ShiVi TS-The Mahakaand

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Prologue

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Raavi was calling everyone in the aangan but no one seemed to pay attention to her, she went to Krish who was already in the aangan waiting to listen what Raavi had to say, he had nothing to do so he was the first one to come running and ask of what she had to say; he said, "haan bhabhi bolo ab konsa kaand karna hai", with big grin, she rolled her eyes, and said, "Chupkar Krish, ja jaake thali aur chammach le aa aur sabko bula", Krish out of curiousity again asked, this time as if whispering, "bhabhi apne favourite devar ko toh batao kya khichdi paka rahe ho", "Krish ab sawal puchega na toh Shiva se kehke tujhe kuwe mein ulta latka dungi,samjha!", to which he put his finger on his lips and went away, Raavi agaun called for Dhara, Gaumbi, Dev, Rishita and Maa, Shiva who was in their room came out hearing her Chudail biwi screaming in aangan, he he annoyingly asked, "Aey gadhedi yeh kya apna speaker phaad phaad kar sabko bula rahi hai kya baat hai?", she smiled and said, "Mai jo bhi bolne vali hu,tu hi sabse zyada khush hoga isse sunke dekhna", he stood baffled as Rishita Dev arrived yawning, Rishita narrowed her eyes and said, "Kya Raavi aaj Sunday hai office bhi nahi,sone do na", she replied, "Haan haan sojana pehle goodness sunlo", she widened her eyes as she heard word goodnews, "Goodnews?Konsi Goodnews?" Said Suman entering from mandir with Kanta, Raavi stayed silent.

Krish came with Dhara and Gaumbi, Gaumbi carrying little Tara in his hands, Raavi smiled at Tara.Raavi cleared he throat, "Maine ek faisla liya hai", she wenr near Shiva,held his hand and dragged him in the centre near tulsi kyara, she continued, "Dus saal pehle,Dhara di ne bhi ek faisla liya tha apne parivaar ke khaatir, Apne khud ke bachhe ki jagah apne teeno bandar ko bada karna,unhe sambhalna,unko zimmedaar banana,jo unhone kiya,bachpan se mai Dhara di ko dekhke badi hui hu,toh maine bohot sochne ke baad yeh faisla liya hai ke jabtak Tara Dus saal ki nahi hoti,mai aur Shiva humara bachha plan nahi karenge,Tara hi humari priority hogi", she announced with a smile,she looked at Shiva whose face had crept with a proud smile,first shocked but then everyone agreed,Rishita came excitedly, and asked "Raavi are you serious?yeh bohot badi baat hai", to which Raavi nodded, Dhara came and hugged Raavi,and the whole family hugs each other in happiness.

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"Nahiiiiiiii!!!!", Suman woke up with a jolt,her face all covered with sweat, "Hey somnath aa kevu sapnu hatu?Krupa karke esa mat hone dena,ek Bahu ka bachha ho usme itne kaanf hogaye ab baaki dono bahuon ko bhi sadbuddhi do jara, voh patrani khud bachho jesi hai pant shirt pehenke school bag leke office jaati hai aur ek raavi shiva hai jo dono hai samajhdaar par ladhte bachhon jaisa hai,are inki ummar mein Dev aa chuka tha aur mai pet se thi Shiva ke time,badi vali ka bachha hone mein itne kaand hue ab baaki mein na ho,uske liye mujhe hi kuch karna padega,haan",

she said as she leaned down near the water jug and drank water, she thought of something and went back to sleep.



Okay so this is a prompt given to me by Neet, and i really hope you like it Never!!!

*Fingers crossed*

Also, honest reviews appreciated y'all.

Happy reading!!


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Phirst


AHAHAAHAHHA I LOVE IT JALDI LIKH

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Bhai main kya dar gayi🤣


Now I'm curious

Jaldi likh jaldi in Raavi's *Jaldi Shiva Jaldi* voice

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aaahhhhhh I was waiting from so long 😭😭😭

For this finally u posted prologue

Can't wait for first part plssssss jaaanuu post soon !!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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this looks interesting 😍

Jaldi jaldi post kr

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ek second ke liye Mai shock mei thi 😳 Raavi mei dora ki aatma kaise agayi🤣 waiting for the next one eagerly januuu😍😍😍

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WOuld love to read this one.......

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💕🤩Fabulous, can’t wait for your next update, what is Suman kaki’s plan….

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Really interesting

Continue soon

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I’m here! I’m here! I’m here!


I just couldn’t resist and had to read it while waiting for my connecting flight. I am so so so excited for this one!!! And you’ve started it off on such a brilliant note! I’m in love with this already.

Suman ke iraade kuch theek nahi lag rahe 😜 par jo bhi hoga ShiVi ka bhala hi hoga 😜


Thank you so much for writing on my prompt! Update super soon please!



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