ShiVi AU Drabble series~ The baby saga/updated pg4 - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
#11

I LOVE PUCHKU🤗

Like father like son....dono ke dono ziddi😆

Loved how everyone was concerned and loved Puchku❤️

This was beautiful♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved the update!!

Puchku was so cute, waiting for Shiva to sleep!!

An the whole family's nautaki to put Puck to sleep!! Suman Kaki's experience didn't help at all. And yahaan bhi, Rishita is busy Googling. 🤣

Once Shiva, both ma-bete fall sleep wo sweetly. And that finger hold. ❤️

Looking forward to the next one!! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Normally I really don't like it when other people use the names of my story's character (Puchku) but I'll make an exception In this case. This was sooooo adorable Jaanu .. mera dil bhar gaya yeh parh ke❤️



Puchku is so attached to Shiva ... bilkul apni Mumma pe gaya hai. He's a lil chipku just like Raavi 🥺 Shiva ke bina neend nahin aati .. my heartttttt will burst from how cute this was .. especially where he wraps his lil finger around .. awwwww ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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🥰💕Simply adorable 💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
#15

Awwwww, my heart ❤️ 🥰. This is so cute 😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

It was sooo cute 💕❤️❤️

Puchku and puchku ki amma feels home only with shiva ❤️❤️❤️❤️

They will calm down by his tel masala smell 💕💕💕

It was beautiful 😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Shivi as parents are just treat to read ❤️

Puchku being as ziddi as his mumma papa

This was so cute and adorable Janu

Loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Jaanu this has my whole heart😭😭❤❤ little puchku is so adorable and ziddi like his father. He loves Shiva alot uff uski aankhon ka tara(not that tara :) I loved it. Please please write more main isi main khush ho jaungi🤧❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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2.Most special gift of 5th anniversary

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It was their 5th marriage anniversary, and Raavi wanted to make it as special as she can for both of them, well this time was even more special because they had with them, a ten-month old adorable podgy Puchku with them to witness his parent's celebration of being together. It was a usual busy day at Pandya Niwas, all three brothers had gone to store, Dhara had gone to Ahemdabad with Suman for some marriage, while Rishita had been at work too, and Krish at college, leaving Raavi and puchku alone.


Raavi was too bored, she did had plans but with this little tornado with her, it seemed almost impossible for her to succeed in surprises she wanted to make for Shiva but would instead end up in 'kaands', she tied him and started painting a canvas re-creating her and Shiva's still from sangeet night, it was their favorite candid when they had laid across each other, both in dark purple adorable Indian attire, completely lost in each other. She made the rough sketch and started coloring, she mixed one color in to other, splashed the brushes and the color palette one after the other. As a child she loved colours, she still did, colors made her life beautiful, colors attracted her and she admired hours looking at different colors and playing with it. The painting was almost done, she just had to fill in the final touch and it would be ready, she sat back on the bed resting her back which was now aching badly.


She sighed as she peeked Puchku who was playing with a little Damru Shiva had brought for him and few another toys, he was giggling in walker which Raavi had tied with the hincka knowing how destructive her kid was. Her painting was out of danger she thought, she was making a painting to gift Shiva on their anniversary today, which going to be a surprise too, she put the brush aside.

If she hadn't tied his walker he had pushed the walker here and there randomly reaching out for things on height and ending up doing a 'kaand' as usual, she had to do this after what he did last week when she took him to store at lunch time with Shiva's tiffin, in the mere span on minutes as she was serving Shiva and her plate and Puchku's regular dal-chawal-ghee-dahi bowl, Puchku had pushed his walker roaming in whole store; and he wasn't a calm baby he was either making noise or if he was silent, he was definetly upto doing some mischief, when Raavi found no noise coming, she called out Shiva to check what was Puchku doing, Shiva looked across the counter and saw no one, he came out and went in the corner of the second counter only to find Puchku all decked up in flour, he must have raised on toes and pulled the open flour bag, when he saw Shiva, he giggled and patted the floor which was now covered with flour, Shiva laughed and took him in his arms and took him to Raavi which huffed in anger when she got to know that he had done this, but Shiva laughed it off reminding her off how they played with flour in store on one of initial days of their marriage, she always found Shiva's this behaviour irritating, if she had done anything he would not leave a single chance on taunting her or scolding her all time but when it came to Puchku he indeed had become an ice-cream pandya never getting angry and just melting on their toddler's giggles and nose boops.


She rolled her eyes and got up as she felt thirsty and went to kitchen tip-toeing and hiding from him, because whenever Puchku saw her around he would randomly crawl and climb in her lap, pecking her cheeks or booping her face and hugging her, he did loved her and even she did, she would get teary on how her little baby loved her, she chuckled, she took the glass of water and chugged down her throat, it was nearly lunch time so she thought they would eat and then have a good sleep, so she served one plate for her and Puchku's everyday lunch bowl with buttermilk in bottle. As she went out in aangan, her eyes widened as she saw him nowhere, her dupatta with which she had tied his walker was loosely fallen on floor, she rushed to their room praying he would have not spoilt the painting she had spent hours making. As she reached running and panting, she found Puchku playing with brush, one of his cheeks brushed with yellow and red colour while other with blue and green, and his head and toes in purple and white, he was looking up at the painting, silently sitting. And apart from everything Raavi was shocked to see him sit silently without moving or wiggling and just staring up at the painting, was this really her kid? Was he sick or something? Because Puchku never was a still-calm baby, he would be always wiggling and playing, there he was sitting still. Raavi took a deep breathe and entered their room slowly, she took out her phone to click a photo but her focus was fixated on him so she instead clicked video button and it started recording.


Puchku saw a familiar set of legs beneath the board stand, he bent down as if doing a peek a boo with a small smile playing on his lips, his fingers dipped in colors, he pointed his index fingers up there still looking at Raavi as she came near him and sat besides him, he then pointed his tiny index finger towards her and again towards the painting and said, "ma-ma-ba-ba", and looked away immediately climbing in her lap burying his face in it, she wasn't able to believe her eyes. She blinked twice and came to her senses of what just had happened, she tugged her arms and lifted him and said, "Kya bola tune? firse bol beta!pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!! mumma ke liye once more okay? Ek baar please please please!!!" pressing her eyes and making a baby face Puchku loved watching, so he lifted his head and opened his mouth, he said, "mu-mu-ma-ba-ba-pa" and quickly buried his head in her neck, as if shying away. She chuckled with teary eyes and hugged him back tightly and kissed him as he laughed because now her face to was full of colors.

She face palmed as she realized that she had to record this and now she had no proof to show to everyone, she looked down on her phone only to find that she had put video recording on so everything was captured, she quickly sent it to Shiva with caption, "Happy anniversary Shiva!!! Probably the best gift is not the one you planned for us or i planned for us, but it's from someone else, the bestest gift on this day from the bestest baby ever!!!!!!!"


the end.

P.s.- I've written after really long time, i hope you guys like it.

Prompt credits- Merged ideas from Sakshi & Aditi.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#20

Awww kitna adorable hai ye ❤️ lil baby saying mama papa for the first time i wanted to see Shiva ka reaction oof 🤌🏻

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