Aap ki Kasam |MG FF|Updated Thread 2 link @ p.n.1 @9/12/2022

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Prologue



Yeh sab meri hi gunaho ki saza hai...

Mere pyar ko meri hi nazar lag gayi.

You said right, Dadima. I insulted our marriage, the vows I took...

I lied to her...and cursed this marriage but now she is getting the punishment of my lies.

Now nothing could happen, she has just few days left.

NO....he screamed suddenly out of sheer anguish.

Kuch nahi ho sakta meri Geet ko ...nothing would happen to her. I won't let anything to happen to her. He was in pure rage.

If something happen to her, I will burn this whole world. I would destroy the whole world.

Don't ever leave me alone...he held her hand pressing it firmly.

Never...she whispered in small voice with warm smile adoring her face.

Seeing him still unsure, she added, Aap ki Kasam...

And he sealed her mouth with his for a soul searing kiss.


Now here is my Valentine surprise for my Readers...smiley39

Hope all doing well and as I had told before that will start new story soon.

Here is it, although I was planning on to start SS but then I didn't got time and till then Feb came..smiley36 so decided to start this one.

This also I was planning to post on promise day but again was held up...smiley36

So now, do give your reviews fast and press like, I want 45 likes to the prologue then only will post first chapter...I am serious this time..smiley15 if you want first chapter fast then full my quota fast, I really will post first chapter as soon as this reaches 45 likessmiley17

P.S. don't judge the book by it's cover or just prologue...smiley36

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Posted: 3 years ago
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congrats for new story

also thanks to you for your valentine gift

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congratulations on your new FF


Captivating Title


It seems like Maan have always treated Geet badly

and now she is probably ill and does not have much time

Maan wants to repent yet at the same time he wants Geet

to live with him

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Waiting for the updates.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you and Congratulations on starting another story Di.

It looks like Maan has treated Geet the way he mustn't have!! Now because of it she must be seriously ill and few days are left.

Maan can't let go of Geet and also wants to repent.

Interesting title and prologue, I'm captivated.

A perfect Valentine's gift.

Waiting for u to continue!!😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Congrats on new story di !!!!

Sounds interesting....., can’t wait to start reading it

Happy Valentine’s Day !! ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow Congrats on the New FF!

thanks for posting 😊

Happy Valentine's Day

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful Banner


Prologue

Fascinating prologue.... well written

Maan now feels guilty and blames himself

so Maan never accepted their marriage

seems like Geet is dying

liked that Maan is determined not to let anything happen to her

great that she assures that she will never leave him


already waiting for an update

thanks

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Happy valentines day


Very interesting story....looking forward...

looks like maan probably abused geet in his ego/ or whatever....now geet is in trouble....he has realised his mistake but is it too late????

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