Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 27

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


One of the things I love about Imlie in this AU is not only is she grounded but she is mature and secure in her relationship with Aryan. I wonder if I am allowed to say this, since I wrote it, but I love the visual of Imlie returning to Aryan and him thinking about the lines of setting her free to have her return back to him, while Aditya watches, realizing she was never his to begin with.

@bold: uncanny how you know what I am writing next 😆

ha ha great minds think alike. I loved that visual too, but then decided not to mention it, I figured that it may take away from rest of the story you created where the focus was on sort of giving Imlie a closure and a bit of revenge against Adi.
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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow this was so amazing... This imlie n aditya confront was much needed that to in peace n silent not in angry n yes aryan n imlie are really lucky to have both of them as arylie... So supportive family is rathore rather than tripathis.. Hope neel will get what he deserved..

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Posted: 3 years ago

I swear I fall in love more and more with the dynamics of their relationship. There’s just no doubt and that’s how it should always be. 🥺❤️ Thanks for the tag!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update continue soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally! I was waiting for this quite impatiently lol... You've once again managed to awe me with your flow...its easy to lose connect with a story, even if its your own but you have managed to create a universe of your own which resonates with me no matter how many povs are shown...

The way you've captured Aditya's bitterness, Aryan's pragmatism and subtle vulnerability and Imlie's concern and 'take-no-sh*t' attitude has my whole heart...

Loopholes and loose threads in plots are quite off-putting for me so I couldn't possibly appreciate how well you've thought out the plot enough.


Lookin forward to more...Thanks for tagging❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aryan, Imlie and the Rathore ladies have my heart! They are so understanding and they calmly react to situations without any grudges.


The conversion was definitely needed alone between Aditya and Imlie. Glad she reminded him that he didn't trust her and erased the evidence that she alone went looking for. Looking forward to Aditya's reflection of the past!


And Aryan and Imlie's relationship, soo pure and trustworthy! I loved his thought when she was walking to him by the car. She truly belongs to him and him alone!


Amazing update ☺️!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you for always tagging me. You made ny morning. I always wonder how professionally you write. Are you an professional writer? Coming to the chapter! Your storyline is so nice and each chapter fits perfectly. The conversation between Imlie & Aditya felt like two real people talking infront of me. You don't drag things thats what I like most. Another thing you present emotions & scenes in a very subtle way the way they should be.❤️ beautiful chapter.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago


thanks for the tag! marking will come back!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Casper13

Thank you for always tagging me. You made ny morning. I always wonder how professionally you write. Are you an professional writer? Coming to the chapter! Your storyline is so nice and each chapter fits perfectly. The conversation between Imlie & Aditya felt like two real people talking infront of me. You don't drag things thats what I like most. Another thing you present emotions & scenes in a very subtle way the way they should be.❤️ beautiful chapter.❤️


@casper13: I am so glad you like my writing. I am not a writer by profession and you are a sweetheart for giving me such an honor. Loved your comments about the chapter itself. I hope you like what is coming up in the next couple of chapters just as much! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: reginalsecret

Finally! I was waiting for this quite impatiently lol... You've once again managed to awe me with your flow...its easy to lose connect with a story, even if its your own but you have managed to create a universe of your own which resonates with me no matter how many povs are shown...

The way you've captured Aditya's bitterness, Aryan's pragmatism and subtle vulnerability and Imlie's concern and 'take-no-sh*t' attitude has my whole heart...

Loopholes and loose threads in plots are quite off-putting for me so I couldn't possibly appreciate how well you've thought out the plot enough.


Lookin forward to more...Thanks for tagging❤️


@reginalsecret: Thank you, thank you for always leaving such a detailed comment. I agree loopholes on ITV (someone on this forum aptly called them the Bermuda Triangle of ITV shows) drive me up the wall. So I am going to do my best to close as many as possible 😃 I just hope I can keep track of them!! 😃 Once again, thank you for being a regular reader and commenter, I wait for these every time I post a story. 🤗

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