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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Amykapadia

I really love slow burn romance.

Fantastic update šŸ”„šŸ”„


Thank you so much ā¤ļøā€¦ glad you liked it šŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Wow!! Kitni pyaari sazaašŸ˜³ā¤ļø


Tum badi chupi rustom nikli re!!šŸ¤—



Hai na bahut pyaari sazaa šŸ˜³ā€¦ aisi sazaa toh roz roz milni chahie ā˜ŗļø



Thank you so much Smitha šŸ¤—ā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: hinz

Arya babe, this is lovelyā¤ļø sweet and so like themšŸ˜


we’re all so invested in this couple sacchi, kya kya karwa lete hai MaAn humse haina?

hope you treat us to more of these😘


Hinaaaaa šŸ¤—Thank you so much dear ā¤ļøā¤ļø


True that… so invested we are in them ki jaise inki khushiyon se hi hamari khushi bhi hai…aur inke pyaar mein kya kya karte hai hum😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: SKCS

šŸ’žāœØšŸ’žāœØšŸ’žāœØšŸ’žāœØšŸ’ž



Thank you so much ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: DJ_3

Congrats Arya for writing, everyone is so excited today. I loved the dialogues written. šŸ¤—



Thank you so much DJ for being here šŸ¤—

Am glad you liked the dialoguesā¤ļøā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: grace2021

Arya

This is lovely..you did complete justice to the situation. I love haq wala Anuj who wants to stay with Anu and not caring about anyone else.

I am sure we will see same AK in the serial as well.

Thanks for sharing and you should write this is beautiful.


Pooja, thank you so much for the encouraging wordsšŸ¤—ā€¦. I was very skeptical to post initially but then thought we all are friends here.


With everyone’s motivating comments I will definitely try to write āœļø more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: 10Messi


full review wapas akar...!

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I will be waiting dear 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: V_ka_attitude

Loved your sweet slow romance, you write very well, keep writing. The story is just so MaAn and the sazaa ufff uff uff

Looking forward to more updates 😘😘


Thank you so much Vai šŸ¤—ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø


Aisi sazaa toh roz hi deni chahie na😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Koms9

Arya, now this is woman empowerment. Koi aur likhke nahi dega, to orat khud OS likhegi aur kya awesome likha hai. Congrats dear.


he whispered in her ears in a low tone, ā€œItni sazaa kaafi hai ya aur chahie?ā€

Now to answer Anuj's question - AUR AUR AUR SAZAA CHAHIYE.


And Anu & Anuj are real tharkis. In Hina's dressing room they said thank u with sanskar coz Devika was outside, but then in yours and DJ's dressing room they had their fun. Smart MaAn



Koms, thank you so much dear šŸ¤—šŸ˜˜ā¤ļø




Hai na yeh real wala orat empowerment 🤣.. atmanirbhar ho gayi bro 🤣



Anu ko aur aur bahut zyada sazaa milegi poori raat sazaa milegi uskošŸ˜‰šŸ˜³ā˜ŗļø



It was amazing na that all three of us had same dressing room setting with same two characters yet each story was different version and beautifulšŸ˜šŸ˜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ayushijindal

Tera first Arya šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ¤— amazingly written 🄰🄰🄰🄰🄰🄰🄰

You wrote like really. Congrats sweetheart šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜ā¤ļøā¤ļø


Ayu jaanu šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ˜˜šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—šŸ¤—ā€¦. Thank you thank you so so much dear ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

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