Teri Meri Love Story ft. Shivi (Chapter 4:- pg- 2)

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INTRODUCTION


Hi guys i am back with the new story on #shivi.

This story is totally different from the show .

In this story both shiva and raavi are doctors . They are at loggerheads with each other. They were unaware of their destiny which is designed for each other only.

In this story pandya's are financially well . And they don't have any blood relation with narayan's family.


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Characters in the story .




Suman pandya , head of pandya family. She is widow. She is mother of four sons.




Gautam pandya, first son of suman ,he is the male head of the family. He works is the owner of pandya's restaurant. He is father of two children.




Dhara pandya, wife of gautam pandya. She is a house wife. She loves her brother in law just like her own children , she is mother of two children.( I will introduce their children later on)




Dev pandya, second son of suman. He is also the owner of pandya's restaurant and works there only. He is soft hearted man who loves his family. He is dating Rishita Seth .




Rishita seth, girlfriend of dev pandya . She is a cute girl who lives her life to fullest. She is raavi's best friend.




Shiva pandya , third son of suman . He is a heart surgeon. And currently working as senior doctor in lifesaving hospital. He is an angry young man but not during his work .




Krish pandya, fourth and the youngest son of suman. He is a naughty boy who loves his family. He is currently studying in college.




Jagat Narayan , he is a famous businessman of somnath , he is not having his own child , he loves his family which include his wife and his wife's sister's daughter.




Prafulla Narayan, wife of jagat narayan, she is down to earth and calm women , she loves raavi like her own daughter.




Raavi, she is cute bubbly girl who is determined towards her dream to become a famous heart surgeon doctor in india, her parents died when she was 10 months old only her masi adopted her and take care of her.




Miraj Sharma , fiancee of raavi. He is the son of jagat's business partner. He is also a businessman running his own miraj firm. He loves raavi a lot but raavi engaged to her just for his mausapa's happiness.


These are the main character of the story.

Story will start from next part.

Hope u will enjoy the story.

Till then enjoy šŸ’•

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This sounds exciting!

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CHAPTER 1


Hello guys. How are u all .. so let's start the story.

Enjoy reading ā¤ļø


At pandya niwas


9 am in the morning.


Dhara:- jai somnath maa.


Suman:- jai somnath .. yeh mere teen bandar uthe nhi ab tak ..??


Dhara:- aree.. nhi maa.. do to uth ge sirf ik hi nhi utha..


Suman:- kon..?? Krish???


Dhara:- aree nhi maa krish to kab ka college chla gya..aur dev gaumbi ke saath restaurant .. shiva hi nhi utha abhi tak..


Suman:- shiva nhi utha abhi tak .. use hospital nhi jaana aaj ..??? Vrna to roj chala jaata h ab tak.. zara dekh ke to aa bhagodi ke bete abhi tak utha kyo nhi voh.


Dhara:- ji maa.


She was going to wake him up in his room but someone came from her behind and hug her ..

Yes...they were her cute pies ALYNA and AVEER. So gaura has two twins they were very naughty and keep the house enlighten by their naughtiness. They both were 4 or 5 years old..


Alyna&avir:- mumma..mumma .. kahan jaa rhe ho aap..


Dhara:- ( holding them) shiva chachu ko uthane.. chaloge mere saath??


They happily nodded.

They went to Shiva's room and saw him sleeping on his stomach.

They entered the room silently.

They both sat on his back like he was horse for them.


Alyna:- chalo chachu ...


Avir:- tubdak tubdak tubdak ( horse

running sound)

Dhara laughed watching their cute antics.

Shiva woke up..


Shiva:- ohhh.. mere shaitan bacho sone do chachu ko plz..


Avir:- nhi..tubdak tubdak kro( he was jumping on his back)


Shiva:- bhabi plz sone do na.. itne dino baad mujhe as hospital se off mila h ..sone do ..


Dhara:- main kuch nhi keh rhi shiva ab jo bhi kahenge Abir or alyna hi kahenge... ( Chukled)


Finally shiva woke up and kissed his cute pies.


Shiva:- tum logo ko aapne chachu ko uthake hi chain mila na...


They both laughed.


Dhara:- chal shiva tu uth gya h ab fresh ho kar neeche aa ja main breakfast laga deti hu..


Shiva:- ji bhabi..


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In narayan house.


Raavi was so happy today because her dream of working in lifesaving hospital is coming true.. from tomorrow she will provide her service as doctor there.. she was dancing in the room.


Prafulla:- eh raavi subah subah gaane kon bajaata h re.. log bhagwan ka naam lete h or tu gaane baja rhi h..band kr ise..


Raavi:- chalo na masi aap bhi nacho..


Prafulla:- ohh mara bhogilal.. yeh ladki bhi na... Saying this she turned off the speaker..


Raavi:- kya masi..( sadly) aap bhi na ..kal mera sapna pura hora h or aap mujhe celebrate hi nhi krne dere..


Prafulla:- (caressing her cheeks) eh.. main jaanti hu meri bachi ka kal sapna pura ho rha ..main na bohat khush hu tere liye..par is khushi ko kya sirf nach ke celebrate kregi....kuch khana nhi h...aaj mene tera gajar ka halwa bnaya h ..


Raavi:- (exciting)gajar ka halwa..thnku so much masi..i love you..

Saying this she hugged her tightly..

Just then jagat came.


Jagat:- mujhe to tum har bar bhul jaate ho..(fake sad)


Raavi:- are mausapa aesa kuch nhi h..aap bhi aaye na..

They all share a group hug..

Raavi again play the music. She danced madly.


Prafulla:- kitni khush lag rhi h na meri beti...


Jagat:- haan yeh to h ..akhir uska sapna pura ho rha h...jiske liye usne din raat mehnat ki..


Prafulla:- hmm.. somnath hmari bachi ko hmesha ese khush rakhe..


Raavi stopped the music and suddenly realised she has to meet Rishita.


Raavi:- ohhh ..shit..


Jagat and Prafulla :- kya hua???


Raavi:- voh mujhe aaj Rishita se milna tha sham 4 bje... Ab to 3 bj gye..bhaag raavi bhaag ese pehle voh mera mun tod de..

Maasi main jaa rhi hu 6bje tak aa jaungi..

Saying this she ran on her scooty.


Prafulla:- dhayan se jaana...


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Raavi was on her way to meet Rishita when she saw some boys molesting a teenage girl.. she got angry and marched towards them.


Raavi:- ehh.. chodo use...


Boy 1:- nhi chodege ..tu kya kr legi..


Raavi:- main bol rhi hu chod de use warna..


Boy2:- warna kya ... Haan kya kregi tu .. he said while moving toward her


Raavi:- main last time bol rhi hu chod de ise.


Boy2:- was going to hold her but raavi punched him hard on his nose causing blood.

The another boy leave that girl and move toward raavi.. but raavi beat him too.. the boys ran away..


Raavi:- tum thik ho na..


Girl:- hmmm.. thnku di..


Raavi:- ur most welcome but aage se khud defence krna theek h...


Girl:- hmm..


Raavi again started her scooty and went towards her destination. Her thoughts were occupied by those boys only she was feeling hell angry on them..

She was in her thoughts only when a puppy came in front of her scooty ..to save that puppy she drive her scooty to wrong side and got clashed with a boy on bike..


Raavi:- aaahhhh.. dekh nhi chala sakte tum..( still on road)


Boy:- tum nhi dekh kr chala rhi thi..samji..


Raavi:- tum na..aahhh.. ( she was trying to get up but fails)


Boy:-he helped her by picking her and her scooty..


Raavi:- pehle khud takkar mar ke girate ho or fir khud hi help krte ho kaise insaan ho tumm .


Boy:- thnku bolne ki jagan mujhse hi jaghda kr rhi hi..waah...


Raavi:- tummmm...


Boy:- mujhe na tumse koi baat nhi krni... saying this he sat on his bike and went .


Boys'pov:- kitni aajeeb ladki thi ek dum bhuchaal ..acha hua bhagwan chuda diya mujhe usse..


Raavi:- oyeeee..kahan jaa rha h sorry to bol....

Kitna batmeez insan tha..

Chal raavi chod ab tu bhi chal..


She saw the Time it was 4:30 ..

Raavi:- ohhh shit.. itna late ho gya pehle vog chuchundar ladke fir yeh batmeez insaan ne inta late krvadiya..

Rishita toh kha jayegi aaj mujhe... Bhaag raavi bhaag....

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So this was for today ..so how was it?? Is it interesting or not???

And yes whom do you think raavi collide with on the roadšŸ¤”

Please let me know in comments..

Will meet u in new chapter ..till then

Enjoy šŸ’•

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CHAPTER 1


Hello guys. How are u all .. so let's start the story.

Enjoy reading ā¤ļø


At pandya niwas


9 am in the morning.


Dhara:- jai somnath maa.


Suman:- jai somnath .. yeh mere teen bandar uthe nhi ab tak ..??


Dhara:- aree.. nhi maa.. do to uth ge sirf ik hi nhi utha..


Suman:- kon..?? Krish???


Dhara:- aree nhi maa krish to kab ka college chla gya..aur dev gaumbi ke saath restaurant .. shiva hi nhi utha abhi tak..


Suman:- shiva nhi utha abhi tak .. use hospital nhi jaana aaj ..??? Vrna to roj chala jaata h ab tak.. zara dekh ke to aa bhagodi ke bete abhi tak utha kyo nhi voh.


Dhara:- ji maa.


She was going to wake him up in his room but someone came from her behind and hug her ..

Yes...they were her cute pies ALYNA and AVEER. So gaura has two twins they were very naughty and keep the house enlighten by their naughtiness. They both were 4 or 5 years old..


Alyna&avir:- mumma..mumma .. kahan jaa rhe ho aap..


Dhara:- ( holding them) shiva chachu ko uthane.. chaloge mere saath??


They happily nodded.

They went to Shiva's room and saw him sleeping on his stomach.

They entered the room silently.

They both sat on his back like he was horse for them.


Alyna:- chalo chachu ...


Avir:- tubdak tubdak tubdak ( horse

running sound)

Dhara laughed watching their cute antics.

Shiva woke up..


Shiva:- ohhh.. mere shaitan bacho sone do chachu ko plz..


Avir:- nhi..tubdak tubdak kro( he was jumping on his back)


Shiva:- bhabi plz sone do na.. itne dino baad mujhe as hospital se off mila h ..sone do ..


Dhara:- main kuch nhi keh rhi shiva ab jo bhi kahenge Abir or alyna hi kahenge... ( Chukled)


Finally shiva woke up and kissed his cute pies.


Shiva:- tum logo ko aapne chachu ko uthake hi chain mila na...


They both laughed.


Dhara:- chal shiva tu uth gya h ab fresh ho kar neeche aa ja main breakfast laga deti hu..


Shiva:- ji bhabi..


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In narayan house.


Raavi was so happy today because her dream of working in lifesaving hospital is coming true.. from tomorrow she will provide her service as doctor there.. she was dancing in the room.


Prafulla:- eh raavi subah subah gaane kon bajaata h re.. log bhagwan ka naam lete h or tu gaane baja rhi h..band kr ise..


Raavi:- chalo na masi aap bhi nacho..


Prafulla:- ohh mara bhogilal.. yeh ladki bhi na... Saying this she turned off the speaker..


Raavi:- kya masi..( sadly) aap bhi na ..kal mera sapna pura hora h or aap mujhe celebrate hi nhi krne dere..


Prafulla:- (caressing her cheeks) eh.. main jaanti hu meri bachi ka kal sapna pura ho rha ..main na bohat khush hu tere liye..par is khushi ko kya sirf nach ke celebrate kregi....kuch khana nhi h...aaj mene tera gajar ka halwa bnaya h ..


Raavi:- (exciting)gajar ka halwa..thnku so much masi..i love you..

Saying this she hugged her tightly..

Just then jagat came.


Jagat:- mujhe to tum har bar bhul jaate ho..(fake sad)


Raavi:- are mausapa aesa kuch nhi h..aap bhi aaye na..

They all share a group hug..

Raavi again play the music. She danced madly.


Prafulla:- kitni khush lag rhi h na meri beti...


Jagat:- haan yeh to h ..akhir uska sapna pura ho rha h...jiske liye usne din raat mehnat ki..


Prafulla:- hmm.. somnath hmari bachi ko hmesha ese khush rakhe..


Raavi stopped the music and suddenly realised she has to meet Rishita.


Raavi:- ohhh ..shit..


Jagat and Prafulla :- kya hua???


Raavi:- voh mujhe aaj Rishita se milna tha sham 4 bje... Ab to 3 bj gye..bhaag raavi bhaag ese pehle voh mera mun tod de..

Maasi main jaa rhi hu 6bje tak aa jaungi..

Saying this she ran on her scooty.


Prafulla:- dhayan se jaana...


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Raavi was on her way to meet Rishita when she saw some boys molesting a teenage girl.. she got angry and marched towards them.


Raavi:- ehh.. chodo use...


Boy 1:- nhi chodege ..tu kya kr legi..


Raavi:- main bol rhi hu chod de use warna..


Boy2:- warna kya ... Haan kya kregi tu .. he said while moving toward her


Raavi:- main last time bol rhi hu chod de ise.


Boy2:- was going to hold her but raavi punched him hard on his nose causing blood.

The another boy leave that girl and move toward raavi.. but raavi beat him too.. the boys ran away..


Raavi:- tum thik ho na..


Girl:- hmmm.. thnku di..


Raavi:- ur most welcome but aage se khud defence krna theek h...


Girl:- hmm..


Raavi again started her scooty and went towards her destination. Her thoughts were occupied by those boys only she was feeling hell angry on them..

She was in her thoughts only when a puppy came in front of her scooty ..to save that puppy she drive her scooty to wrong side and got clashed with a boy on bike..


Raavi:- aaahhhh.. dekh nhi chala sakte tum..( still on road)


Boy:- tum nhi dekh kr chala rhi thi..samji..


Raavi:- tum na..aahhh.. ( she was trying to get up but fails)


Boy:-he helped her by picking her and her scooty..


Raavi:- pehle khud takkar mar ke girate ho or fir khud hi help krte ho kaise insaan ho tumm .


Boy:- thnku bolne ki jagan mujhse hi jaghda kr rhi hi..waah...


Raavi:- tummmm...


Boy:- mujhe na tumse koi baat nhi krni... saying this he sat on his bike and went .


Boys'pov:- kitni aajeeb ladki thi ek dum bhuchaal ..acha hua bhagwan chuda diya mujhe usse..


Raavi:- oyeeee..kahan jaa rha h sorry to bol....

Kitna batmeez insan tha..

Chal raavi chod ab tu bhi chal..


She saw the Time it was 4:30 ..

Raavi:- ohhh shit.. itna late ho gya pehle vog chuchundar ladke fir yeh batmeez insaan ne inta late krvadiya..

Rishita toh kha jayegi aaj mujhe... Bhaag raavi bhaag....

.......

.......

.....

........


So this was for today ..so how was it?? Is it interesting or not???

And yes whom do you think raavi collide with on the roadšŸ¤”

Please let me know in comments..

Will meet u in new chapter ..till then

Enjoy šŸ’•

Raavi collided with Shiva, how sweet.

So Raavi will start her first day at work in the same hospital as Shiva?

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Raavi collided with Shiva, how sweet.

So Raavi will start her first day at work in the same hospital as Shiva?


Let's see whether we'll find your answer in next chapter or not 🤭🤭

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CHAPTER 2



Hello guys..how r u all..

I am back with a new chapter. Hope you will love it..

Enjoy reading šŸ’•


Scene - A coffee shop.


Raavi hurriedly reached in coffee shop where Rishita was waiting for her. Raavi was tensed because she was late and now Rishita would fight with her.


Raavi:- chal bhaag raavi...dhund rishita kahan h...vaise aaj to tera pitna paakaa h...

She finds Rishita sitting on the table and was surfing on her mobile.


Raavi:- hii... Rishita... Sorry yaar thoda late ho gya.. thoda nhi..bohat jayada..

Rishita didn't respond to her she was still busy in her phone.


Raavi:- yaar itna bhi kya gussa bol to diya sorry ...


Rishita:- hiii.. raavi.. maine dhayan hi nhi diya tu aa kab aayi..???

Raavi was shocked from her normal expressions.


Raavi:- tu gussa nhi h..????


Rishita:- kyu???


Raavi:- areee main itna late aayi.. mujhe laga tu gussa hogi...


Rishita:- areee nhi...ulta nhi main to aaj bohat khush hu...


Raavi:- tuhje kya hogya Rishita tu theek to h 😳.I mean main jab bhi late aati thi tu to itna gussa hoti thi ..to aaj ...kya hua...kahin chot to nhi aa gyi tere sar pe...


Rishita:- aeee..raavi jayada melodrama mat kr samjhi.. or tera to har baar ka h late aana ..kisne na kise se ladti to rehti h tu..aaj bhi kise ko dho ke aai hogi ..


Raavi:- (embarrassed) hmm..yeh to h.. yaar aaj pta kya hua???


Rishita:- hmm bol ( curiously)


Raavi:- pehle kuch chuchundar ko aaj raste main dho ke aai hu.. ladki ko tang kr rhe the ...fir puppy ko bachane ke chakkar main accident ho gya mera...


Rishita:- kyaaaa.. accident ..kahi lagi to nhi tujhe...??? 😨


Raavi:- areee nhi yaar kahi nhi lagi..par jiske saath clash hui bike voh banda bada ajeeb tha like sorry bhi nhi bola usne mujhe ulta mujhse hi jaghda krne laga voh... Bhootnath kahi ka...


Rishita:- hainn.. Bhootnath???


Raavi:- aur nhi to kya.. Bhootnath hi tha jab main usse thang se baat krne lagi tab tak to gayab hi hogya bhoot ki tarah...bada ajeeb sa tha voh..kapde bade ajeeb se pehn rakhe the..ik dum dirty type.. acha hua picha chut gya mera...


Rishita:- kya pta somnath main phir se takra jaaye tu usse...🤭


Raavi:- naa....baba ... Naa esa kabhi na ho.. mujhe nhi milna Bhootnath jaise insaan se..


Rishita:- acha acha theek h..


Raavi:- acha tu bta tu aaj kyo itna khush h???


Rishita:- raavi baat hi kuch aisi h ..šŸ™ˆ


Raavi:- ahmm ahmm.. dev se related na????


Rishita:- hmm.. tujhe kaise pta????


Raavi:- yeh tere cheeks dekh kaise tamatar ki tarah laal ho rhe h....


Rishita:-(embarrassed šŸ™ˆ) voh kal na dev mujhe propose krne vala h..or to aur aapni family se bhi milvane vala h... I'm so excited..


Raavi:- aree vaah congratulations bestie...


Rishita:- mera liye toh double khushi ka mauka h...


Raavi:- double khushi kaise???


Rishita:- ek taraf kal dev ki family se milna h aur dusri taraf meri best friend ka kal dream pura ho rha h doctor bnne ka.. I'm so happy for u raavi..u deserved this ...


Raavi:- thnku yaar..


Then spent their sometimes in chitchatting and then they head towards their homes.


Rishita:- byee raavi...and best of luck. ..


Raavi:- same to u darling.. ik kaam krna kal sham ko 7 bje tu mere ghar aa jana..main btaungi ki kaise rha mera first day or tu dev ke baare main .... theek h..


Rishita:- done... Byee..


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At night

Pandya niwas .


All were having their dinner in the hall...


Suman:- ( watching an injury on Shiva's arm) aee..shiva yeh chot kaise aai tujhe???


All :- chot ..kahan , kaise kab???

All were bombarding questions on shiva..


Shiva:- aree.. shant shant ..choti si to chot h...


Dhara:- mana choti si hi but aai kaise..????


Shiva:- voh.. Bhabi aaj accident hi gya tha mera..


Dhara and all:- kyaaaa??? Kaise???


Shiva:- aree aap sab fir shuru ho gye.. chota sa tha accident..


Gaumbi:- to yeh bta kaise hua tera accident???


Shiva:- aree kuch nhi gaumbi..ek chalte firte bhuchaal se takar ho gyi..


Krish:- chalta firta bhuchaal ???? Tu kya bol rha h shiva..kuch samaj nhi aa raha...


Shiva:- aree..mera matlab ek ladki ke saath accident ho gya tha voh wrong side se aa rhi ..to turn lete waqt hmari takkar ho gyi..bas..


Dev:- to fir chalta firta bhuchaal kya h???


Shiva:- aree voh ladki..h na..voh ekduk bhuchaal thi ... matlab wrong side se aake takra gyi ...aur mujhse hi jaghdne lagi..kehti sorry bol..


Suman:- yeh kya baat hui.. galti khud ki aur sorry tujhe keh rhi thi bolne ko..badi ajeeb si ladki h ...


Shiva:- hmm..vohi to.. lagta tha kisi se lad ke aa rhi thi or gussa mujhpar nikal diya..šŸ™„


Krish:- vaise ik baat bolu bhai..


Shiva:- hmm..


Krish:- jis hisab se tu bta rha h na.. mujhe to voh ladki ek dum tufaan lag rhi h...soch agar firse takra gyi tujhse..????🤭


Shiva:- naa baba naaa..esa firse na ho...


All laugh..


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Morning in pandya niwas.

Time- 8 am.


Shiva got ready .. He wore light blue shirt with black formal pant. He was looking dashing.

He went down to the hall with his apron ( doctors coat) in one hand .


Suman:- aree shiva aaj inti jaldi jaana h hospital???


Shiva:- ji maa.. aaj kuch naye doctors join kr rhe h so kuch arrangements krni h unke welcome ke liye..isliye..


Suman:- achaa..nashta kr ke jaana..


Shiva:- ji maa..


After having breakfast he went to hospital.


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In narayan house.


Raavi was all set to go to her dream place ..she was wearing green kurti with blue jeans. As her hair were long so she did a simple ponytail. She wants to look decent in the hospital.

After getting ready she went down in hall to meet mausa pa and maasi..


Prafulla:- aa gyi meri dikri.. bohat sundar lag rhi tu..kisi ki nazar na lage...( Kissing her forehead)


Jagat:-(handling her apron) ab lag rhi h na meri beti ik dum doctor raavi..


Raavi:- (smiling) thank you mausa pa and maasi.. agar aap dono nhi hote to main kabhi yahan is position par nhi hoti..thnku so much.. i love you.


Jagat & Prafulla:- we love you too..


Then prafulla did her tilak and bid her adieu..


Prafulla:- dhayan se jaana ..


Raavi:- jii maasi...


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In lifesaving hospital.


Raavi was standing in front of the main door ..she was becoming emotional because her childhood dream was today becoming true..

She entered the hospital to meet DR.RAMAN ( senior most doctor of the hospital , he was also the owner of the hospital)

As she was going towards her cabin .. her feet got twist and she was about to fall on floor but someone holds from her waist.


Raavi:- aahhh..


Shiva:- (holding her) tum theek ho na..???


Raavi:-(didn't looking towards him as her head was facing ground) hmm..

She stand straight and look at shiva..


Shivi:- tumm.....???


Shiva:- tum.. yahan kya kr rhi ho???


Raavi:- tumse matlab ..main kuch bhi karo yahan..( pointing her finger towards him).


Shiva's pov:-

As i was going to meet Dr . Raman i saw a girl falling on ground .. I ran towards her and saved her from falling.. when i saw her face i was shocked to see that same girl..yeh krish ki jubaan kitni kaali h...kal hi bola tha voh.. aur aaj hi takra hi gyi...


Raavi's pov:-

I was going to fall but someone holds me from my waist ..I felt relaxed .. but the next moment when that person called me i was shocked to see him.. Bhootnath..ohh shit.. Rishita...teri kaali jubaan ....


Shiva:- tum na thang se baat kro.. mujhse samji.. girne se bachaya h maine tumhe.. thnku bolo..


Raavi:- thnku voh bhi tujh jaise Bhootnath ko...


Shiva:- tune mujhe Bhootnath bola..???😔


Raavi:- hmm..tum ho hi Bhoothnath ..jab kal sorry bolne ki baari aai tu bhoot ki tarah gayab ho gye tum...


Shiva:- ohhh..madam main kyu sorry bolu... tum wrong side se aa rhi thi..samji chipkali..


Raavi:- chipkali 😨..(she holds his shirt tightly and hugged him.)

Kahan h chipkali???


Shiva:- (he was shocked from her reaction.)

Tu hi to h... chipkali...🤭


Raavi:- main voh bhi chipkali..kis angle se haan ( irritatingly)..


Shiva:- dekh kaise chipkali ki tarah chipki hui h mujhse...


Raavi:- (she step back) vo..vo...


Shiva:- ainda se shakal mat dikhana aapni..samji..


Raavi:- aur tu bhi...


They went in opposite direction.





The end ā£ļø


So how was it ??? Do you like rishita and raavi bonding?? And how was shivi's second meet ??

Do let me know your feelings in comments after reading this chapter.. guys plz do comments because agar aap comment hi nhi karoge to mujhe kaise pta chalega ki aapko story pasand aa bhi rhi h ya nhi .... So do comments also...

Will meet u in new chapter . Till then

Enjoy šŸ’•

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CHAPTER 3



Hello guys... I'm back with the 3rd chapter .. hope u will like it.

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Scene :- Lifesaving hospital , Dr. Raman cabin.


Raavi's pov:- is Bhootnath ne na sara mood spoil kr diya mera...chii..upar se yeh Rishita ki kaali zubaan..milne do aaj sham ko use to main btaungi...

Chal raavi cool down.. aapne kaam pe focus de..chod is Bhootnath ke baare main sochna..


She enter in the cabin.


Raavi:- Good morning Dr.


Dr.Raman :- Hii..good morning Dr. Raavi.. how r u ???


Raavi:- I am perfectly fine sir..what about u ???


Dr. Raman:- I am fine too.. by the way.. mera cabin dhundne ( find) krne main koi dikkat to nhi hui..????


Raavi:- no sir..( smiling).


Dr. Raman:- okk .. that's good.. Raavi u have to reach auditorium in next 10 minutes because there is welcome ceremony of new doctors in the hospital.. the auditorium is on second floor.


Raavi:- ok. Thnku sir.


Dr. Raman:- and yes one more thing after the ceremony u come to my cabin I'll assign u the work .. okkay ??


Raavi:- sure sir ..


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In auditorium


She leaves to the auditorium. She settle herself on the second row of the chair.

First Dr. Raman gave a welcome speech and then he calls another senior doctor of the hospital.


Dr. Raman:- Now i would like to call our most hardworking heart surgeon doctor. Shiva pandya .


Raavi was excited to see this hardworking doctor who was a heart surgeon too.

Then comes shiva on the stage. Raavi was shocked to see him..


Raavi:- yeh yahan bhi...or kya dr.shiva pandya??? ( She said slowly but her colleagues listened it and gave her a questionable look)


Raavi's pov:-

Jab dr. Raman ne bola heart surgeon doctor or voh bhi hardworking .. i was excited to watch him.. but when that doctor came on the stage I was shocked to see that Bhootnath on the stage.. mujhe laga kahi main sapna to nhi dekh rhi.. mere reaction mere colleagues doctor ne bhi note kiye or pucha kya hua but maine topic hi change kr diya... Hey bhagwan kahan fasa diya mujhe... When i was busy in my lines of thoughts i listened Bhootnath aka..Dr.shiva pandya was giving his speech ..to be honest from his speech i found him hardworking and dedicated doctor.. par fir bhi..mujhe nhi pta main kya feel kr rhi hu is waqt..


Now the ceremony was finished it's time to reach dr raman cabin.

Raavi hurriedly move towards his cabin because she don't want to meet shiva again.


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Dr. Raman Cabin


Raavi knocked the door and asked may i come in sir??


Dr .raman:- yes come in.


She entered the room and saw shiva sitting next to dr. Raman.

Both were shocked to see each other.


Dr.raman:- aaye Dr. Raavi.


( Now it's time for Shiva's shock)


Shiva's pov:-

Main aur dr. Raman kuch discuss kr rhe the ki door pe knock hui.. to dr ne unhe andar bulaya i was shocked to see chipkali standing in front of me.. but i got double shock when dr. Raman called her Dr. Raavi . Chipkali doctor h ??? Kyaa..yaar... I came out of thoughts when i saw them conversing with each other.


Dr. Raman:- to Dr. Raavi yeh h dr. Shiva ( pointing towards him) vaise tum ne enhe pehle dekha hoga auditorium mein hi..


Raavi:- jii.. doctor..


Dr. Raman:- he is very hardworking and dedicated doctor..


Both shiva and raavi were glaring at each other where as shiva was passing smirks to raavi so that she came to know about his abilities.


Dr. Raman:- So today i want u to assist Dr. Shiva in two surgeries today ..


Shivi:- whattttt????


Dr. Raman:- kya hua tum dono ko...???


Shivi:- nhi...kuch nhi..


Shiva:- Dr. Mujhe iske saath kam nhi krna..


Raavi:- mujhe bhi koi shok nhi h tujhe assist krne ka...


Dr. Raman:- Dr. Raavi is it a way to speak with ur senior doctor??


Raavi:- (embarrassed) sorry doctor..


Dr. Raman:- aur tujhe kya hua shiva tujhe kyu nhi dr. Raavi ke saath kam krna.. she is an intelligent girl and she is too dedicated towards her profession like u...


Now it's time for raavi to smirk.


Shiva:- vo..vo..


Dr. Raman:- mujhe kuch nhi sun na tum dono aaj saath main hi surgery kroge.. is that okay??


Shivi:- yes doctor.


Dr. Raman:- now you may leave.


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They both came out from the cabin.


Raavi:- kahan fasa diya bhagwan Bhootnath ke saath ??( Murmuring)


Shiva:- eh... Mujhe na sab sunai de rha h samji... or yeh kya Bhootnath bol rhi h mujhe.. Dr. SHIVA PANDYA. bula ya fir sir bula mujhe samji..


Raavi:- ha.. ha..ha.. main vo bhi tujhe sir bulau..( mocking)


Shiva:- haan bula... tu jaanti h na main tera senior hu???


Raavi:- hmmm jaanti hu.. or main na tujhe sir vir nhi bulaungi.. sirf dr. Shiva hi bolaungi..


Shiva:- yeh hui na baat ...chipkali...


Raavi:- tu bhi na mujhe chipkali mat bula samjha.. DR.RAAVI bula ...


Shiva:- haa. .haan theek h but sirf hospital main bahar to chipkali hi bulaunga..


Raavi:- haan to tujhe kya laga main bahar bhi tujhe doctor shiva bulaungi..nhi... Bhootnath bulaungi main bhi..(chukle)


Shiva:- chal ab surgery krne chale..


Raavi:- haan.


It took them 7 hours for two surgery.. they both didn't fight with each other during surgery..


Raavi's pov:- vaise sahi keh rhe the doctor Raman... H to yeh Bhootnath determined hi.. jab sab ne hope chod di thi ki surgery successful nhi hogi..to esne nhi chodi..baat to h bande main..


Shiva's Pov:- raavi kaafi intelligent h..yeh to saaf dikhta h iske kaam main..har kaam ikdum soch samajkar krti h ... Or to aur aaj iski life ki pehli surgery thi ..but yeh bilkul nhi ghabrayi..( nervous) ik dum confidently sab kaam kiya isne.. itni bhi buri nhi h chipkali..


Shiva:- canteen chale??? Bhook lagi hogi tumhe???


Raavi:- hmm.. bhook to lgi h..but actually mujhe abhi news mili ki general ward main koi doctor nhi h..or vahan doctor ki need h to main vahan jaati hu...or vaise bhi ab to ghar jaane ka time ho gya h...vahan check up krke sidha ghar jaungi..masi intzar kar rhi hogi mera.. tum chale jao canteen..


Shiva:- kitna bolti h tu.....sirf yeh pucha canteen jaana h usme main itna bada reason de diya..maine pucha tha kyu nhi aana..par nhi tumhe to.. sirf bolna hi h...


Raavi:- ( angrily) making o like face..to kisne bola tha chup chap sunne ke liye chale kyu nhi gye fir???


Shiva:- he was going to say something..


Raavi:- mujhe na koi baat nhi krni tumse ..( saying this she leaves from there).


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In narayan house


Raavi reached home by 5:30 pm.


Prafulla:- aa gyi meri bachi ... Kaisa rha tera pehla din..


Raavi:- bohat acha..masi main na bohat thak gyi hun.. aapne room main jaa rhi hu..chai de dena bna ke plz..


Prafulla:- haan... theek h..


Raavi in her room..

She opened her room and directly fall on her bed..

Raavi's pov:- thak gyi main...par aaj ka din kitna acha tha mera sapna pura ho gya..or to aur aaj maine do surgeries bhi ki..hmm manti hu us Bhootnath ne ki..par maine assist to kiya..yeh hi bohat badi baat h... finally raavi tu aapne har dreams pure(fulfill) kregi..


She got freshen up..and was waiting for Rishita.


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At pandya niwas.


Shiva reached home by 6pm. He was continuously calling krish..


Shiva:- krish....krish...krish.. kahan mar gya tu????


Dhara:- kya hua shiva itna chilla kyu rha h tu???


Shiva:- bhabi pehle krish ko aane do fir btata hu... Hain kahan voh. ..


Dhara:- aapne room main hi h voh...


Shiva:- krish..krish...niche aaa...Jaldi aa vrna acha nhi hoga tere liye....




The end ā£ļø


Sorry for the grammatical mistakes..


So how was it?? Do you loving this story or not??? Aur shiva kyu krish ko bula rha h any guesses.. kaisi lagi aaj ki shivi ki pehli conversation( i know pehli nhi h but aaj dono ne thang se baat ki na.. to is hisab se to pehli conversation hui na🤭)


Aaj ke liye bohat ho gya..chalo milte h fir next chapter main tab tak ke liye


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CHAPTER 4



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In pandya niwas

Shiva was shouting for krish in the whole house..


Shiva:- tu niche aa raha h ya main aau uper???( Shouting)

Just then krish came down .


Krish:- kya hua bhai itna chilla kyu raha h???


Shiva:- (he ran towards him... ) Ruk main btata hu tujhe ...kaali jubaan...


Krish:-( while running) ohh bhai...kya hogya..kyu marne ko bhag rha h tu...


Shiva:- ( he catch him from his collar ) haan....ab bol kal kya bola tha???


Krish:-(scared) kya???


Shiva:- ki.. meri us chipkali ke saath fir se takkar ho...


Krish:- abee yaar kon chipkali..maine kab bola esa...???


Shiva:- kyu bhul gya...kal hi to bol rha tha raat ko ..jab maine accident ke baare main btaya tha....


Krish:- achaaaa.. voh. . sach main takkar ho gyi teri aaj uss se????(curiously)


Shiva:- (hitting him on his head) hnnn..takkar chod ...aaj to saath main hi surgery ki h ...


By then everyone gather in the hall..


Dev:- kya hua??? Itna shor kyu macha rakha h tum dono ne???


Krish:- aree bhai.. shiva aaj firse takraya us ladki ke saath..


Everyone:- kya??( Shocked)


Krish:- pehle yeh bta yeh chipkali kon ... H..tu to kal chalta firta bhuchaal bol rha tha usse..???


Shiva:- ab kaise btau aaj subah kya hua tha...yeh mujhe hi galat samajenge...( Murmuring)


Krish:- kya..bola.. kya bola???


Shiva:- nhii...kuch...nhi... Or tu kya kab se ladki ladki kr rha h....uska naam Dr.RAAVI. h... Samja...


Everyone:- doctor???


Shiva:- hmm voh bhi doctor h...aur to aur mere hi hospital main...( Irritatingly)


Dhara:- to tu... Itna irrirate ho ke kyu bol rha h??? Achi doctor nhi h voh...???


Shiva:- nhi.. esa nhi... Bohat intelligent doctor h... ekdum mast( smiling)


Everyone was giving him teasing look..


Krish:- mast????? Or voh chipkali...


Shiva:- tu fir bola... Maine bola na uska naam raavi h..( angry)


Krish:- haan haan theek h bhai raavi...tu itna kyu gussa ho rha h...


Shiva:- aree.. sorry yaar... Voh na bohat chapad chapad krti h ... Sir ( head) main dard kr diya aaj usne...pta nhi roz kya haal hoga mera ab.... Bhabi ik kadak chai bnado plz...


Dhara :- hmm.. bnati hu.. vaise shiva jis hisab se tu bta rha h...raavi to mujhe cute si bubbly si lag rhi..


Shiva:- kya...bhabi aap bhi... cute voh bhi voh...ik dum chipkali h... Voh..


Everyone chuckled..


Krish:- ho..na ..ho shiva ik din tum dono saath hoge... Dekh na kaise ik din main hi tujhe ghuma diya usne....


Shiva:- tu na apna dimag or zubaan kam chalaya kr..samja or aisa kabhi nhi hone wala....


Krish:- voh to waqt hi btayega..( saying this he ran).


Shiva:- yeh krish na kuch bhi bolta h...


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In narayan house.

Raavi was waiting for Rishita..in her room..


Rishita:- (excitingly) raavi...raavi... Ohh meri jaan...


Raavi:- (pushing her) door ho ja..chudail..


Rishita:- 😲chudail voh bhi main???


Raavi:- chudail nhi to aur kya h .. tu???


Rishita:- par maine kya kiya???


Raavi:- tune kuch nhi kiya par teri jo yeh kaali jubaan h usne bohat kuch kiya h...


Rishita:- kya .. keh rhi h ...tu???


Raavi:- yeh jo kal tu bhonki thi na...ki main us Bhootnath se firse takrau...voh sach ho gya aaj...


Rishita:- kya?????(shocked cum amused)


Raavi:- tu hass kyu rhi h????


Rishita:- nhi...kuch nhi...yaar ..matlab meri zuban sach main kaali h...


Raavi:- tujhe nhi lagta ???


Rishita:- par bta to kaise takrai...


Raavi explained her whole story of the hospital..


Rishita:- iska matlab voh Bhootnath doctor h...


Raavi:- hmm..btw Bhootnath nhi ...shiva naam h uska...


Rishita:- hmm..shiva..vaise tu badi side le rhi h uski..( teasing her)


Raavi:- esa kuch nhi..h... To bta kaise rha tera aaj ka special din..


Rishita:- bohat acha...yaar dev ki family bohat achi.. mujhe bohat acha feel hua unse milke ..


Raavi:- that's good..vaise kon kon h uski family main..


Rishita:- uski family main maa, bhaiya or bhabi , do chote bhai or do cute se bhaiya or bhabi ke kids..


Raavi:- ohh..wow..fir madam shadi kab krni h ??


Rishita:- yaar dev ki family vale bol rhe the ki voh log mere parents se milke ek baar engagement kr denge ...fir one month baad shaadi..šŸ™ˆ


Raavi:- ohh ho..kaise Sharma rhi h tu???.. engagement isi month main krni h fir???


Rishita:- nhi .. yaar actually bhaiya keh rhe the ki unhe renovation krvani h ghar ki..tu voh next week se shuru hogi... jab renovation ka kaam ho jayega tab engagement krdenge...

Filhal to voh abhi new ghar dhund rhe h...rehne ke liye..


Raavi:- achaa..to hmare saath wala ghar khali h...to voh dikha de. .tu..ise bahane roz dev se milne aa jana...tu .. ( smiling)


Rishita:- hmm..main bhi yehi soch rhi thi ... esa krti hu dev se baat krungi kal..


Raavi:- hmmm... Theek h..


Then they spent some time together and Rishita went back to her home..


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One week has passed happily.. shiva and raavi still bicker with each other but they do their work professionally.. they only meet in hospital ..they never did any outing or hang outs together.. although they are comfortable now with each other but then also they didn't spend their time together outside the hospital.


Raavi was in general ward when she received call from Rishita..


Raavi:- hello..haan rish..


Rishita:- hello raavi...kaise h??


Raavi:- hmm theek hu..


Rishita:- tu free h abhi..???


Raavi:- haan..bol...


Rishita:- raavi aaj sham tu mere aur dev ke saath dinner par chalegi??


Raavi:- main .. par kyu???


Rishita:- aree yaar chal na enjoy krenge..tujhe dev se milvati hu..aaj.. mana mat krna plz chalna saath mere...


Raavi:- are yaar..par dev ko kaisa lagega..


Rishita:- areee..tu dev ki chinta mat kar..main samja dungi usse.. tu bas 8 bje ready rehna main tujhe tere ghar se pick krlungi..theek h..


Raavi:- hmm ..theek h..


Rishita:- bye.. I love you..


Raavi:- i love you too..


On the other hand shiva received call from dev..


Shiva:- haan dev..


Dev:- shiva ik kaam tha..


Shiva:- hmmm...bol..


Dev:- yaar aaj tujhe mere saath bahar dinner pe chalna h ... Rishita bhi hogi saath..


Shiva:- yaar meri kya jaroorat h?? Tum dono enjoy kro...main nhi aa raha..


Dev:- aree shiva..tu chal ..ghar main sirf tu hi reh gya jis se Rishita nhi mili..tu chl plz..


Shiva:- yaar main tum dono ke sath kya krunga akela??


Dev:- achaa...ab samaj mein aaya ..tujhe bhi partner chahiye..šŸ˜


Shiva:- aree yaar esa kuch nhi ...h.. yaar main na kabaab main haddi Lagunga tum dono ke beech...


Dev:- tu na jayada mat soch..vaise bhi Rishita ke saath uski best friend aa rhi h .. chahiye tu use aapna partner bna lena.. fir tu nhi bnega kabab main haddi..🤭


Shiva:- šŸ˜’dekh tu esa bolega na..to main nhi aa raha..tu jaa..


Dev:- sorry yaar main to majak kr rha tha...plz chalna..


Shiva:- hmm ab aaya na line pe..


Dev:- to theek h..ghar jaldi aa jana. Raat ko 8 bje chalenge.. theek h.


Shiva:- okk.. byee..




The end ā£ļø


So this was for today..how was it??? Do let me know in the comments..

Aur haan..kaisa hoga shiva aur raavi ka reaction jab voh milenge restaurant main...in the next chapter I'll introduce miraj ..so get ready ..

To fir milte h naye chapter main...tab tak ke liye..

Enjoy and stay safe šŸ’•

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