Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 34

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Finally got around to read this chapter...

I'm glad it didn't make me feel bad for adi.

All I feel for him is anger and pity... And that's exactly why i hate this character...

His reactions to situations baffles me to no end... I'm curious though, was it only this one year (his relationship with imlie) that was his downfall?

I believe that difficult situations bring out the best or worst in a person. And that determines the strength of character because that's what we need to make the right choice not the convenient choice.

Adi over that year is seen to make convenient choices one after the other disregarding feelings of people around him maximum times.

But the last part.... Finally choosing to come out of his misery and take responsibility of his child makes me look at him in a different light... Even though it's too late but it's not a little effort. It's the start of upward graph for his character and maybe by being there for Neel he can redeem his bad choices of past.

So I read chapter 11, Aditya’s chapter. And I love it. I don’t think it’s an unreal Aditya. In fact it’s very in line with the Aditya we see now. If he continues along his current path he will end up in that place. The one you wrote him in. So well done! You also captured the total mess in his head. All those moving pieces (Imlie, Malini, Neel, Aryan, AryLie, and his own failures and all the other pieces of him including his escape as well (the drink).

I love this one line of your’s. Well I love many, but one of them stood out.

Aditya doesn’t hate Imlie because he believes her to be guilty of all these things he accuses her of. Aditya hates her because he envies her, how she had managed to “move on”.

You are right, even though Aditya married first and had a child first, he is still stuck. He is that same Aditya that he was when Imlie left the house. The Aditya that is like “why me?”

He doesn’t see his role in things the way that he needs to in order to bring his life back on track. I like that you called this out and wrote the beginnings of his “awakening”. First comes the truth that he can no longer run from. And you brought fatherhood into it as well. Not as another obligation, but possibly as a strong reason for him to finally wake up.

Lovely perspective on Aditya.

I don’t feel a whole lot of sympathy for him to be honest. I think he is just a very self-cantered individual and both Aryan and Imlie need to stay far away. But at the same time I can feel sympathy for a lost soul. And I like that you captured that essence but also gave him some hope.

Aditya will come full circle in this story. I will tag you in future updates if you'd like to see how that happens. This chapter was simply a look into his f*Ed up mind and how he became an alcoholic. A glimmer of hope in the future with Neel. Thank you for reading and analysing my take on Aditya so very beautifully!! ❤️❤️ 🤗

Yes please! Tag me. I really did love your like dive into his head. It’s a messy place to be and I think you captured it perfectly! I wish I could write like this 😆

Woahh!

All the things were conveyed beautifully!👏

I lovveddd Areel convo! They make a cute duo ❤️✨

I loved how you wrote the entire flashback!that was so real!🤩

Alsoo...I felt bad for Aditya! Back in the car..when he realised that he hasnt been with neel all these years!🥺

Cant wait for the next partt!! What will happen when Imlie comes to know about BIL's truth! High drama ahead!

That was a nice clean segue into clearing up the past for Aditya. I'm waiting to see how he deals with this revelation. 👏

I love the glimpse of family life you show with Aryan, Imlie and Neel together. They make such a sweet threesome.

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Beautiful part for aditya...

So Mr. AKT finally knows the truth. Good. What path will he choose, will he lash out at Aryan saying marrying Imlie was part of his "Master" plan or listen patiently and understand that whatever course life has taken was Adi's own doing..

Really excited for tomorrow's episode and the next part of your update..