Wishful thinking: Help for UD makers and writers

So in the show it's often seen that writers often drop the ball where it'd have taken just a bit of effort to make the scene, story more impactful. I do not know whether the makers or any writers visit the forum, but I guess it'd be cool to have a thread where we could jot down little simple things, which would not really change the story, but just add something. So y'all are welcome to write what'd you like to see.

Mine would be:

1) Fatejo gaining some brains. Family is imp, and it's remained a bonding force between the two, but they need to understand that their families are not angels. They are grey people who choose their own happiness and self interests over their kids well being. Fateh understood it earlier well, and I hope this time he gets it and makes T see this. Fateh becoming Tejo 2.0 is just BS.

2) Fateh should propose Tejo with the same ring they liked for the first time.

3) A track should go to KSV's reemergence in politics while Tejo being the core supporter (good scope of throwing masala saas bahu nanad conflict) as they will feel threatened.

4) Reduce Jasmine's tamasha, esp the pointless dancing. In the room, on the road...It's just irritating. Give the leads some screen space and development.

P.S. With the three fan groups, it's obvious that the three groups will have completely different demands, and most will clash too, so just ignore if you do not like someone's comment, and just write yours.

Most imp...pls reduce J ka ss and show more of FATEJO

No more nachao of chammo🙏

Would love to see Fateh proposing her with same ring!

I badly want Fateh breaking down infront of Tejo in sheer joy and gratitude when they get back together in the privacy of their room.

And proper confession. They have to TALK. A LOT of important stuff about themselves. Confrontation along with confession would be cherry on top with all the angst.

And HAPPY Fatejo for a while. Please.

Originally posted by: Chocru

Would love to see Fateh proposing her with same ring!

I badly want Fateh breaking down infront of Tejo in sheer joy and gratitude when they get back together in the privacy of their room.

And proper confession. They have to TALK. A LOT of important stuff about themselves. Confrontation along with confession would be cherry on top with all the angst.

And HAPPY Fatejo for a while. Please.

@bold this would be something so simple yet such good storytelling.

Everything else.... Yessss!!!! Lots of talks. And let fateh do everything this time.

He decorates their room, terrace and everything else, makes noodles and then they sit and talk.

I want angsty Fatejo not the rotlu Fatejo.

So once this Makers ki ParPari Jasmin drama is over. I want Tejo centric track. Get Tejo an accident. Give her partial Amnesia and do her makeover. Make her a jintak sassy daughter of an MLA family in pass wala pind. Fateh has become a popular sporting idol .One fine day he meets his Tejo who is engaged to a rich spoilt brat. As slowly her memory comes back #Fatejo write their new love story

Haven't thought of this until seeing your post and I'm... clueless actually. I imagine quite a bit when it comes to fanfics or AUs but if you ask me if I Want to see anything on screen I'll be silent. It's so different from wanting something and actually getting it ( because I'm so used to being on the minority shipping fandom that idgaf anymore...)

Would like to add one thing before moving on. I know we like to say that writers should take a peak at the EDT for ideas but if I'm not mistaken. It's actually illegal to do that. Writers or producers of a movie, drama or anything similar are not allowed to see creative writing based on their shows. This could come back to bite them if they're ever caught plagiarizing from a fanfiction or something similar. Not sure about these laws in India but have seen some screenwriters say this from HW. Completely different from taking opinions from audience's feedback (so I'm not talking about feedback, but more of something that's implicit) -this would probably end up being irrelevant for this topic but just wanted to put it out there. Sorry.

What I Want to see:

1. You mentioned Tejo 2.0... I Want a Fateh 2.0, let her become grey smart like him, tackling Jasmine with a taste of her own medicine instead of mahan acts

2. Side plot of Fatejo going on some business trip. It needs to be business trip and not a vacation. Now you get the desperate attempts to be alone but not get it due to urgent meetings. The "do-it anywhere convenient" mentality ☺️ maybe we can get another rain weak moment??

3. Really want a proper dark Jasrik track. No doormat Amrik (though some of the things I Want them to show may not be appropriate - but I Want him to really grow a spine). A balanced equation. Jasmine tones down a bit, realises she actually loves Fateh, Amrik jealous and starts becoming more aggressive/violent. A side, comparison track of these two with Fatejo who are happy and Jasrik who are miserable.

4. Really really want the two sets of parents to realise their mistakes and actually repent for it.

5. For the love of God, a proper Simzo track. Butchered them for this Jasmine's nonsense and Fatejo lollipop. It was so disconnected and jumbled.

6. Believe someone mentioned about Bebe's lost daughter... (Is that right?)? If Jasmine starts repenting, we need a new villain and this person could be perfect for that. We could get an up close back story to the beginnings of the Canada obsession. [Bonus points: like in some movies, the daughter looks like Tejo and the person she marries looks like Fateh. Husband dies, lady is now old. She sees Fatejo and gets jealous?/angry?/sad?... parallels again...idk could expand this more externally]

7. I know I'm setting myself up for pain here but want to see Angad's proper development with his therapy. Fatejo video-calling him once a month or more. Fatejo learning to forgive him and Angad learning to love them unconditionally. He learns he wasn't fair to Riya or Nani and treats them better. Meeting someone to love afterrr he realises all this and is reluctant because he's scared he'd hurt them like he did Tejo but tries his best to become a better person. None of this instant transformations like Insta reels. But he still has some flaws, still slightly possessive, still gets angry but understands now that it's a "my" problem and doesn't saddle other people with it... *sighs wistfully

8. (Edit:) wanted to add the ring too. Because I still hold that moment close in my Fatejo heart. 😭

That's all I guess... might add more if it comes to mind.

😲 that's freaking ass long whoops

Originally posted by: ShanUlas

I want angsty Fatejo not the rotlu Fatejo.

So once this Makers ki ParPari Jasmin drama is over. I want Tejo centric track. Get Tejo an accident. Give her partial Amnesia and do her makeover. Make her a jintak sassy daughter of an MLA family in pass wala pind. Fateh has become a popular sporting idol .One fine day he meets his Tejo who is engaged to a rich spoilt brat. As slowly her memory comes back #Fatejo write their new love story

Can make this into an adopted Tejo track so they actually find her/ come to take her back but she has amnesia so everything's new.

Originally posted by: SaoirseRZ

Can make this into an adopted Tejo track so they actually find her/ come to take her back but she has amnesia so everything's new.

Yes they found her and adopted her as their daughter😆....even if Sandhus take her she will be like ye pagal log kaun hai🤣.....Jasmin Amrik Virk ko wo waise bhi ghaas nahi dalegi.....Fateh will have to do lot of research to patao her again as now she hates roses and shayari🤪....instead she will be line maro Fateh for his six packs😎

The track I really manifested for was Tejo solo journey but that is not possible so I would like to see the below tracks

1) Fateh getting back to professional boxing and handling his academy cause boxing he loves and his core expertise. I like individuality in people, so I want him to have his own career and identity. I would be fine even if he joins his job back as coach in college but he needs to have a career.

2) I have always believed KSV consider Tejo as his rightful heir. I want Tejo and KSV to work together to regain his lost glory in politics. This can be a good side track while they can continue building Tejo-Fateh relationship as main track.

3) Related to point no.2, they can show Simi unknowingly getting jealous of Tejo for replacing Simran roles in her father's life. Tejo getting preferential treatment and daughters are sidelined. But, I don't want typical joining hands with vamp track. They can show how slowly Simi is also getting integrated back in the family and realizes that Tejo never replaced her but made her own place.

4) Ofcourse Simran-Buzzo wedding. This needs to be fun shaadi without drama and tension.

5) FaTejo track should be their main plot going forward. I don't want rushed intimacy. They need to show rebuilding of trust, loyalty and love.