’t even dared to think could be his friend few months back….. was standing infront of him, all decked up and ready to be his fiancĆ©e in next few moments.



Unable to take off his eyes from her, he versed a shayari….



Aaj lagta hai ishq mein sawaab mila hai

Tujhe bedhadak dekhne ka haq jo mila hai

Aaj lagta hai ishq mukkamal hua hai

Mera khwaab jo mujhe mila hai

Mera khwaab….. jo mujhe mila hai…



Under his intense gaze, she blushed, ā€œAap ne bataya nahi ki aap yahan kaiseā€



ā€œAb saare baatein yahan darwaze pe khade khade hi karu ya andar bhi aa sakta hoon,ā€ reminding her that he was still standing at doorstep…



Opening the door wide and letting him in, she asked again, ā€œAb toh batayi yeā€



ā€œMere honewali mangetar ko mai sab se pehle dekhna chahta tha… tum jo aaj mere liye sajji hoon toh mera haq banta hai na..tumhari khoobasoorti ki tareef karoon… hai na?ā€ He responded while folding his arms infront of his chest and slightly leaning forward towards her…



ā€œAnu…. Tum bahut khoobsoorat lagi rahi ho… Bahut khoobsoorat,ā€ he complimented her making her cheeks go pink matching the shade of her blouse.



ā€œAb mujhe aur intezar nahi hota.. Mann toh kar raha hai ki aaj hi tumhe doli mein vidaa karke le jaaoā€¦ā€ he continued expressing situation as he placed his right hand on his heart.



Feeling shy, she turned around and walked ahead towards the mirror.



Like always, he caught by her pallu and wrapping it around his right palm, moved closer to her.




Standing behind her, they both faced the mirror together as a couple. Bending his face lower to her ears, he whispered huskily, ā€œAb tak toh teekh hai, lekin shaadi ke baad mere dushman se dosti mat rakhnaā€



Puzzled at his statement, she looked up into the mirror to see him and mumbled, ā€œDushman… dushman matlab?ā€



Looking into her eyes through the mirror, he breathed softly, ā€œYeh jo pin lagaya hai na pallu mein.. wahi hai mera dushmanā€ into her ears but making it loud and clear to her about his sinister plans well in advance. A wave of heat rushed through her body, flushing her face.



She turned around quickly and hide her face in his chest while hugging him tight.



ā€œAnuā€¦ā€ he called out gently but before he could continue a knock was heard on the door.



ā€œBhai… bhai..ā€ shouted Mukku from the other side of the door.



ā€œMukku… tum chalo hum neeche aate haiā€ he responded back to her.


ā€œChale Anuā€ forwarding his hand, he requested her. And they walked hand in hand down the stairs for their engagement.


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Apologies for typos n grammar as I haven’t proofread.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Lovely Arya

Kaash aisa intimate scene hame dekhne mil jaaye serial me... waise wo dono uper se ikatthe hi aaye the segment me....šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”

Loved it...you wrote it beautifully.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: grace2021

Lovely Arya

Kaash aisa intimate scene hame dekhne mil jaaye serial me... waise wo dono uper se ikatthe hi aaye the segment me....šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”šŸ¤”

Loved it...you wrote it beautifully.


Thank you so much Pooja ā¤ļøā¤ļø


Yep they came down together… jaldi jaldi mein bhool gayi thi šŸ˜†.. added a small line to fit that šŸ¤—

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Anuj's dushman! šŸ˜†šŸ˜³


Hai na dushmanšŸ¤£ā€¦ agree or not with Bholuram 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ha, ha pin uska dushman!


Maryada me hi likha hai! Waah waah! Lovely one Arya ā¤ļø

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I think the ff matters more than my examšŸ™ƒ well meri neend udd gyi isse padhke.. muahh😌😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Uff ufff ufff wala cute hain yeh toh Aryu ā¤ļøā˜ŗļø on screen na sahi yaha toh unko thoda time mil gaya ek sath.. thanks for sharing n tagging babe šŸ’œšŸ’–ā¤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is really nice 🄰🄰🄰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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this was really sweet and short.šŸ˜†


Did you write the shyari Arya?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Romantic scene šŸ˜‰ i love it

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