MaAn OS: A little thing called Love! - Page 4

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thought so! 😄😄

Thank you for giving it a chance and for your feedback as well. Means a lot! ❤️

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Loved the shayari as well. Is it your own?

Originally posted by: Bee222

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Loved the shayari as well. Is it your own?

Yes! Yes! Completely original!

I'm more sort of a poet than fiction writer.

Originally posted by: docritu99

Yes! Yes! Completely original!

I'm more sort of a poet than fiction writer.

How wonderful! 😍

I can do normal english poems, but shayari is a different league altogether Mujhse to hoti hi nahi 😭

I love listening to them though! 😍 Urdu is such a beautiful language

Originally posted by: Bee222

How wonderful! 😍

I can do normal english poems, but shayari is a different league altogether Mujhse to hoti hi nahi 😭

I love listening to them though! 😍 Urdu is such a beautiful language

That's awesome! 🤩

IKR! Urdu's even normal words are so poetic! It's a charming language. However, I'm not that adept with it so I kinda do mix of Hindi and Urdu! 😂😂

Can do okayish in English poems as well.

Originally posted by: docritu99

Yes! Yes! Completely original!

I'm more sort of a poet than fiction writer.

I would love to read more of your shayari.

Most welcome!!!

I meant it to be “Phere lene?”
But it looks like I typed “Phere lend?”

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Originally posted by: Arshi67

I would love to read more of your shayari.

I keep writing here and there! Written in other of my OS's as well.

Will definitely try to write more! ❤️

Originally posted by: SKCS

Most welcome!!!

I meant it to be “Phere lene?”
But it looks like I typed “Phere lend?”

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No problem dear! Got the gist! 🤩

Originally posted by: docritu99

Baawjood iske na koi shikwa baki hai

zindagi me ho na ho,

Dil me tera hona kaafi hai.

Before Anu could lose herself further Anuj came as the saviour, like always.

Tere Jitne na sahi, pyaar mujhe bhi hai,

haan! aaj maine mana hai

Wow Riya . This is really beautiful ❤️.

Shayari as usual steals the show for me.. ab hum biased hai to hai...

@bold: Dono hi shayari bahut achchi hai, par ye lines sab se zyada chu gayi dil ko.

Actually, if it hadn't been for Anuj. Anu's life would have been lifeless. He is her true saviour. In a way they are for each other, they truly complete one another. Your writing inspired me to write a shayari myself, so here's one for you dear..

Jab tu nahi tha, to ye bhram tha, ki koi gham nahi tha

Bejaan thi gudiya, use koi dard nahi tha

Tere aane se saans main saans aayi

Masaum sard tha, par khushiyon ki bahaar aayi

Originally posted by: docritu99

That's awesome! 🤩

IKR! Urdu's even normal words are so poetic! It's a charming language. However, I'm not that adept with it so I kinda do mix of Hindi and Urdu! 😂😂

Can do okayish in English poems as well.

Truth! Urdu is the most elegant and exotic language in the world, change my mind

I hope to be fluent in it one day