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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Reading ulajh ke tumse and not getting teary eyed is absolutey not possible. Heart wretching... Yeah.. That it is.. But at the same time this fiction holds so many strong and beautiful emotions that I cant help reading and re-reading this❣️


Thank u so much for reading appreciating the story so beautifully...


Thankyou so much Maahi for continuing your stories.


Haha I always knew I had to complete them before I disappear


The bond bw shiva and tapasvani is so beautiful...the way they both understand each other...the way they value each other....the way tapaswani understands shiva's worth ...the way shiva keeps tapaswani above everything....the way they are attuned to each other in all aspects ...everything is sooooo pious.


They were meant to be above everyone for the other.


Though I feel bad for raavi.. And heart is a shivi shipper... Still the pain, the agony that shiva and tapasvani are undergoing is far more heart wrenching for me. Even to see shivi together I dont want shiva to leave tapasvani...


This I will take as my success then🌺


Coming to the chapter.. All the flashbacks with Aditya... I had goosebumps reading all that... Especially when I have someone close to me in defence.


I wanted that aspect here. The pain and grief that accompanies the courage when u r from that back ground. Also the doubts that accompany them.


For tapasya shiva is like doobte ko tinke ka sahara. Shiva is her anchor and he is performing his duties with sheer devotion.


He is the only familiarity left in her world.


The way lives of shiva, raavi, tapasvani are interconnected together.. The way their pains are interconnected... Depiction is something that always moves me to tears.


They will be interconnected. They r the faces of the same coin. Cant stay apart but cant be together.


This piece is something where feeling of poignance is there for all three of them in varying magnitudes and all I want is to see them happy and smiling for atleast once.... But yeah.. Keeping it real.. It may not possible given the circumstances they are in.


Time will tell😊


The wise old lady suman.. She way she understands all her kids and wants to see all of them happy... Motherly vibes❤️


She is someone who had been withered by time. The chips that fell off from her were filled with the experienceS she have had.


There is something about the way you write.. About the way you weave your characters...The angst... The words used.... The emotions displayed... It just all transports me in a different world altogether. I love your writings so very much. ❤️


A story needs to be written and read with feelings. There needs to be depth and lessons involved. Or else why would anyone want to read... or even write?🖤


Thank u so much for commenting OB

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