Laaga Chunri Mein Daag(AR) NOTE-PG 150 19

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Hiiiiiiii everyone...............I'm starting with another ff.This will be a short ff.I'm posting the concept of this ff.If you like the concept I'll post the introduction part & then the story but i'll continue only if I get a good response.This is going to be totally different then my other ff(Bhulbhulaya).....

CONCEPT:

As the name suggests in this ff riddhima will be a prostitute.She lives in a total different world.But one day she meets her soulmate armaan & life completely changes for her........She just doesnt know what way she should chose in life.

INTRODUCTION:

Dr.Shashank gupta:

Dean of sanjeevani.Has only one daughter Anjali gupta.His wife Dr.Simran died when anjali was 6 years.Loves his daughter alot.

Dr.Anjali gupta:

She is 25 years old.Only daughter of shashank gupta.Same as DMG.She is in love with Dr.Atul mallik & very soon she'll be married.

MALLIK HOUSE:

Dr.Shubahnkar mallik:

Best friend of shashank gupta.Married to Keerti.He is very loving & caring.Loves his family.

Dr.Keerti mallik:

Wife of shubhankar & mother of 3 sons:Rahul,Atul & Armaan.She also loves her family & sons alot.She had left sanjeevani so that she could take care of her children but now they are grown up & so she rejoined.

Dr.Rahul mallik:

Eldest among the 3 brothers.He is a great surgeon.He is married to his female love Muskaan.Loves his brothers alot & always saves them.

Dr.Muskaan mallik:

Wife of Dr.Rahul.Loves her husband & her two brother-in-laws atul & armaan.Has taken good care of house.She & keerti share a mother-daughter relation.

Dr.Atul mallik:

Same as in DMG but even he is a great doctor.He is all set to marry his lady love Anjali.

Dr.Armaan mallik:

Cutest & sweetest person being youngest in mallik family.He is very happy to have such a beautiful family.He is around 24 years.He is very serious about his work.Everyone are after him to select a girl because once atul is married it'll be his turn but he always says he is not interested in marriage.He never looks at a girl with prospect of marriage.He tells his family he'll marry only after he falls in love a girl.But the real reason is he is afraid that if he brings a wrong girl in the house she can destroy his entire family & he doesnt want his family to ever suffer for him.

RIDDHIMA:

An orphan who leaves with a gang of girls under the care of shehnaz bi.Yes she is a prostitute & leaves in a area which according to outside world is the area of hell.She is youngest among all the girls.Shehnaz bi always had a soft corner & never wanted her to become like other girls but the enviroment in which she grew up it was obvvious for her to turn like others.She is very outspoken because she has to talk to customers & handle them in such a way.She has never seen outside world but has always heard from others that outside world is not meant to be for them for outside people are always harsh to them & dont understand why they have to do this in life.

If you wish me to go ahead with this ff then please let me know.........😊

PART-1: PG-2

PART-2: PG-9

PART-3: PG-19

PART-4: PG-29

PART-5: PG-42

PART-6: PG-55

PART-7: PG-66

PART-8: PG-74
PART-9: PG-86
PART-10: PG-97
PART-11: PG-106
PART-12: PG-118
PART-13: PG-130
PART-14: PG-144
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AMAZIN SWEETY
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ post the intro soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing pinky di..anoder great fanfic..cont soon!!!
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wow pinky yaar hatts of 2 u yaar i know ths would be also brilliant lke bhulbulaya yaar u should cont ........plzzzzzzzz cotn its brilliant nd vry diff story omg ridz prostitute lke movie..........
plz cont sooooooooon lvd d concept
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice intro plzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pinkyyyy!!!!! Anoder of ur fantastic concepts!!

Luv it...plz plz plz start soon!!

n as usual...do pm me...n i'll be ever ready wid my long bhashans aka comments!! 😉 😆 😆


Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thankssssss to all of you for your lovely comments........i'll post the first part sooooon........... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome yar... v. different concept... totally different from other fanfics.. cont. soon..
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woooooooow
great
i see anovr fantastic ff comin lol
continue soon
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gud one....... different concept.... would love to read next parts.... and how come Armidz meet....continue soon... 👏 👏 👏

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