Shivi Drabble Series: Lifeline - Drabble 9 updated !! Pg 18 - Page 5

Heartbreaking and a bit emotional. Well written. 👏👏. Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting for it.

"He'd kill him with his bare hands. He'll make sure he cut him into small pieces and roast him over a tandoor, announcing to the world to never dare think of desiring Raavi that way,"

Special mention to this lines ❤️

Coz I love this possessive Shiva like hell😳

It was damn funny 🤣

Tandoor roast bana dega banda😆

Also apart from this lines the whole chapter was so emotional

🤪

Ok so Shiva finally got to know bout both the things

Shaadi wali barbaadi as well as the tension& enigma from which my bacchi is suffering 😭

Now Shiva pandya raise your bar & make your chipkali fully yours☺️😳

It was a lovely update

Surely waiting for the next part🤗❤️

Won't you continue this topic which is on your 1st page?

OMG I love this!! Read it all in one go 🥵 I love this Raavi! She is aware of her needs and is ready to get them at all cost!!! I’m so glad that she is not afraid to move on!!!! Literally loved how Shiva was so frustrated that he stole Raavi’s dupatta 🤣🤣 Also, loved how you penned this!! Amazing work ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Please tag me in future updates ❤️

Jaldi update kar. Yeh maine itna late kaise padha:[

Oh How I was waiting for him to finally know!

He has screwed up big time and wouldn't hurt to see him pining for Raavi with a little more intensity than he is right now yk?

More aag boi jelly Shiva. <333

Also...WE LOVE THE BEAST ANALOGY.

Let's just get that out here once and for all. I LOVE IT. I stan it. I demand it to be used more often in fics. It is absolutely gorgeous...describes his inner aura well. I was soooo happy you went with it.

Dhara being the interrogation officer for the 92864th time lol what's new?

But there is...she actually asking her the problem no wonder how awkward and even though we didn't know what Raavi actually said I understood perfectly how she broke down. Would have wanted to read what she said to Dhara though...anyway...

Who was that ba*tard? He'd kill him with his bare hands.

See that's why I was here...to see an AAG BOI SHIVA!

And I got it. This was the highlight of the update. Took the cake for me.

Can't wait to see what he does now...will they have a confrontation right after Dhara leaves on the same night?

Or he gonna wait and stew in the fire a little more to build it all up?

I see we getting closer to Shiva finally doing things to Raavi which will relieve her once and for all. Am I right? 😉

Imma waiting so baddddd 😭

waiting for an update..........

Waiting for an update.

Please update next drabble.