When they knew (drabble series)(3rd pg13 27/4/22) - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

lmao not on last page this update

Last post, you mean? I still appreciate that you brought your OCD into my thread. Yes. Truly! 🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Again came here to read this masterpiece 🥰🥰

Especially how suman knew is my fav♥️♥️

Loved to read this........

Thank you! And I'm glad you love this so much Odette... New update up, BTW! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Last post, you mean? I still appreciate that you brought your OCD into my thread. Yes. Truly! 🤣🤣🤣

Give the woman a break she sacrificed water for this. Period. 😕


BUT YEAAASSSS HAYILOOO???!!


How come 90% of your updates are incidentally set for last post on a page? HOW? 🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Great🥰🥰

Caring shiva is love😘😘

And finally anita got something nice in reel and FF both😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I'm a sucker for Shiva taking care of Raavi on her periods, so needless to say, I most definitely enjoyed this cute little piece ✋🏻❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

OMG SATHYAAAAAA! THIS WAS SO GOOD!


I really enjoyed reading this! Honestly, I find this series very unique and authentic! I've never read something like this, where we get to see Shiva and Raavi's story from different characters' pov.


I absolutely loved reading Anita's side of the story! Yk I kinda wish the show didn't make her completely evil 🤢 Her character had so much potential (especially with the Hardik thing) but they just ruined everything... However, I think you explored her character pretty well!! (it seems like fanfic writers do everything a tiny bit better than the actual writers of the show LMAO)


Our baby was so worried about Raavi that he went to Maami's house he even went to Raavi's bedroom and comforted her ☺️ The fact that he couldn't bear Raavi being in discomfort was so heartwarming ❤️ We all need this version of Shiva Pandya to be our aashiq's 🤪


Also, I loved the tiny detail about Shiva lifting her top to place the hot water bag on her stomach! It was pretty minute but I think it brilliantly showcased how comfortable they are with each other!


Thanks for this! It was very refreshing!!


I know you're pretty busy with college but please try to update this story whenever you have time 🥱

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Uffffff…

how I love this!

And this entire series!!

I’m right with Megs on this. Guy pampering his girl while she is on her period is like the best kind of troupe to ever exist. *Sigh* I can’t.

Bechara braved the torrential rain to not only get her her pads but chocolates and hot water bag! He loves her so much! And I love them so much!


Raavi gave a rather chaste peck but the comfort and haq with which Shiva placed the hot water bag on her stomach, under her kurti tells me that all their interactions might not be so chaste 😉


And I’m so glad for a positive Anita. How cute it would’ve been if Anita wasn’t villainous in the show and could engage in teasing banter with Raavi. I seriously miss a side-kick character for Raavi in the show. You know the one she has girl talk with and one who mercilessly teases her about everything, one who knocks sense into her when she is being an absolute dobi and one who would Jiju jaap on Shiva to annoy him but be endearing at the same time? The possibilities were so beautiful!


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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

How did I go from grinning like a fool to getting teary eyed in the span of 8 minutes???


Howww??


Oh my hearttttt 🥺🥺❤️❤️


I wanted moreeeeeeee. This very chhooottuuu. Ittu sa bas. 😭

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Uffffff…

how I love this!

And this entire series!!

I’m right with Megs on this. Guy pampering his girl while she is on her period is like the best kind of troupe to ever exist. *Sigh* I can’t.




Add me in the club!!! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

This is so beautiful ❤️❤️

I love this drabble series...such a different perspective to their lovestory...

I like Anita in this story...the potential she had to be a good elder sister to Raavi, a confidant, someone who would guide Raavi to not repeat the same mistakes she had made in the past but obviously the show made her a completely negative character.

Loved this version of Shiva...this guy came all the way to her house despite the heavy rains just to pamper his girl...

They are so comfortable with each other...her pecking him on his cheeck, him lifting her top to place the hot water bag...

This story is Pyaaarrrr❤️❤️Loved it....

Do write more...

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