I love the OG as you guys already know. So i watched few recent clips in SM and I was gobsmacked by the amount of logic present in the show.
So I decided to put myself in the writers brain and write out something that would be in the writers mind.
Since I don't have much experience. I literally had to rack my brains and get to this awesome track. Please read and let me know how it is. Or better than that since there are amazing writers here do feel free to continue. Only one rule: The story should have ZERO LOGIC.
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Raavi enters the house looking dull. Entire family gathers round her.
Dhara: I trusted you. How could you do this to me?
Gaumbi: I always kept my faith in you.
Dev: You have changed Raavi. You are not the same.
Rishita: How could you do this to Dhara Di?
Krish: Bhabhi how could you?
Suman: I treated you like my daughter. How could you rob Dhara of her right?
Shiva: You will never change you will always be maami ki behen ki beti. I hate you. Get out of my house.
Raavi opens her mouth to say something but Shiva grabs her hand and she faints in his arms.
Immediately Shiva feels the love for her in his heart and carries her to her room. He calls the doctor. Hard hearted Suman mumbles that she is acting but Dhara being the loving hearted person she is sits near Raavi and rubs her head. Rishita being the most intelligent in the family pulls her husband aside and asks him if Raavi has any ulterior motive. Dev sighs at her suspicions and opens his mobile to check on YouTube reasons for fainting while Krish tries to lighten the mood with some one liners. Gaumbi brings a glass of water to give Raavi once she wakes up.
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The doctor checks Raavi while everyone in the family looks on. Dhara has tears in her eyes and thinks why such bad things are happening in her loving family. The doctor completes checking her and turns to Shiva.
Doctor: Congratulations Mr. Shiva Pandya. Your wife is pregnant.
The entire family looks shocked and Rishita looks as if she is about to faint.
Shiva shocked: Pregnant?
Krish: What are you saying? Dhara Bhabhi is supposed to be pregnant not Raavi.
Dhara, Dev and Gaumbi: Shut up Krish... Shiva...?
Shiva: But doctor she can't be... I mean... We...
Doctor: It's not your child.
She turns to Gaumbi and Dhara.
Doctor: The baby is yours.
Dhara & Pandyas: Kya
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*****************Flashback****************
On the day of the fire.
Bad Doctor who was hired by motiben tries to escape with the spare embryo of Dhara and Gaumbi when she is stopped by Raavi and the good doctor. Raavi holds a surgical knife in a threatening way.
Raavi: Where are you going?
Bad Doctor: I... Woh...
Raavi: Isn't this the spare embryo?
Bad Doctor: Uh...
Raavi: Tell me the truth... Or I will kill you.
Bad Doctor: Uh yes yes. I was told to destroy this.
Raavi: Dare you do that.... I will bring Dhara Di and you should implant the embryo in her.
Good Doctor: Uh Raavi I don't think we have that much time to actually wait for Dhara since the embryo is out. If we don't implant in 5 mins the embryo will due.
Raavi: Oh dear... What to do?
Raavi gets an idea and makes up her mind.
Raavi: Please implant in me. I will carry the baby and give to Dhara Di.
The procedure happens.
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Shiva looks at Raavi with adoring eyes. Raavi slowly opens her eyes.
Shiva: You did so much for Bhabhi.
Raavi: Now do you understand how much i love Dhara Di?
Shiva hugs her. Dhara and entire family gathers round and hug her.
Yaadon ki baaraat plays in the background.
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So was anyone able to find any logic?
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