ZDMN EDT#18 | 21/4 WU - pg 135 - Page 111

i am going to drop a lot of imaginary scene at you and you have to write OS 🤣

Originally posted by: anwaya

i am going to drop a lot of imaginary scene at you and you have to write OS 🤣

I don't know agar tumne mere OS padhe hain kya but I used to write a LOT of them. Abhi exams ke chakkar mein wo waala mindset change ho gaya par I used to write a lot.

I have like three threads of stories and drabbles and one of analysis.

Feel free to drop the scenes. Main waapas start karne ki soch rahi hoon.

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Hey, Neha. 15th april ka update maine hi diya tha. Par 16th april ka update @Anwaya ne diya tha. Tumne mujhe tag kara hai, aur mujhe credit kara hai, but @Anwaya ne likha tha. 16th april, jis mein wo song gaata hai, wo waala Anwaya ne diya hai, so... yeah.

Arey, tumne tags off kar rakhe hain.

Oh.. sorry. I'll edit but tags can't be edited.

Sorry Anu 😆 my net was glitching and I didn't see who gave the update

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I don't know agar tumne mere OS padhe hain kya but I used to write a LOT of them. Abhi exams ke chakkar mein wo waala mindset change ho gaya par I used to write a lot.

I have like three threads of stories and drabbles and one of analysis.

Feel free to drop the scenes. Main waapas start karne ki soch rahi hoon.

Yo ready 7 8 already.....rest need to catch up....

Originally posted by: anwaya

BESTTTTTTTTT

i so want one light / funny yet intense mission... and convos like these

Yess. Esa sab bhi chahiye tha hume. Afsos, inn sabka chance hi nahi mila 🥺

But tum jo SS likh rahi ho wo bhi esa kuch hi hai. I loved the planning scene in your story 😍

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

Yess. Esa sab bhi chahiye tha hume. Afsos, inn sabka chance hi nahi mila 🥺

But tum jo SS likh rahi ho wo bhi esa kuch hi hai. I loved the planning scene in your story 😍

❤️

Need to go back to that soon!

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

@bold

OS FF and SS is all we will be left with... so keep them flowing..

apni adhi adhuri icchae... wahi puri kar dete

Originally posted by: anwaya

OS FF and SS is all we will be left with... so keep them flowing..

apni adhi adhuri icchae... wahi puri kar dete

Mere paas itne atrangi idea hain.

I have this one where Monami had a very gruesome past (jo baad mein reveal hoga) and she is left with a very nervous nature and social anxiety and a very strong desire to be a commando.

She goes to the academy with Sid and it's basically a very slow journey with the six forming a group and them falling in love. Show jaisa hai, par nahi bhi, because Monami aur Sid ke characters thode tweaked hain.

Us mein bahut, bahut saara military based cheezen hain like theory classes and all.

I started writing it as something purely for my entertainment and not something I intend to post. Toh us mein maine chapter wise nahi, jaise jaise scenes dimaag mein aaye, waise scenes likhe.

Now, I wrote like the weirdest of stuff in. Like, on an outing, Monami comes across this little, injured parrot and takes her to the academy so no one outside can eat her because she can't fly. She manages to convince everyone to keep it on the terrace in a shelter and she can go when she is all healed up. 🤣
So... yeah, maine bahut paagalon waali cheezen likhi hain. But you won't believe maine kitni research kari on that parrot to make it seem like jo maine likha, wo believable hai.

... That's why I am PROBABLY never going to post it, even though I worked really, really hard on it aur us mein bahut saari aisi cheezen hain jo shayad sab ko pasand aayengi and definitely show se zyaada realistic hai.

Yeah, am gonna stop trying to show I am not insane. (I promise it's less insane than what it sounds like. Maya- the parrot- is like Gappu.) I am not insane... Who am I kidding? I am crazy.

I hope, though, even after the show ends, forum chaahe itna nahi, par thoda active rahe. Like with SS, FF and OS and just discussions and theories of what we imagine might happen.

Agar show mein itne dreams ho sakte hain, toh hum bhi thode bahut dreams toh dekh hi sakte hain.

Shayad humaare theories par yeh season 2 hi le aaye.

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

I'm gonna loose it now..

But imagine the chaos.. Karan entering the academy when everyone is crying/paying tribute to him

Karan enters (Balli has already left) and everyone (esp. Monu) thinks it's Balli and screams, wapas kyu aaye ho, bola tha na chale jao yahan se.

Karan *confused Pikachu face*

Everyone else (iss baar Bala ko Balli ko maarne se koi nahi bacha sakta)

Karan (about to get hit by Bala) *surprised Pikachu face* kya ho raha hai ye sab?

Col. Batra : Special Agent Karan Shergill, welcome back *both salute*

Everyone *surprised Pikachu face*

Baby runs to her Chachu screaming chhaaachuuu!!

Karan picks her up, hugs n kisses.

Monu still angry and confused, leaves.

Karan goes after her. "Itne nakhrey Rani Sahiba? Kya baat hai?"

Monu : do baatein, 1. tum mere Karan ki jagah nahi le sakte. 2. Tum mere Karan ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakte.

Karan : seriously? Aise welcome hoga mera?

Monu *doubtfully* Ek baat jo sirf Karan ko pata hai.

Karan *shakes his head* *insert secret info here*

Monu *scandalized*

Karan *insert more secret info*

Monu : sorry Karan.. kyu nahi bataya mujhe.. pata hai main kitni-

Karan puts a finger on her lips : shh.. calm down, ab main aa gaya hun na

Monu hugs him : agli baar bata k jana

Karan : bata kar to gaya tha ki jaldi aaunga.. intezaar kyu nahi kiya?

Monu : achha? Maine nahi kiya intezaar? Phir wo sab kya tha? *Ref. Bomb blast*

Karan : fake blood doctarni ji (like Sanj says it) kaisi doctor ho, itna bhi nahi pehchanti? Aur bina dead body dekhe maan liya ki main nahi raha? Kyu? No body no death.

Monu : ye sab wo baatein kehne se pehle sochna tha

*Fight(?) Continues*

Finally, Karan, kisses her cuz she won't stop ranting😆

Happily ever after until next mission😆

That's possible 😛 And I don't get how come Barkha is holding Param and has no emotions? I mean I don't want the makers to neglect Barkha's pain and emotions. I don't want to see her casually accepting that Param's alive😭

Saw the 'on-location' video on the social media thread.

Why is Param being so insensitive towards his daughter he hasn't met in years? Doesn't he realize how much Barkha suffered ?👎🏼

Besides I really don't have a good feeling about him. Don't tell me he's Param's doppelganger😒