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Posted: 3 years ago

It was actually very sweet if you see just Moran. My heart melted after that one.


Aur apni lambi bakwaas, it turned out, took me 40 minutes to write. Sheesh!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

I am just going to watch it all over with just Moran, and maybe me eagle-eyeing everything would make it better for you guys. This is AT, and I am going to try and appreciate.

It may not have as much feel because I feel what I write and the scenes weren't as intense, but I'll try my best.


I loved how Karan didn't immediately run to Monami, first doing his duty as a commando, and as soon as that obligation was done, he dashed to Monami. He didn't pause before lifting his arms to hug her, and I loved how Monami threw herself in his arms, as if hugging him would take away all the fear she had felt with the gun on her head.

I loved that soft 'Monami', as if he was coaxing a child, comforting her by just saying her name. (The second time he said her name after he had hugged her). He said 'Monami' and I heard 'I am here, there's no need to be scared anymore.'

Monami's expression as she hugged Karan was the same when she hugs a tree. Like, the tree absorbs her sadness and stress, so does Karan.

I liked the editing in the bit where everything comes back to Monami about the night. I liked it in that segment. It kind of gave the feel that everything just came crashing back to her. No particular order, just everything in that moment came back to her.

Loved the silence when Monami recalls him saying 'Main tumse bahut zyaada pyaar karta hoon'. Everything stopped for a second in that moment, because she finally, FINALLY heard him say what she had been wanting to hear for months.

I loved how love immediately flooded Karan's eyes when Monami asked 'Do you love me?' as if his entire being was subconsciously giving her the answer. His soul was calling out 'yes' to the answer, and his eyes were the medium.


I loved how Karan straight up looked at Faizi when Monami stalked in the room saying 'Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai'- Oh shit. Abhi meri band bajne waali hai. Ek taraf Monami naam ki khaayi aur doosri taraf Faizi naam ka kua. It's just not my day.

I loved the conversation between Monami and Karan.
'Kyun kar rahi ho itni gandi acting?'
He was so petrified. 'Kahan phas gaya hoon main? Kya ho raha hai meri zindagi ke saath? I swear, Monami, auron toh kya tumhe bhi dobara 'I love you' nahi kahoonga, bas aise dekhna band karo. Pehle, iss Faizi naam ki bala ko bahar nikaalo. Phir, apni Rani Sahiba se deal karta hoon main.'


Karan when Monami was demanding an answer and walking closer to her- In mahutarma mein kaunsi mata aa gayi hai? Pushpa ki sadistic tendencies kya touch hokar aa gayi hai? Main toh naam ke liye Rani Sahiba bolta tha, yeh toh Jhansi ki Rani ban gayi hai.
Faizi's expression when Karan hit the door and was staring at Monami. Monami toh sach mein talwaar lekar padh gayi hai Karan ke peeche. Bichaara. And when said 'okay'- Mujhe yeh saath saath hote dikhenge? Jis ki itne mahinon se tadap thi, wo sakshaat aankhon ke saamne hota dikhega?

Karan as he told Monami to stand a little further- Tum jab itna paas hoti ho, main saans lena bhool jaata hoon, aur tum keh rahi ho itna paas aakar, main iss baat par concentrate karoon ki mujhe izhaar karna hai.


I loved Karan blushing when Monami asked him 'Do you love me' in the changing room?
Karan when Monami came closer- Yeh toh saaf saaf seducing aur blackmailing hai. Is sab ki zaroorat nahi. Main... Main bolta hoon.


Karan when Monami said 'Meri aankhon mein dekhkar bol do'- Abey, iski aankhon mein pata nahi kya hai? Hamesha wahan pahunch jaati hai. Aankhein band karo, aur choose karo. Aankhon mein dekho, aur reject karo. Aankhon mein dekho, aur izhaar karo. Aankhein hai ya court ki yahin se judgement pata chalegi.


Gosh, the happiness in Monami's eyes when he said it. She hadn't wanted to believe it before that moment, but in that moment, she couldn't deny it! Karan smiling, because his Rani Sahiba was smiling, and HE was the one who had put it there.


1. I loved how Ustaad ji and Faizi were the least bothered about Monami and Karan's love or the haq jamao session, like 'Inka toh roz ka hi hai.' They don't even bat an eye at Monami bossing Karan around or the two hugging each other like they were each other's lifelines.

2. I AM IN LOVE with Faizi's expressions. He was full on enjoying!! He was so disappointed when Karan told him to get out and then so happy when Monami told him to stay. 'Isliye mujhe apni Bhabhi jaan zyaada pasand hai.'


Also, I finally saw a hint of sexual tension at that last scene where Monami was lying over Karan and said 'I love you too', like they were resisting the urge to kiss.

And I enjoyed it a lot more when I skipped SidSa scenes. Those dampened the intensity but it wasn't lacking if you see just the Moran ones.


Bahut lambi bakwaas ho gayi yeh toh.


Mujhe toh saare scenes pasand aaye😂😂


Karan ki mann baatein jo likhi hai 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

It was actually very sweet if you see just Moran. My heart melted after that one.


Aur apni lambi bakwaas, it turned out, took me 40 minutes to write. Sheesh!!

Maine toh KarMi hi dekha tha but I guess mera mood pehle se hi off tha toh isiliy woh carry forward ho gaya episode par bhi.

kal dobara dekhugi toh itna bura nahi lagega..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Bts mein sha village mein hai toh kya hum sangeet expect kar sakte hai🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba


Mujhe toh saare scenes pasand aaye😂😂


Karan ki mann baatein jo likhi hai 😂😂

tumhe nahi dekhna tha ,toh accha laga... humein dekhna toh hum off hai..😁

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Rani_Sahiba

Bts mein sha village mein hai toh kya hum sangeet expect kar sakte hai🙈

Expect toh kuch mat karo..tabhi zyaada khushi hogi..,😂

Hope KarMi jaaye waha..jaise bhi jaaye..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mineforever

tumhe nahi dekhna tha ,toh accha laga... humein dekhna toh hum off hai..😁


Kya logic hai but seriously mast tha sweet and simple ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife


Bahut lambi bakwaas ho gayi yeh toh.

Thanks for writing this & posting here👍🏼🤗

Episode ke baad toh nahi par isko padh kar zarur better lag raha hai, confession wali feels types❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: peacenfun

Thanks for writing thi & posting here👍🏼🤗

Episode ke baad toh nahi par isko padh kar zarur better lag raha hai, confession wali feels types❤️

40 minute ki mehnat saphal hui.

I really, really want people to enjoy the confession and I am kind of warming up to it. So... yay!

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Posted: 3 years ago

I watch it on TV to skip nahi kar sakte na, wese bhi I feel to give a fair chance to all characters. But disappointment hi milta hai, and another reason is, I just love Sid, he is too adorable. But I guess ab insta pe KarMi ke continuous scenes mil hi jaenge, wahi se dekh lungi, shayad better lage😂

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