ARYLIE OS: THE SAARTH

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am a huge arylie fan...but somewhere the illogical proceeding of the show have left many disappointed.....these forced marriages are really some irritating concepts as if love and togetherness can never be a choice and always be devi ma ka ashirvad.....parivaar ka maan....larki ka jaan....I mean really I can't recollect any of the itv serials without forced marriage except mile jab hum tum.....

So here's a small try from my side......just tweaking the shaart....not a regular writer......so pardon me for all the mistakes......


ARYLIE OS: THE SAARTH

THE scene starts from where Aryan put forward conditions to save Aditya...

" Tumhari family emotions ke liye main kaise mera sukoon chor du..."

" Hum tumre samne haat jodat rahe....e logan ko aisen taklif na do...."..a helpless imlie continued....

Aryan pov: " damn it Aditya....this will make me hate u 100 times more.....i hate seeing this imlie ...."

A smirk appeared on Aryan's face " Tension not imlie...main tumhe iss aag main jale nahi dunga.... an ignorant egoistic emotional fool can always be punished...without actually doing anything"

" tum hasat ho??...majak lagat hai tumko ei sab???"

" nahi bas saude main profit ka andazza laga raha tha..."

" sauda?....ka..ka.. kahat ho tum...? "

" why so surprised imlie? ....Tum mujhse mera suukoon... mere 4 saal ki mehenat....and most importantly mere jiju ka insaaf....sab kuch lene aiho...aur kimat nahi chukaogi iska??"

"kimat??" a feeble voice of surprised imlie echoed in the room.....

"...lemme remind u one thing kuch pane ke liye kuch khona parta hai....and u and Tripathi's own me many things...phirhal ke liye 6cr aur mr tripathi ke azadi ka hisaab karte hain"

" kaisa kai..sa kimat?"

" tin sharte...and your babusaheb will be out of all these.."

With a big lump in her throat, she agreed to listen.... with huge uncertainty she noded....she dint knew what was written in her fate....she just knew she had to do this for maa......

" FIRST...a two-year journalism course from Haward University, USA.

SECOND...after coming back you have to repay those 6cr only by working for Bhaskar times in whatever post I want. No other way of repayment will be accepted.

THIRD, Last but not the least...Till you fulfill the above two conditions.....you have to cut all your ties with Tripathi's. IF YOU AGREE...COME TO MY CABIN....and don't you dare to inform anyone about this except meethi maa "

the frown in imlie's face deepened.....confused she just asked " why??"

with a smirk...this tym the evil one.." peheli baat, my revenge....that moron is even jealous of your progress.

dusri baat, my profit....you and your babusaheb may ignorant about your talent...but i know where my profit lies...

aur tisri baat.." this tym a sad smile appeared, the red eyes intensified, the jaws tightened...and imlie could see a flood of emotions.."udhaar rahi..."

with this he was gone.....keeping imlie in a pool of confusion.....her mind was flooded....but still she just wanted one thing now to read and understand those last fast-changing slides of Aryan's emotions.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is far better than the forced shaadi crap..the writers are forcing..even if i want Aryan and Imlie together..this is much better..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ooooo this one is amazing and the conditions are definitely a reasonable it's good for her only.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This would have made me soo much more happier if those were the conditions he had put forth! But the third should not have been udhar... He should have said the third condition I will tell you the day you return from America.... By then hopefully he would have realized the importance of Aryan in her life!


Amazing OS!

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