FF: I can't take it anymore! *Part 6 in pg 9*

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Hello guys. My name is Kayathre and I am from Malaysia. I am a Tamilian by the way! I started watching YRKKH since Gen3 because of Harshad cause I am following him since Bepannah and wanted to see the character that he portrays here and to say that I am in love in the least, I am OBSESSED WITH BOTH HARSHAD AND PRANALI. I can't watch my babies cry everyday and definitely not when they are about get married. So, here you go! This is my take.


It is a little different from what they showed. I can't watch Akshara like that. My heart hurts for her and yes I am on Akshara's side on this. Abhi's anger is totally justified but his anger has always been the reason for his downfall and it will be in this TS. NO hate please cause it was my first time writing something cause I can't watch them like this. Both are right and wrong in this. Hope you have a good read.


She couldn’t take it anymore. Her head was repeating whatever happened downstairs like a movie scene; the false accusation, disgusting glares, threats to put her behind the bars and all those bitter words that were thrown at her without realizing what damage it could cause to her and her fragile heart that has suffered every single time. But what tore her into pieces and has her questioning her love was that Abhimanyu, her Abhi did not trust her words, did not want to hear a single word from her. It broke her into a million pieces because she expected him to listen, to want to know the full truth from her. And what she couldn’t understand was that, why is he reacting so aggressively few days after hearing the truth from her in the hospital because she clearly remembers that he said that he doesn’t want to talk about the accident anymore since they were going forward and starting a new chapter in their life.


Her head started hurting from all those screams and crying but what her heart was going through was a million times worse than the physical pain in her head. She couldn’t believe that no one believed her and blamed her for hiding Aarohi’s misdeed from everyone. She did not expect Aarohi to stand quietly and watch everyone degrades her for her mistake. Just when she thought her heart was broken, her heart shattered after reading the message that she received from Abhi.


“I can’t marry someone who can’t stand with the truth, who lies to save someone who is not worth your love. I am breaking off this marriage.”


Everything stopped for a second. She could not believe what her eyes were reading. Akshara could hear her heartbeat so clearly as tears were dropping nonstop rereading the message hoping it was a horrible nightmare that she wishes to wake up from.


Kairav entered the room and his heart broke for his angel like sister because he knows that she doesn’t deserve any of the nasty comments thrown at her downstairs few minutes earlier by everyone from Birla’s and Goenka’s after Abhimanyu came and told everyone the truth of the accident.

Kairav: “Akshu” ……


Nor did Akshara reply or looked at him. Her gaze was fixed on the message that was sent to her few minutes earlier.


He crouched down next to her and start caressing her hair softly and said “Akshu, it is not your fault, we will fix this. I will talk to Abhimanyu and ask him to listen to you and allow you to explain on what actually happened. Don’t cry bacha, it hurts me to see you like this.”


She slowly lifted her eyes full of tears that were threatening to pour out any second and wobbled Bhaiya...


There and then she broke down completely. Crying and tormenting her faith for always being cruel to her since young. First, losing her birth mother, father and then the woman who gave her to love of a mother. Listening to Aarohi’s taunt since young and taking the blame for being her mother’s murderer although she did nothing. Then leaving her own home for her sister’s comfort and living like an orphan for 3 years just so her sister could find the heart to forgive her although it was no mistake of hers on what happened that day in the temple. Kairav’s heart wretched looking at his sister crying hysterically but he did not want to stop her. She needed to let out all the pain that she has been carrying in her for almost 12 years. Just when she thought, she has received her biggest blessing from her parents, Abhimanyu, it got snatched cause why; her sister (whom she vowed to take care of to their mother) ended up liking the same guy as her. Telling herself constantly not to cry and breakdown; she rejected him bluntly because she was emotionally blackmailed by her sister whom she loved more than anything. Watching them perform every single ritual of their wedding further broke her but she stood strong cause she was finally fulfilling the promise she made to the person who nurtured her and equally loved her and never once saw her as a step daughter. Then Abhimanyu’s threat to suicide shook her to the core, she couldn’t watch the man that she didn’t think she could ever love more than her sister trying to kill himself because he found out the truth of the fire incident and demanded answers from her. She gave in and declared her undying love for him. Then started the war between two families and yet she took the most burnt for voicing out her feelings and thoughts for the first time. After endless arguments and misunderstand, she finally got the blessing of both family for their wedding but the accident has totally ruined everything for everyone. She cried for her ill fate, for her parents, for her feelings not being respected, for the constant tug of war that she was in the middle of, for Abhi, for her Manjari maa who she loved and respected just like her own mother, the guilt of not checking whom Aarohi hit the other day, for not talking to Abhimanyu face to face, for always facing the burnt of everyone’s act of selfishness. She cried wanting to be embraced by her parents and to let her know that everything will be alright and they are there for her.


Kairav was astonished by his sister’s breakdown. He saw the phone that was on her hands and took it to know what was the reason for breakdown. He couldn’t believe what he saw in that phone. His eyes widened in anger and shock to see what has Abhimanyu sent his sister. He turned to let his Akshu know that her bhaiya is there and would not let anything wrong happen anymore and the sight shocked him. His baby sister that he loved more than anything was trembling and shaking like a leaf and was struggling to take a breather.

Akshuuuuuuuuu

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Amazingly written. please please update soo, so excited for the next part🤩🤩

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Will do once I see tomorrow’s episode! I hope Abhi proves me wrong by joining all the dots and not be an idiot in anger! Thank youuuu ❤️

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Hey , I am new here but loved this chapter a lot. Do update soonish please 😳

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Hey guysss! Sorry, was kinda busy finishing up my assignment. I am currently in the middle of my semester doing my degree and my lecturer is coming for my neck plus I am not from India so the timing is also a little different here and wanted to update a little later but couldn't stop myself from finishing up this part. Like I said previously both Abhi and Akshu are right in their own way. There will be a redemption track for both and looks like it is no more a TS but more of a SS or even FF. Hope you like the chapter. Do leave your imagination track, maybe I can incorporate them into the story. Do leave your comments and don't forget to like. Love y'all. Have a good read.






Part 2

Abhimanyu was pacing left and right in his room; feeling all restless, almost kind of sick. He can’t comprehend anything that is happening right now. His mind is running over every single thing that has happened ever since the accident. He can’t get out of the image of Akshara crying and begging him to listen to her.


“Aaarghhhhhhhhh!”, he shouted.


He felt so frustrated from within and he is not feeling too good as well as though something bad has happened. He knows that it has something to do with Akshu, no Akshara. He can feel a surge of anger coursing through his vein remembering what she did. Hiding the truth of her pyaari sister “Aaru” who doesn’t deserve an ounce of her love and care and most importantly leaving his mother to die after hitting her. It doesn’t matter who was hit by their car; it is still wrong. She didn’t get down to check if they hit anyone just because her sister said so.


If Aarohi thinks that she can put all the blame on Akshara and sneak away without being punished, she had another thing coming her way. He was going to destroy the very same thing she loves more than anything in this world; her career.


As Abhi was mentally making plans on making Aarohi regret her very existence, Neil burst into his room without knocking.


Abhi: Neil, I am not in a mood to talk! Just leave me alone for tonight.


Neil: Bhai, I will leave but after asking you one question.


Abhi looked at Neil to let him know to continue what he was going to say.


Neil: Why didn’t you allow Bhabhi to explain herself?


Abhi looked at Neil as though he has grown two horns on his head.


Abhi: Neil, are you freaking serious right now? You heard her yourself. They actually hit maa and left her there without bothering to check. Do you really think I want to hear anything from her or that manipulative sister of hers?! I don’t even want to say her name out loud. I feel like straggling her with my bare hands every time I think about that selfish and shameless girl. I have heard enough to know what is the truth and you want to know what is it? Akshara is an accomplice in the attempt murder of my maa. That’s it. Abhimanyu's anger was really getting the best out of him.


Neil stared at his bhai intensely for a moment before continuing, “Don’t you think you should have at least let her explain herself and allow her to narrate what actually happened on that day and why were they even involved in an accident in the first place? Don’t you think that you owe Bhabhi that much to allow her to speak before jumping into any conclusion? Yes, they hit maa and they didn’t check. But what exactly happened? Are you really going to believe half cooked stories and accusation thrown by Harsh uncle and taiji against Bhabhi? Are you not going to ask her yourself what actually happened? Did you even hear her out when she was yelling in Goenka’s mansion asking everyone to believe her words and what she was saying? Did you? Is your love that weak?” asked Neil very calmly without provoking his brother’s world famous anger.


Abhimanyu just stood still with no answer and hurt after Neil questioned his love for Akshara and looked at Neil feeling a little weird after being questioned by his baby brother.


Abhi: “I urm… she told in front of all… she accepted,” he mumbled out spacing out thinking about the scene that happened today at her house.


Neil: “what are you mumbling bhai? Answer me, c’mon! Tell me that you heard what she wanted to tell you? Did you? No, you didn’t. As usual you allowed your anger to get the worst out of you. Did you even realize how miserable she looked in the midst of the crowd spewing hatred left and right and no one to support her and allow her to speak?” slowly voicing out his thoughts on what happened today.


He felt extremely bad for his Bhabhi as he knows that she is never the type who is selfish and would flee from an accident spot. His heart went out to her when no one was ready to listen to her and were ready to put all the blame on her without any remorse. He was not going to sit quietly and watch his bhabhi getting tormented like that. He is going to fix it and for that he is going to need his bhai to calm down and think with a straight head. Then, they are going to solve this mess together. He has his doubts on a few people based on what his bhabhi was trying to say just now. Let's just hope his hunch is right.


Abhi recalled how she looked earlier that day. She was standing all alone, crying her heart out, begging for someone to hear her out. Her face was swollen from crying too much (the confrontation does happen alone and he took her to Goenka mansion and dropped the bomb there with everyone present). She looked extremely tired and weak.


Warning alarm were blaring in his head, is she okay? What if something has happened to her? She didn’t look too steady either as she was swaying slightly while trying to explain what happened. Shitttt! His heart was now beating too fast thinking if anything bad has happened to her especially after the message that he just sent before Neil barged into the room. He sent it in a spite to hurt her and to let her feel the pain that he was going through at the moment. THE MESSAGE! NOOOOO. NOT THE MESSAGE. He realized the grave of his mistake.


Did I really break off my marriage?


Was our love that weak?


Was I really going to break my relationship with Akshara?


Can I live without her?


Will I be able to move on?


What will happen now?


Did she saw my message?


Will she walk out of the wedding now?


Did I do a mistake by not letting her explain?


What if I misunderstood Akshara?



Is this the end?



He started remembering bits and pieces of sentences that she was trying to tell her before he roughly shoved her in the jungle earlier that day.


Aaru took some pills…she wasn’t in the right state of mind. She drove off from the hospital and I ran after the car and got in.


You are my everything Abhi. Call me Akshu please. Not Akshara. I am not lying Abhi, I told you the truth. In the hospital…I told you. JHOOT MAT BOLO AKSHARA. YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING ABHI. Don't leave me Abhi. Don't call me Akshara. YOU ARE MY EVERYTHING!


He could hear everything so clearly out of sudden. Her pleas to not leave her stranded, to not give up on their love, to not walk away without hearing her. He could hear himself shouting her, shoving her and most importantly not listening to her.


He started recalling what happened in the hospital. He remembers walking out of the ward room for an emergency case and meeting Akshara when he got out of the OT. She looked all disturbed and her nose was red as though she was crying.


Did she actually tell to truth?


But to whom? It was not me.


Was there everyone else other than me?



Realization dawned upon him.


Abhi looked at Neil and Neil understood his bhai; immediately grabbed the car keys as they started running out of the room. Abhi was praying to his Mahadev for all these to be a bad nightmare and hoping that Akshu haven’t seen her phone. But it was too late.













In Sunway Hospital

Doctor Sanam: I don’t want to lie to you. She is under so much stress. She also has a small concussion that was left untreated on the left side of her forehead. Did she hit or got into any accident recently? She is also unable to breathe on her own so she is put on continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) for now. Her panic attack has put her in fight-or-flight response and her body has chosen to shut down. She can wake up anytime. It happens to many patience with the history of panic attack. Don’t lose hope. Pray hard.


Kairav slumped on the hospital chair with tears running down with no means to stop. What is he going to answer his mother and father now? His baby sister, his bacha, his Akshu was his responsibility. He started crying more thinking about all the pain she had to go through all these whiles. He felt like a failure.


Do tell me what kind of scenes you would like to see? I would be more than happy to include them. Leave it in the comments and don't forget to like! Good night

Edited by Kayathrem_12 - 3 years ago
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Oh what an amazing chapter again, loved it a lot. I m so hooked om this story that every time i check the forum i hope you have updated...its so good and such in sync with current track🥰🥰

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