Drabble(s) - Four plus one (update part 5 on page 6 - 20/02) - Page 6

This was so unexpected! Without saying the words ILY you finished it in the most perfect and unique way.

Thank you for completing this.

Ok..so now I'm swooned and sad at the same time.

It was sooo beautiful, especially priya knowing this all along.❤️❤️(although I once pointed it out too in one of my earlier post🙈)

But it was too good, and for Priya to be a sentimental fool same as ram 🥺 it has all my heart. She is not a person who lets others see how emotional and sensitive she is and for her to bear her heart out to him like this was an act of God in itself👍🏼🤭

I really hope you come back with another such story very soon.

And Priya does it Again 😎

The last part was beautiful - without spelling out the words, you took care of one of the most sought out sequences of BALH2 - Priya addressing Ram as Ram & not Mr. Kapoor 👏

Them being on similar stages yet unaware about it & yet both eager to open up to each other for a new journey was explained well 😳

came back to the forum after a while and this was the first Drabble/ story to read. WONDERFUL.

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful story

You've written such a wonderful drabble❤️...hope to see more of your stories! Or maybe another part for this one? 😉

Cheers!!

Aww, he used to notes the dates on which she called him ram!! Damn that's the sweetest thing I know. And Priya paying attention to it and gifting him with those dates. Uff wow ❤️ you writes really really good.. would really like to read more!👏

Originally posted by: bones123

you are too sweet and kind! That scene, when I saw it I was like damn, now it’ll seem plagiarised! But I couldn’t rewrite it. God knows how difficult I found writing the first version :) The show ka toh pata nahi, it’s like someone is keeping count, have we had 49 seconds of the leads together, okay now please insert 4.9 minutes of some unrelated family drama, cos side actors ke pet ka sawaal hai. 🤣🤣🤣

Of all the ways they can use the supporting cast, they use them in the most hopeless manner. Incidental and accidental hugs for the win! I am surprised actually that for the kind of personality they show Ram to be, he doesn’t hug her more often. it would be the most natural thing for him to do. Thanks as always for your comments, they make my day.

Also, done with the final part!

loved that Pri used his idea and made it hers and gave him a surprise

rang me rang gaye dono!

Loved it🤗

Originally posted by: Armansara

Written so beautifully. I feel I was there listening to her expressing her feelings…