Tishnagi : Shivi ss : part :6 pg=11

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Hy guys this ss is all about shivi misunderstanding .. i thought to pin it down with some kind of twist n turns ... Hope you like it...

Scens started with ravi walking on road aimlessly she didn't know where her feet leading her ... She is unaware of her surroundings.. only aware of recent series of incidents that are playing repeatedly infront of her eyes...

Fb :

While decorating her room...


Tu aata hai seene mein

Jab jab saansein bharti hoon

Tere dil ki galiyon se

Main har roz guzarti hoon


As she spread enough rose patels on bed... Then start thinking what to do next with remaining patels .. just then her mind click an idea and


Hawaa ke jaise chalta hai tu

Main ret jaisi udti hoon

Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega

Jaise main karti hoon

Ho ho….


she start twriling and patels roughly spread and covered all the floor with soft rosy red blanketof patels...


Meri nazar ka safar

Tujhpe hi aake ruke

Kehne ko baaqi hai kya

Kehna tha jo keh chuke


As blossom open out their fragrance start interwing with the atmospheric air and began to dominate the environment as ravi slowly start inhaling the scent a new kind of feeling start blooming inside of her heart ..


Meri nigaahein hain

Teri nigahon pe

Tujhe khabar kya be-khabar

Main tujhse hi chhup chhup kar

Teri aankhen padhti hoon

Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega

Jaise main karti hoon

Ho ho….


she is over whelmed with joy of her newly found love for her bhootnath ... She start missing him ...and wanted him on this movement with her .. but to kept it surprised she need to sacrifice his presence ...


Tu jo mujhe aa mila

Sapne hue sirphire

Hathon mein aate nahi

Udte hain lamhe mere

Meri hansi tujhse

Meri khushi tujhse

Tujhe khabar kya be-qadar


then start remembered their some kind of romantic movements... When their lips were just inch away... Ravi felt shy and covered her face with her palms


Jis din tujhko na dekhun

Pagal pagal phirti hoon

Kaun tujhe yun pyaar karega

Jaise main karti hoon

Ho ho….


Ravi thought :

Hye bholenath asa sb k sath hota hai piyar mn ya sirf mere sath ho raha hai ... Mere dimagh ki sui ja k us bhoothnath p atak jati hai or wahn s hilnay ka nam hi mahi leti... Kis asa us bhoothnath k sath bhi hota hai? Ya sirf mere dimagh ka fittor hai yeh sb ... Pata nahi kab yeh din dhalaye ga r mujhe apnay sawalon k jawab milain gaye us bhoothnath s ... Lakin use pahle mujhe dhara di k sath jana hoga hospital ... Ravi lock the room and left from there...


Fb 2 :

When shiva dought her and she tried to stop him to harm anita bt all her struggle in vain and shiva cut her braid and ravi slaps him hard and the she called police ... and police arrest shiva

Fb end


Jhootha jag rain baser

Saancha dard mera

Mrig-trishna sa moh piya

Naata mera ter

Naina.. jo saanjhe khwab dekhte t

Naina.. bichad ke aaj ro diye hain yu

Naina.. jo milke raat jaagte thay

Naina..

sehar mein palken meechte hain yu

Juda huye kadm

Jinhone li thi ye kasam

Milke chalenge hardum

Ab baant'te hain ye gham

Bheege naina..

jo khidkhiyon se jhankte thy

Naina..

ghutan mein band ho gaye hai yun

Her heart broke into million pieces ... She is unable to control her emotions any more and collapsed in the middle of road .. start crying...


Saans hairaan hai

Mann pareshaan hai

Ho rahi si kyun ruaansa ye meri jaan ha

Kyun nirasha se hai

Aas haari huy

Kyun sawaalon ka utha sa

Dil mein toofaan ha

Naina.. thhe aasmaan ke sitaare

Naina.. grahan mein aaj toot'te hain yu

Naina.. kabhi jo dhoop senkte thhay

Naina.. thehar ke chhaaon dhoondhte hain yu


Ravi thought :

Kesay hath utha lia mn n tujhe p shiva ... Kesay ...n to tujh s buht piyar karti hn... Jb jb tere kareeb anay lagti hn kuch na kuch asa ho jata hai k hamre beech milon ka fasla a k khara ho jata hai... plz mujhe maaf kar de shiva ... And she cried her all heart out ...


Juda huye kadam

Jinhone li thi ye kasam

Milke chalenge hardum

Ab baant'te hain ye gham

Bheege naina..

jo sanjhe khwab dekhte the

Naina..

bichhad ke aaj ro diye hain yun


after some time suddenly her broken expression changes into some kind of frim determination then she stands on her feet and wipes her tears and start moving in the direction of pandiya niwas...

Suddenly a car hits her hard ... In result she had to lost her consiousnes and falls on ground ... People start gathered there to find her identity... Just that moment her fone rings ..

A person from crowd pick it up

Person dekho dekho kisi ka fone a raha hai is k fone p ...

Crowd of People : han han uthao r dekho kon hai..

Person attende the call

Person : helo

Mami : helo kon ..

Then she check the nmber again ... Ravi flashes on her screen

Mami thought :

Nam to ravi ka hai per yeh awaz kis ki hai .

Then she talk back again

Mami : helo ap ko ho yeh nmber to meri ravi ka hai..

Person : mam ap jo bhi hn jaldi s chowck p a jaye in madam ka accident ho gaya hai...

Mami : hey mara bhogilala accident .. wo bhi meri dekri ravi ka... M.. mn ...n abhi ati hn ...

Mami left for the place hurriedly...

Here shiva is in cell ... Angerly he start writing i hate you ravi on wall of the jail..

Small ravi appear infront of him

S.ravi : dekh shiva to 10 saal pehlay bhi asa tha r aj bji asa hai dekha ter le ghusay n aj tujhe kahan s kahan puhcha dia ...

Shiva : aye tu yeh bhi a gai mere sar p nachnay ... Ja nikal yehn s ...

And small ravi vanished ...

Then he got FB of their childhood (as in serial)

His family visit the station to bail him bt all in vain... As they said he will only release when the filled complaint will taken back by the person who filed it ... Everyone left to find the other solution because ravi is not at home and other then ravi no one will agree to bail him out...

Shiva sitting on bench and again start boilng with anger...

Suddenly he heard the laughing of anita loudly .

Shiva turns and saw her standing infront of him...

Anita : dekha shiva tu n kesay meri behn n tere dil mn ghus k tujhe tor k rakh dia hai... Chatan pandya bana phirta tha na tu... Dekh kesay is chatan ko reza reza kar dia hai us n tujhe... Tu us k piyar mn pagal r wo teri nafrat mn pagal... Tu soch bhi nahi skta kitni nafrat karti hai wo tujh s ... bs ek dafa yeh divorce wala jhamela khatam ho to wo r ajay ek dusray s shadi kar lain...

Shiva lost his temper now... and held her neck from behind the bar ..

Shiva : aye ... Kia bakwas kar rahi hai tu..

Anita screams and act innocently ... police comes there and got her free from his hold .. and one of police man slap him hard .. that his corner of right lip bleed ..

Then they comes out again closes the door and prisoned him inside the cell again... his 3yes fixed on anita ...

Anita turns and smriks at him

Shiva thought :

Bs ek dafa niklnay de mujhe yehn s phr dekhvti tera kia hall karta hun mn ... R us chipkali ko bhi mn dekh loon ga..

And he slammed his hand on the sticks of the cell door...

Here mami layed ravi on bed and calls the doctor...

Doctor check her ..

Doctor : kafi gehra sadma laga hai in ko ... In ki emotionally halat sai nahi hn ... In ka pulse rate neechay ja raha hai lagta hai jesay inhn n umeed hi chor di hai jeenay ki...

Mami : mara bhogilal abhi is ki umer hi kia hai jo yeh umeed chor rahi hai... Yeh sb us jangle gawar shiva ki waja s ho raha hai.. meri bachi ki kia halat nana di hai us n ...

Doctor : mn n dawain likh di hn ap in ko 2 2 ghantay bad de dijye ga... Hopefully 24 ghantay hosh a jaye ga in ko.... Magar yad rahe kisi kisam ki tension s door rakhiya ga in ko...

Mami nodes doctor left ...

Here hardik come to know everything from kaka and kidnapped he tied her on chair ..Anita scream

anita : choro mujhe... Choro

Hartik slams his hand on the arm of chair Anita got scared ...

Hardik : aye ... anita chup chap bethi rahe warna aj mn khud nahi janta mn kia karon ga tere sath

Anita : hartik tu chata kia hai... Kun bandh k rakha hai mujhe yehn tu n....

Hardik : mn jo chata hun na wo to mn karwa k rahon ga tere

Hardik smriks..

Gombie comes to jail and hand over the papers to inspector

Gombie : yeh lijye inspector sahab shiva k bail k papers ab ap chor dijye ...

Inspector check the papers

Inspector : chor do use le ao...

shiva relased from jail

Inspector : aj to mn chor raha hun agr agli bar hoshiyari ki na to mn ase mar lagaon ga k tere 7 naslain yad rakhain ge...

Shiva about to scream bt gombie signal him to kept quit and shiva didn't react

Both gombie m shiva left from there

Here anita is in her room and angerly broke her mirror...

Anita : how dare he... Himat kesay hui us ki.. buht bari ghalti ki hai us n ... Is ki qemat chukani hoge us ko... Wo bjo sood smait...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Interesting 🥰😍😘

Update soon........

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Interesting 🥰😍😘

Update soon........

Thank you ... 😍😍😍😍

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Originally posted by: Kfof

Interesting!! ❤❤

Thanks alot 😇😇😇😇

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Looks interesting 😍

Seems like Hardik is going to have some good role to play in your story at least. Show mei toh bas naam k liye hai. 😅

Continue soon.

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Interesting

Aim my its Hardik not Hartik 😆

Lekin manna padega Hardik ko 😈

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interesting one😁😁😁looking forward for more......

ek suggestion du.....ye anita ko kidnap karke hardik usse shaadi kar le.....angst wala relationship.....ye anita ka chapter hi over....#AnIk...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Interesting

Aim my its Hardik not Hartik 😆

Lekin manna padega Hardik ko 😈

Thanks alot .. ❤️❤️❤️Lols wo prof check nahi kia let me correct it

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Originally posted by: virangna2005

interesting one😁😁😁looking forward for more......

ek suggestion du.....ye anita ko kidnap karke hardik usse shaadi kar le.....angst wala relationship.....ye anita ka chapter hi over....#AnIk...🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nice suggestion let me think then in this direction ... 😉😉😉😉

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Thanks dear 😇😇😇

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