Abhika FF - The In Between

Hey everyone, I know I've been bad about updating the WIP, but please have this long, completed with happy ending Abhika one-shot in the meantime: The In Between

Cover art

Thanks Mishka! 🤗

Can’t wait to read it 😳

Hey Shiny,

It was really nice.

Loved it.

Hope you will update your another story also really waiting for it.

Oh My God Mishka!

This was one of the really Great pieces I've read in quite a while.

How well you have framed all the other characters too of how we initially saw the show as....

Be it Wasim or Sia ....it felt like a Dream.

Veronika helping both Abhay & Deepika & pulling herself out at the right Time speaks how we like our Female characters really strong 👏

Kaash, the CVs could have read this plot & taken it along.

PHENOMENAL JOB 👏👏

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Oh My God Mishka!

This was one of the really Great pieces I've read in quite a while.

How well you have framed all the other characters too of how we initially saw the show as....

Be it Wasim or Sia ....it felt like a Dream.

Veronika helping both Abhay & Deepika & pulling herself out at the right Time speaks how we like our Female characters really strong 👏

Kaash, the CVs could have read this plot & taken it along.

PHENOMENAL JOB 👏👏

Thank you so much. I just wanted my gang back together. 🥺 I'm glad you liked Veronika. She's a self-respecting woman with a kind heart, thus she felt obligated to nudge these two clowns in the right direction 😭

What a well written piece again from you! How beautifully and organically you have led the lead characters to their culminating kiss! Thank you for this. And all the other characters are nice, ordinary, intelligent working people who don’t unexpectedly become villains and manipulators. I particularly liked the outline of Wasim’s character. I have stopped watching Dhadkan. It is unbearable to see Wasim’s manipulations and Sia’s pathetic responses. Equally unbearable is Deepika mouthing lofty moralistic dialogues now when she is as responsible or even more for the tragic end of Aditi. She played along to Vikrant’s advances very willingly, knowing all the time that he was married to a woman he was trying to have a child with. She did not report him, kept him in her house and when he was about to leave, stopped him with a passion filled “mat jaao!” When Vikrant was talking to Aditi about the divorce, suddenly, she felt guilt pangs, broke up with him and asked him to go back to Aditi to live together happily ever after! Deepika’s and Sia’s characters are deeply problematic for me. Deepika’s lack of self reflection and hypocrisy truly bother me. And now Sia! Do intelligent women always need men to sit them down to explain things! So ridiculous! And the interactions with the new male lead look so forced and fake. Do doctors become best friends with their patients and talk about personal matters? I needed your fictional ending to the story of Abhay and Deepika! So thank you again for this sumptuous story!

Originally posted by: Grao10

What a well written piece again from you! How beautifully and organically you have led the lead characters to their culminating kiss! Thank you for this. And all the other characters are nice, ordinary, intelligent working people who don’t unexpectedly become villains and manipulators. I particularly liked the outline of Wasim’s character. I have stopped watching Dhadkan. It is unbearable to see Wasim’s manipulations and Sia’s pathetic responses. Equally unbearable is Deepika mouthing lofty moralistic dialogues now when she is as responsible or even more for the tragic end of Aditi. She played along to Vikrant’s advances very willingly, knowing all the time that he was married to a woman he was trying to have a child with. She did not report him, kept him in her house and when he was about to leave, stopped him with a passion filled “mat jaao!” When Vikrant was talking to Aditi about the divorce, suddenly, she felt guilt pangs, broke up with him and asked him to go back to Aditi to live together happily ever after! Deepika’s and Sia’s characters are deeply problematic for me. Deepika’s lack of self reflection and hypocrisy truly bother me. And now Sia! Do intelligent women always need men to sit them down to explain things! So ridiculous! And the interactions with the new male lead look so forced and fake. Do doctors become best friends with their patients and talk about personal matters? I needed your fictional ending to the story of Abhay and Deepika! So thank you again for this sumptuous story!

Thank you. I was also disappointed with the direction that makers took with Wasim and Sia's characters. I dislike what Esha is doing to Peroz as well. It's all a mess. I wanted to create an alternate reality for them where everyone made mistakes but didn't ruin each others' lives.

Yes, I forgot to mention Esha and her unforgivable behavior. She is unbearable. I am not engaged or involved with the serial or its characters anymore. Your alternate storyline was perfect, so deeply satisfying.