ShiVi AU SS: When Stars Come Crashing Together Part I - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh wow Avi this is so beautiful! What a masterpiece you’ve created! The way the whole narration has been done through the years is beautiful! I love how character POV was included but a lot of updates happened via news articles and posts and tweets! As someone who posts on IF I know how difficult it must have been to get everything edited and look like posts/tweets/comments! Along with the story telling I wanna praise your dedication too! How I’ve missed your updates and I’m so glad you’ve started this!

btw since you asked earlier if any one would wanna be featured, my name is Suparna with Twitter/insta handle as GumSumChandni! It was also lovely to see Sara Jaanu Anu And the rest via their tweets and comments haha!

Coming to the characters of ShiVi, although I get what you meant by they might be out of character, but I felt they had the same dynamics and that’s what pulls me to them so this FF is already all kinds of love for me!

Lastly including other characters from different shows is a stroke of genius!

Also thank you for including authors note! It helped me get a perspective into a writer I admire ‘s writing process!

Waiting for updates! 💗


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Avi!!!!


Im loving this already... Also i like how I had a random tweet!!! So typically me 🤣🤣!!!

So many thoughts for this, but I'm going to wait and see how it moves (also read properly since I've been interrupted quite a few times) before expanding on my comment!!


Hope you continue soonest 😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Next update please 🔥

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I was about to comment how I would be nothing like that on social media 😆

& my man went ✨really? have you met you? if it was wasn’t a comment then you’d be saying it to their faces✨ 😭🤗
& then I had to show him that it was my 🥰soulmate🥰’s story & watch his face fall

it’s technically safe to say that I’m veryyyyyyy happy now 🥳


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ayye ayyeeee milkwaaa is backkk that too with a banggg!!!!!


And I see myselffff themock_tale & kaand_zindagi_ and i just melted in a puddle, milkwaaa thank you soo much!!!!


Coming to the story, it's quite intriguing and interesting, loving how you've made a whole au soo beautifully ❤️

Waiting for next update!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#16

This was awesome❤❤

I am loving this!!😍❤

Can't wait to read further❤❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Avi, on a Shivi break for now so didn't read the full story. I'll come back once this track is over and read it.


But I read my dialogues after my Twin shared it. And OMg, you did your hw alright 🤣🤣. That twisted one from my twisted logic tweet, my khatarnak TYPOs🤣🤣🤣, and my chemistry with my Twin! All Wonderfully captured!!


P..s sunnsatiya was so apt too.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

Backkk with a Baanggggg🔥🔥🔥

Just superb🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#19

Very fresh and interesting!!! ❤️❤️❤️ I am eagerly waiting for your next update! Honestly can't wait.. please update soon! 😅😅

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