Prarish - OS

This scene is after ramnavi where pratha gains her power with the help of ramji. In my scene its not himalay its neel giri pahad which will be covered by barf.

Pratha: baba.. kyun kiya baba aapne aisa.. hamare sath jo kuch bhi hua uska zimmedar ye desh nahi tha.. iss desh ke karodo masoom log nahi the.. jo galti do ladkon ne pee kar ki aap uski saza poore desk ko dena chahthe ho. Aap jo saza hamne bhugtha usse poore desh ke har pariwar ko dena chahthe ho.. ye theek nahi hai baba..

Sardar: toh kya hua beta..mujhe maza aatha hai jab log mere samne tadapthe hai.. mere sath jo hua mantha hun woh zimmedar nahi the lekin ab mujhe kushi milthi hai unhe dard de kar.

Pratha: baba.. aap insaan nahi haiwan hai..

Sardar : meri haiwaniyath tum dono ne dekhi kaha hai beta..

He whistles and orders cheel to attack and kill mehak.

Pratha: baba.. ye aap kya kar rahe hai? Woh meri di hai aur aapki beti.

Sardar: beti.. huh.. tum dono meri beti ho hi nahi.. tum dono toh mere biwi ke behan ke bacche ho. Jinhe humne apna maana lekin ab tum log hi desh ke liye mujhse takkar lena chahthe ho toh mujhe tum dono ki koi zaroorath nahi hai ab.

Mehak screams from far.

Mehak: pratha sochne ka waqt nahi hai.. tum asuron ki sarvanash karne ke liye bani ho.. woh asur chahe jo ho

Pratha: lekin di..

Mehak: maine kaha na.. hatyar uthao pratha.. ye desh ke liye zaroori hai..

Pratha lifts the weapon and her hand shivers.

Sardar: mujhe marna tere bass ka bath nahi hai beta..

Suddenly pratha feels some hands on top of her hands.

Which guides her to lift the bow and arrow.

Sardar: tum?

Pratha turns and looks at rishab who is holding her hand.

Pratha: aap.. yahan.

Rishab: tum ye desh ke liye kar rahi ho na.. toh desh ke liye apne paraye dekhe nahi jathe. Desh apna hotha hai.. agar desh ka koi gaddar hai toh woh apne aap paraya hojatha hai..

Pratha: lekin.. aapko kaise..

Rishab: woh main tumhe badhmain bataoonga..

Sardar: pratha beta maine tumhe pala hai posa hai aur bada kiya hai.. tum mujhe maar nahi sakthi..

Pratha: haa manthi hun aapne mujhe paala hai posa hai.. lekin aap ki wajah se kaafi sare massoom ki jaan bhi gayi hai.. aur main aapko iske liye kabhi maaf nahi kar sakthi..

Sardar: nahi beta.. he gets scared and starts moving backwords.. pratha and rishab follows him.

Pratha and rishab pulls the arrow and it lands and hits on sardar's chest piercing his heart.

Sardar screams in pain.. and falls from the cliff

Pratha sees her sister fighting with cheels alone..

She takes her naag roop.. kills all cheels at once with her fire balls.

Rishab gets amazed looking at her roop..

Pratha runs and holds mehak..

Pratha: aap theek hai?

Mehak: haan pratha main theek hun..

Pratha: di main aapko shiv mandir le chalthi hun..

Mehak: nahi pratha..

She looks at rishab..

Mehak: tumhara yaha hona zaroori hai.. main khud chali jaoongi..

Pratha: di lekin..

Mehak: main janthi hun aaj ka din tumhare liye kaafi lamba tha.. main aur tumhe pareshan nahi dekh sakthi.. tum jao rishab ke sath main chali jaungi.. aur haan main tumhe apna haal bathathi rahungi..

Pratha: promise?

Mehak: pakka promise.. ab jao..

Mehak takes her snake roop and leaves for shiv temple.

Pratha turns back and looks at rishab who is waiting for her.

Pratha: ab chale?

Rishab takes out his coat and hand it over to pratha.

Pratha smiles.

Pratha: ab thak toh aap samjh hi gaye honge ki main ek naagin hun.. mujhse zyada iski aap ko zaroorath hai

Rishab: phir bhi rakhlo..

Pratha: accha theek hai..

They start walking...

Pratha: waise aapko patha kaise chala ki main ek.

Rishab: naagin ho?

Pratha nods.

Rishab : uss din main tumhare mangetar se mila tha jisne kaha ki usne tumhari di ko naagin roop main dekha tha.. uspar yakeen karne ka mann toh nahi hua lekin mere pass aur koi option nahi tha. Toh socha issi angle se dekh kar detha hun.

Pratha nods.

Rishab: toh maine tumhara peecha karna shuru kiya.. maine dekha tumne kaise un bacchon ko bachaya. Maine dekha kaise tumne apne baba ko pani se bachaya. Main hairan reh gaya.. mujhe ye samajh nahi aaraha tha tum ithni acchi hokar bhi buri banne ki acting kyun kar rahi thi..

Pratha: toh apne kya socha main ek gaddar thi.

Rishab: actually haan..and smiles.. phir badhmein patha chala tum toh mujhse bhi zyada desh bhakth ho.

Pratha smiles.

Pratha: ajeeb hai na.. tum sochthe hoge ki ek naagin desh bhakth kaise ho sakthi hai.. lekin mujhe kabhi naagin banna hi nahi tha.. main toh insaan banna chahthi thi.. mujhme desh bhakti naagin banne ke baad nahi balki naagin banne se pehle hi thi.. mere baba jo aaj ek asur bann chuke hai.. bachpan se unhone sikhaya desh sabse upar hotha hai.. lekin woh khud desh drohi bann gaye.

She stumbles due to rush of her emotions

Rishab holds her: sambhalo khudko pratha..

Pratha: main theek hun..

Rishab: toh kya woh sach tha jo maine suna ki tumhara sapna sirf ek aam insaan ki zindagi jeeni thi..

Pratha: haan woh toh sach tha lekin iska mathlab ye nahi ki main tumhe reem se shadi nahi karne doongi.. haan bura lagega lekin tum mere kabhi the hi nahi.

Rishab: agar main kahu ki main hamesha se tumhara tha toh?

Pratha looks into his eyes.

Rishab: shayad meri kismath main meri lakeer main tumhara hi naam likha tha.

Pratha : main kuch samjhi nahi.

Rishab: haan main mantha hun ki maine tumse shadi desh ke liye ki thi.. lekin main khudko tumse pyar karne se rok nahi paya jab mujhe patha chala ki tum gaddar nahi ho. Jab ye patha chala tum bahar se kithne bhi sakt kyun na ho andar se tum ek wohi masoom ladki thi jo apno ke liye rothi thi.. desh ke liye ladthi thi.. pati ke liye pativratha patni thi.. meri savithri thi..

Pratha smiles..

Pratha: ye thoda kuch zyada nahi hogaya?

Rishab: shayad. Lekin tumhare liye kam hi hai..

Pratha smiles.

Pratha : ab chaliye.. ghar bhi jana hai wapas.

Rishab: woh toh hai tum toh reng ke chali jaogi chalna toh mujhe hi hai.

Pratha smiles...

Pratha : aap bhi na ab chaliye.. main chalkari hi jaungi..

Rishab smiles..

Pratha starts walking front rishab smirks and holds her hand. Pratha looks at him.. he smiles at her and she blinks her eyes and smiles at him.

========the end========

Awwwwwww this was sooo sweet!!

I liked how your Rishab was actually a smart cookie and who considered all options and followed after Pratha during her secret excursions. That part of him noticing how she saved the kids and her father from drowning, that was really nice. ❤️❤️

Oh and your version of Mastermind I liked much more. It makes much more sense if he never really loved his daughters or if they were never really his daughters or if he had a plan to destroy the country right from the beginning. So kudos to that. 👏

And last but not the least, the best thing about this was Rishab coming to aid Pratha in her mission to save the country and end the Asur. I wanted Rishab-the Army Man to actually do this instead of him just being an onlooker or a confused soul as he's shown in the show. 👍🏼👍🏼

Diyaaaaa, ye lo 🤗🤗

I love you for posting PraRish OS 🤗 I so wanted to read something on them. I even tried to write another shot but kuch samjh me nahi aaya tho give up kardiya 😆 now after reading this I got inspiration. I will give another try. 😳

On story: Rish ne apna mind use kiya and tried to find more about pratha. I know show me abhi yeh nahi hoga😆 but love to read how they fight the battle together for once. They killed asur together

Originally posted by: mish_18

Awwwwwww this was sooo sweet!!

I liked how your Rishab was actually a smart cookie and who considered all options and followed after Pratha during her secret excursions. That part of him noticing how she saved the kids and her father from drowning, that was really nice. ❤️❤️

Oh and your version of Mastermind I liked much more. It makes much more sense if he never really loved his daughters or if they were never really his daughters or if he had a plan to destroy the country right from the beginning. So kudos to that. 👏

And last but not the least, the best thing about this was Rishab coming to aid Pratha in her mission to save the country and end the Asur. I wanted Rishab-the Army Man to actually do this instead of him just being an onlooker or a confused soul as he's shown in the show. 👍🏼👍🏼

Diyaaaaa, ye lo 🤗🤗

Makers showing why pratha is desh bhakth rishab using his brain and supporting pratha and sardad as a psycho villain than patni prem and bacche prem villain 🤣😆

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 this is soooo good 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

You are Soo good ☺️ I m Loving it

Ektaaaaaaa yaha se kuch seekhlo writers ko yaha se hire krlo better content milega shows k lie

Originally posted by: ILoveNature

I love you for posting PraRish OS 🤗 I so wanted to read something on them. I even tried to write another shot but kuch samjh me nahi aaya tho give up kardiya 😆 now after reading this I got inspiration. I will give another try. 😳

On story: Rish ne apna mind use kiya and tried to find more about pratha. I know show me abhi yeh nahi hoga😆 but love to read how they fight the battle together for once. They killed asur together

This is really nice thank you for writing it. I’m glad to read Rishab was there to help her and support her, I hope we get to see this side of Rishab in the show.

It’s good to see them together and they will be happy.

I hope we get to read more stories from you and others

Originally posted by: rbb1

This is really nice thank you for writing it. I’m glad to read Rishab was there to help her and support her, I hope we get to see this side of Rishab in the show.

It’s good to see them together and they will be happy.

I hope we get to read more stories from you and others

@Ilovenature dekho log stories ke liye bekarar hai jaldh hi likho

Beautiful. Well done Diya ❤️

If sardar is getting pleasure seeing innocent people suffer he is a psycho.Shocking that unlike the show where he cares for his daughters here he is cruel n not the real dad of pratha mehak.Rishab's entry was superb.So here the country server rishab got a chance to kill as asur with Pratha.Rishab telling pratha that he will be with her forever was sweet gesture...it was an indirect confession of love.i liked him understanding that pratha is a better desh lover than him.Surprising that he had found out that pratha was a naagin.the last prarish scene was cute.

Plz try to write a a cheel naagin love story on mahek vijay or an ordinary police officer naagin love os on them.