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Posted: 3 years ago


Thank you Meher! 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

This was sooo beautiful ā¤ļø

The whole chapter had me smiling.

Neil and Aarohi's conversation was quite thought provoking, thank you for giving us a different perspective. Kairav and Abhi's conversation too, I'm so glad we got all this here ā¤ļøā¤ļø


The pregnancy scare and everything after it, this story was all ā¤ļø. Love it sooo much, and I can't wait to read what's next :')

Thank you for treating us to this

Imma go back and read again :P


Thank you for the kind words 😳


I always wanted Abhi and Kairav to have more scenes with each other. And I just feel like Kairav would have so much to say to Abhi about the way he has treated both his sisters.


If feel that Neil has always been able to put Arohi in her place and if the makers seriously want to put them together we have to start seeing more interactions between them to build some friendship or something so can accept them as a couple. So I decided to bring that part alive here.


Wow reading for a second time? 😲 That's a great complement for me. Thank you so much šŸ¤—

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Thanks for the tag! Loved it. Amazed how well this was written and all the details!

Bless Neil and Parth for that date!

AbhiRa are not preggers ...mixed feelings about that šŸ˜


Kairav slowly but surely accepting AbhiRa! Yay


Loved it when Abhi came into Akshu's room ! Thank you Kairav bhaiyaaaaa

All AbhiRa scenes and dialogues are so so pyaara.

Manjiri will always be happy in her Abhi's happiness!

What a sweet gesture...


I'm not so sure how Aarohi Convo is gonna go.


Pls post next one soon!


Interesting that you wanted them pregnant šŸ˜†


Yes, I wrote in what we've been wanting since the confession which is Abhi sneaking and spending some time with Akshara.


Thank you for taking the time to comment. Truly appreciate it and I'm so happy that you are enjoying the story thus far.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Grace šŸ¤—

Finally an update

So she is not pregnant but sick now

I think Aarohi won't have any problem and they escaped successfully I thought they will be caughtšŸ˜†

I enjoyed this part...Nice update ā¤ļø


Zenab šŸ¤— Yes, I finally got an update out after what three weeks? šŸ¤“


Hopefully, be able to write something out a bit faster for the next part.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: aishapl013

Once again a Beautiful Updateā¤ļø

It's a universal truth that Harsh Birla might not be loyal to his family, but he'll never ditch the PR.🤣


Ohh gosh this 3 brothers are so hilarious now.

For once I want someone to give a reality check to Aarohi in the series like Neil here did. I do feel something cooking here.🤪


Your whole story gives Sibling Goals as much 70 episodes till days couldn't give altogether be it Parth, Neil, Vansh or Kairav.


I'm so glad that you pen very realistic emotions, unlike the writers who survive on Drama, Drama, N Drama.

Kindly take out some time n arrange a crash course for this writers pls so that they stop writing things without heads n legs for a change


Pls post up next chapter soon, we'll be waiting for it.


Yes, Papa Birla can never separate from his true love PR šŸ˜†


I so wish for Neil to give a reality check to Arohi. He's the only character who I think can give it back to her. I really liked Neil and Arohi pairing in the beginning so I hope the writers are able to redeem Arohi a bit to make it easier for us to accept her with Neil. As for something cooking here between the two...maybe? šŸ˜‰


Sibling vibes is sort of missing in the show. I felt bonding during the trip. Vansh and Kairav but we haven't had many scenes with them together. Abhi and Neil had some post trip but then it went away. It is sort of coming back again. So I wanted to bring it back here. I remembered when Parth and Neil went after Abhi after the 1st tilak fiasco. I thought we would get more of their bonding later but we didn't. I think these 3 would be awesome together.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mudz

Super glad there isn't any unwanted pregnancy. Let's see the drama that unfolds when akshu talks to Arohi.

Thanks for tagging me


You're very welcome šŸ‘šŸ¼ Thank you for taking time to comment.


So you were on team no pregnancy? šŸ˜†


Yes, we will see what happens next when Arohi and Akshu talk.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Thanks for the tag. I will start reading today :)


Originally posted by: Monstuholic

Read chapter 1

it was we an amazing beginning ā¤ļø


Hello, I wasn't sure if you wanted a tag but I saw you post a comment bookmarked and thought to inform about the update. If you don't' want to be tagged I won't take offence and I can remove you from the list.


Thank you for taking time to read the first chapter and glad you enjoyed it 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SilentEyes7

Wow...

Nice update...

Continue soon...


Thank you so much! Hopefully, I will be able to post something up quicker than last time 😃

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Manju1066

Loved it 🄰 waiting to read Akshara’s convo with Arohi ,I hv a feeling it will go well ,thanks to Neil😁pls update the next chapter soon šŸ’•and thank you for tagging me šŸ¤—


We will see how the conversation goes between Arohi and Akshara šŸ˜‰


Neil is the surprise x factor for sure.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: 0913155R

Superb I am loving the story plz continue fasttttt


Thank you for kind words! I'm so happy you are enjoying the story thus far 😃

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