AryLie OS ~ Jungli - Page 3

So that was beautiful and poetic!

You captured the essence of AryLie with Aryan's excuses that his mom sent him or Arpi did while Imlie's cute gesture's warmed his heart. And the way Imlie embraces his touch as comfort, without even knowing it ❤️

I loved how you crafted Aditya - revived some of the integrity we saw in the initial episodes where he didn't hide from his conscience and insecurities so much. We see a vulnerability that's shrouded in cruelness on tv so it's nice to see that jhalak of old Adi.

This was f*cking amazing.

Girl, take a bow.

I love how you got into Aditya's head and showed it as if he was in a war with himself.

To portray a character well hated by a fandom is an amazing thing, and you did beautiful.

And Aryan & Imlie, felt so authentic and relatable. This is something I can definitely see happening.

Waiting for more from you.

This was amazing! Hands down loved every single bit of this.

Excellent, brilliant, marvelous 👏👏👏

I was literally imagining their character throughout this whole piece.

Thank you for tagging me 🤗

Hope to read more of your work.

It was so beautiful!!! Beautiful description of Aryan and Imlie's growing relationship through the eyes of Aditya was much needed reality check for him. You nailed it. It was so smooth!! I enjoyed reading it and felt. Aditya's realisation throughout. Imlie's sleeping mumble and that comfort seeking from Aryan was such a treat. ❤️

Behenaa isko parle....🤧🤧🤧🤧 hayeee sukoooon...

Dono milke "jungli" wale dance karenge phir 💃💃

Agar yeh garmi ki season hoti mei AC off karke bas isko parti rehti.

Ek jo thaaaand feel horahi hei mujhe

Aisa lagraha hei kisine lassi daal di mere upar. 😍😍🌊🌊🌊

Thanks for tagging me. This is what Deltablues and I have been keep asking for. Adi sufferering, regretting, dying from inside. Pishacho wali shanti mili mujhe .

Asr and adi mei yehi fark hei. Being her husband adi couldn't win her trust because of his nalle pan. But see this man, Aryan has poured all his trust, his beliefs, his every possible emotions into her and she accepted it with open arms. And this is the result now. This bond of them. How comfortable she is with him. And she wanted him there with her though she didn't say it openly but her action did say it for him.

Imaliya :- I will ensure i won't let you sleep a single night for the rest of your life (wow kya dhamki di...🌚)

Aru :- Junglee ( iske dimaag ne bhi wohi socha jo humare dimaag ne samjha)

( le My brain :- oooh accha accha...har roj jaga ke rakhna hei...junglee o ki tarha ..pyaasi jungli 🌚

sundari , meri , mltr , egle, pottery hum sabki tharki atma ghuss gayi ladki mei 🤪)

It's a bouquet of emotions this one dude...

The journey from jhalli to jungli is spot on...

And it's trust you idiot glad you know that now.

But don't sulk around now and try to be better...

Hah i normally hate adi's pov... Because you know I'm always scared i might start feeling something for him😆

But till now... No, nothing, nada... And what a relief 😅😅

Best part is sleep on each other... It screams comfort and trust off course.

Love this ❤️

Oh this is beyond beautiful.

I can't express how much I loved this one shot, falling short of words.

Aditya's realisation that Aryan is what Imlie needs and how he could never be what she needed was one of the highlights.

Loved how you showed Aryan and Imlie's domestic behaviour, how comfortable they are with each other both consciously and subconsciously, how well they understand each other, and how in tune they are with each other's thoughts, emotions and mood. Loved how Aryan got Kadhi Chaval for Imlie and Imlie's concern for his eye injury. Imlie finding comfort in sleeping in her Akkadbagga's arms was such a sweet one.

Aditya realising that him never trusting Imlie was his biggest mistake and he had just blindly pushed her away from him, into Aryan's arms literally and figuratively😆

She was never meant to be Jhalli, she was always meant to be ABP's Jungli.

Great work, keep writing more!

Hey Sarcy , got some time now to update 😆

You made me laugh for Adi and love Arylie more.

Funny thoughts :

What a way to start OS with stan's name 😂 and sarcy all the time till the end he was made to stand watching and listening to Arylie 🤣🤣🤣 At least you would have provided him some chair to cut down his leg pain 🤣

You tried to kill him with his jealousy by giving him too much mental exhaustion which never does.😆Adi on SS when put in this situation throws entire blame on either Malini , Imlie or some other person and this is too much for him to go through in single stretch 🤣🤣

I think he would have rushed to Arylie immediately when Imlie was checking Aryan's band aid 😂

Lol🤣🤣 even after having made him drunk you again made him become intoxic 🤣🤣 made him feel more jealous and pain later 🤣It's like trying to wake up a dead body forcibly 🤣 that was hilarious 🤣

Okay , coming to OS :

Reg. Adi :

I didn't watch more of Adi's mental or emotional exhaustion on SS like realizing his mistakes or making a choice . He wants both the choices who makes his conclusions with his own imaginative theories by seeing half truth 😆 But in ur's OS you have made him quite understandable , realistic and observing character👍🏼 and that too made him watch entire sequence of Arylie giving him center stage 😂😂

Reg. Arylie :

I loved the trust , care and concern they had towards each other like Aryan's bringing in food for Imlie, him being annoyed and asking her to sleep in a room and Aru coming to provide support while she was about to fall asleep thinking of her comfort - that was quite good ❤️

Imlie's caring of Aryan's wound , making her ask if he concerns for her .

The highlight for me was both falling sleep together on the couch with Imlie's head on his chest and him holding her through the waist and both sleeping peacefully , that was romantic and too lovely 😍😍

It was beautifully written and I loved it the most💕

plz don't forget to tag me for any of your OS going further ! ❤