Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 28

10 (others still pending)

imlie-adi dialogue was everything.... i loved how she showed him the mirror w/o overstepping boundaries...

also says how diff both characters are...

imlie rightly pointed out that adi's victim cry was too late. yes he had every right to ask justice but 5 years back not now.

hopefully he choses to be better this time not for anyone else but the child who's set up to lose his mother at such tender age.

and what to say about aru baby.... he's beyond marvellous here... more dreamy than the show ❤️

Originally posted by: mltr16

@reginalsecret: Thank you, thank you for always leaving such a detailed comment. I agree loopholes on ITV (someone on this forum aptly called them the Bermuda Triangle of ITV shows) drive me up the wall. So I am going to do my best to close as many as possible 😃 I just hope I can keep track of them!! 😃 Once again, thank you for being a regular reader and commenter, I wait for these every time I post a story. 🤗

My pleasure❤️ its the least I can do since you're investing so much of your time into this

Aryan and imlie show so much strength and maturity- you can tell they are better together than apart. My gut twisted for Aryan to leave Imlie alone with Aditya but it speaks volumes of his trust.

As always, this was a beautifully written chapter!

I'm so proud of both of them! I'm loving this journey so much, especially because I've been rereading your fic with what's currently happening on the show (stresssssss). Also shout out to Arpita for being the calm in the sea of CHAOS that is their lives.

I have so much to write.

The constant growth of Arylie as partner is so smooth .what really describe their relation is not glossy romance . They grew as one soul, their understanding was the foundation of their relation they walked step by step. Now they are team who rely on each other . Where words doesn't matter coz they knew each other thoughts, views and love. Their trust .

Ek umr ke baad manzil mili

Andheron se ubharne qandil mili.

What Malini is going through is sad . But ye makafat e Amal hai meri jaan . Neel is such a energy booster how his father didn't come to love him is beyond me. You love a child no matter wat the situation is child is innocent no matter what . Adi sure needs help . I hope he grows leaving behind the consequences of his own choices . Neel definitely needs him

Now I shall take my time gushing over Arylie .did I mention Aryan is gem of a person sure imlie landed with a boon .

Love love love it

For the very first time! Felt sad for Aditya. It was a reality check for him. Aditya was really in miserable condition. It was his own karma! I am glad you haven't degraded his character. No matter what he loved Imlie but lacked trust! I loved how he had reflected on his life. ❤️!! I loved how you beautifully given the insights to his thoughts. For a moment, I felt bad for him. It's good how he wanted to change for his son. Loved this chapter!

Originally posted by: Casper13

For the very first time! Felt sad for Aditya. It was a reality check for him. Aditya was really in miserable condition. It was his own karma! I am glad you haven't degraded his character. No matter what he loved Imlie but lacked trust! I loved how he had reflected on his life. ❤️!! I loved how you beautifully given the insights to his thoughts. For a moment, I felt bad for him. It's good how he wanted to change for his son. Loved this chapter!

Thanks @casper13. This was a very interesting chapter to write indeed in terms of not allowing my notions about the Aditya on the show, color my vision of him for this story. I am so glad you liked it. I think Aditya's trials are just as important to Full Circle as any of the other characters, it would be callous to ignore his POV.

Yess !! His POV is as important as others!! He was no villan but a victim of his own tragedy! His own flaws are the reasons of his downfall. It will be great to know about his redemption and change as well.

I've only one complaint (again)

It's too long..... And so much Aditya.... Bad day for this, I'll read later.... Maphi partner ji