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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Kras1

it was wow yr

i m happy show mein nahi to kam se kam yaha forum mein to humein anu's professional growth aur maan scenes dekhne mil rahe

all thanks to amazing writers of this forum😳

thanks a lot for writing this for us🤗

Thank you, yaara! ❤️❤️


I'm glad you enjoyed this one!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Sanara555

Your writing honestly makes me so happy! Your Drabbles and the few other stories you have posted so far! Really looking forward to more 💕

Thank you so much for your lovely words! ❤️❤️ I'm looking forward to keep entertaining as well!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Hello!!


I'm Soo excited to share this one! I've thoroughly enjoyed writing it, so much that it was done within minutes but due to packed weekend schedule couldn't post it earlier.


I hope you'd like love this one! 😜



PART 3:



"Anooojjj."



Head ducked at the junction between Anu's neck and shoulder, Anuj's smirk grazed her skin, tenderly. His lips closed over the hollow of her left collar bone in a feather-soft kiss. Anu shuddered taking in a few shallow breaths in quick succession, inviting his gaze more to the slant of her slender neck and the veins that popped around.


Pressing his body further into the depths of her curves and crevices with an innocent intent of exploration, he supported her against the door of his room when her knees wobbled.



His hands rested at both the sides of her waist but weren't quite at rest. His fingers were scouting the region around, inch by inch, digging and rubbing. Being deprived of the uninhibited access on the right side by the crossover of her saree's drape around her belly, his purposeful index finger traced the seam of the traitorous cloth and flicked it away, remorselessly.



Anu exploded with a gamut of sensations like a firework and it's safe to say she couldn't quite place any one of it. Her throat was parched and yet she demanded more.



Flickering his gaze above, Anuj admired the mirroring of his raw desires and amorousness on Anu's face. Another moan of his name was dancing at the tip of her tongue and he just knew how to enrich it with her voice.


One of his hands reached her flustered face to cup her cheek as the tips of his fingers lost inside the veil of her hairs behind her ear. Nuzzling his way up, the tip of his nose traced the seam of her neck towards the undersurface of her chin. He was being gentle with the force lest the prickles of his stubble leave tiny dotted marks over the most conspicuous area of her face.


Anu's arms flung around his shoulder. Squeezing and pulling him in, rather provocatively. If he thought it was a game, he would be at the receiving end too. One of her hands traced the nape of his neck, yanking his hair with a firm squeeze.


Halfway through his nuzzling around, reaching another side, his lips felt the resonance arising from deep within her throat as she moaned.


"A..noooojj."



Her voice was deep, sensuous, and quavery indicating her onerous efforts to spill it. Anuj thoroughly enjoyed the modulation of her extra 'ooo' and her extra 'desires' in his name. Just Anu's things.



Highly charged by her disproportionate reactions, he peppered kisses all along the column of her neck, now reaching towards her ear. She kept on angling her face according to his advances. Eyes sparkling with a naughty glint, face gleaming with innocent joy, Anuj dared to place an open-mouthed kiss behind her ear followed by a quick bite at the earlobe.



"Anooooojjj..."



"Anoooojjj..."



"Annuuu.."



Anu was jolted back to reality. She sat straight at once. Hot, wrung, and bereft.


"Anu.."


Mouth hanging open, heart racing with a speed abnormal for human consideration, her eyes squeezed and widened multiple times, trying to take in her surrounding.


"Anu.."


Instinctively, she turned around and looked at the door where she was stuck moments ago, albeit in her dream. On finding it closed and devoid of two bodies tangled in singularity, she released a heavy breath she had no idea since when she was holding.


"Anu.."


Placing a hand over her heart, momentarily closing her eyes, she tried to even her breathing.


A few moments later, better composed, as she opened her eyes, it finally rested on a confused and concerned Anuj who was trying to gain her attention for a longer time than she's aware of. He was sitting at the foot end of the couch she was leisurely resting at, dreaming some sinful fantasies.


"Anu, Tum aese ajeeb se chilla kyu rahi thi? Koi sapna tha kya?"


Suddenly, she was bothered. Embarrassed beyond belief, she couldn't meet his eyes. Slapping her forehead, she started chiding herself in the privacy of her head, 'Pagal chokri! Kuch bhi sochti rehti hai.'


Slightly tilting his head, trying to intrude her private moment, Anuj asked, "Anu, tum theek ho?"



The outline of her ears turned pink as she hid a flustered smile, animatedly nodding her head for Anuj.



*****



This one's for Koms because she had nudged me to write something tharki and this was the result.


Do lemme know your views about the same.

Edited by docritu99 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: docritu99


Part 1



As Anuj passed through the corridors of his office, he inhaled the vibrance of being back to the work after a long week. But the fragrance he was longing for greeted him in his cabin.


For the umpteenth time, he's happy with the way he dodged the idea of a new cabin for Anupama. After all, sharing is caring. With an added advantage of the view in his cabin, her view.


Slightly perched up on the chair, Anu was incessantly tapping the keys on her laptop, the one given by him, smartly using the cover of the company's project policy. The professionalism and speed with which she was using the gadget it was impossible to predict she started using a laptop for only a month.


She is a quick learner and he is a proud teacher. How he wished to teach her his favourite language of love!


Too bad his head injury had caused him a week's loss of admiring and ogling at Anu's work mode. But the same week has provided him the rare chance to witness her morning glory, with slightly damp open hairs and flushed cheeks, when she used to come to wake him up. His dreamy eyes played those visuals, nostalgically.


Before he could lose it to the temptation of his dreams, he shook his heart off those desires and entered inside the cabin. He had Anu's attention instantly as he settled down on his chair.


Anu's gaze followed all his movements from his courteous acknowledgment with a sweet smile, his slender index finger switching on his laptop, opening his diary, extending his arm to reach out to his pen, unbuttoning his suit, to adjusting the collar around his neck. Suddenly, the words on her laptop's screen became too bleak and blurry to be focussed.


She had to avert her gaze for the sake of her sanity. She had to admit, she missed seeing him in this prim-proper businessman suave. He's one such handsome person.


Forced to give her eyes the fill of him, she tentatively looked above her lashes. Anuj had his diligent eyes focused on the file while his tongue was slightly poking out, mercilessly caught between his lips. It was such a natural human act but it appeared so tantalizing at the moment that Anu could only sigh and continue to look at him unabashedly.


Her private moment of staring received a sharp jab as Anuj suddenly peered at her and asked, "Anu, tum.."


"Maine kuch nahi dekha!" Anu blurted out before he could complete his question, too horrified to be caught staring inappropriately. She shook her head vigorously in an attempt to stress her words.


Thoroughly confused by her misplaced reactions, Anuj patiently tried to ask again, "Anu, mai puch raha tha ki tumne kya socha.."


"Maine kuch socha bhi nahi. Sacchi!" Anu jumped into her defence, not giving him the chance to complete his question, leaving him baffled beyond belief.


"..iss new idea ke bareme." Anuj trailed of his words, suspiciously staring at the wide-eyed strung-up Anu.


Flustered, Anu bit her tongue. Downcasting her eyes away from his prying gaze, she scratched her forehead with two of her fingers. Another of her lame attempts to hide her embarrassed face from Anuj.


Before she could utilise the moment to recover from the goof up, Anuj asked, ever so tenderly, "Anu, tum theek ho?"


Anu could only nod her downward-looking head, without meeting his eyes.


****


So, how was it?


Don't forget to drop down your thoughts!

This was amazing.... so so cute.. the smallest detail like anuj's precious fingers n sauve look.. u have captured everything so perfectly... hope makers steal this scene from ur drabble n gaurav n rups make this scene a legendary one on screen

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Posted: 3 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: docritu99

Hello!!


I'm Soo excited to share this one! I've thoroughly enjoyed writing it, so much that it was done within minutes but due to packed weekend schedule couldn't post it earlier.


I hope you'd like love this one! 😜



PART 3:



"Anooojjj."



Head ducked at the junction between Anu's neck and shoulder, Anuj's smirk grazed her skin, tenderly. His lips closed over the hollow of her left collar bone in a feather-soft kiss. Anu shuddered taking in a few shallow breaths in quick succession, inviting his gaze more to the slant of her slender neck and the veins that popped around.


Pressing his body further into the depths of her curves and crevices with an innocent intent of exploration, he supported her against the door of his room when her knees wobbled.



His hands rested at both the sides of her waist but weren't quite at rest. His fingers were scouting the region around, inch by inch, digging and rubbing. Being deprived of the uninhibited access on the right side by the crossover of her saree's drape around her belly, his purposeful index finger traced the seam of the traitorous cloth and flicked it away, remorselessly.



Anu exploded with a gamut of sensations like a firework and it's safe to say she couldn't quite place any one of it. Her throat was parched and yet she demanded more.



Flickering his gaze above, Anuj admired the mirroring of his raw desires and amorousness on Anu's face. Another moan of his name was dancing at the tip of her tongue and he just knew how to enrich it with her voice.


One of his hands reached her flustered face to cup her cheek as the tips of his fingers lost inside the veil of her hairs behind her ear. Nuzzling his way up, the tip of his nose traced the seam of her neck towards the undersurface of her chin. He was being gentle with the force lest the prickles of his stubble leave tiny dotted marks over the most conspicuous area of her face.


Anu's arms flung around his shoulder. Squeezing and pulling him in, rather provocatively. If he thought it was a game, he would be at the receiving end too. One of her hands traced the nape of his neck, yanking his hair with a firm squeeze.


Halfway through his nuzzling around, reaching another side, his lips felt the resonance arising from deep within her throat as she moaned.


"A..noooojj."



Her voice was deep, sensuous, and quavery indicating her onerous efforts to spill it. Anuj thoroughly enjoyed the modulation of her extra 'ooo' and her extra 'desires' in his name. Just Anu's things.



Highly charged by her disproportionate reactions, he peppered kisses all along the column of her neck, now reaching towards her ear. She kept on angling her face according to his advances. Eyes sparkling with a naughty glint, face gleaming with innocent joy, Anuj dared to place an open-mouthed kiss behind her ear followed by a quick bite at the earlobe.



"Anooooojjj..."



"Anoooojjj..."



"Annuuu.."



Anu was jolted back to reality. She sat straight at once. Hot, wrung, and bereft.


"Anu.."


Mouth hanging open, heart racing with a speed abnormal for human consideration, her eyes squeezed and widened multiple times, trying to take in her surrounding.


"Anu.."


Instinctively, she turned around and looked at the door where she was stuck moments ago, albeit in her dream. On finding it closed and devoid of two bodies tangled in singularity, she released a heavy breath she had no idea since when she was holding.


"Anu.."


Placing a hand over her heart, momentarily closing her eyes, she tried to even her breathing.


A few moments later, better composed, as she opened her eyes, it finally rested on a confused and concerned Anuj who was trying to gain her attention for a longer time than she's aware of. He was sitting at the foot end of the couch she was leisurely resting at, dreaming some sinful fantasies.


"Anu, Tum aese ajeeb se chilla kyu rahi thi? Koi sapna tha kya?"


Suddenly, she was bothered. Embarrassed beyond belief, she couldn't meet his eyes. Slapping her forehead, she started chiding herself in the privacy of her head, 'Pagal chokri! Kuch bhi sochti rehti hai.'


Slightly tilting his head, trying to intrude her private moment, Anuj asked, "Anu, tum theek ho?"



The outline of her ears turned pink as she hid a flustered smile, animatedly nodding her head for Anuj.



*****



This one's for Koms because she had nudged me to write something tharki and this was the result.


Do lemme know your views about the same.

Ab bus Anu ka agla dream yahi hona chahiye... waise bhi Hamari anu jyada bold hai.. budhuraam bholuraam chokre k comparison mein

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Posted: 3 years ago
#36

Riya jaan… kya taraki update likha hai tu ne 🔥🔥🔥.. maaza aagaya padh ke. I loved it…. loved it….absolutely loved it 😍😍😍🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#37

You won't believe Riya, I am leisurely sitting on my couch just like Anu but reading your sinful OS my friend! 🤣 I don't have to dream like Anu coz my friend writes it up for me. Thank you for this one, it was scintillating. How do you and other writers write about similar love making OS yet so differently, so good with words. I'm amazed by the talent our forum has. We are blessed. ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#38

hahHahahaahhah

This is so 🔥 but for some reason I can’t stop laughing. Poor Anu 😂


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Posted: 3 years ago
#39
Wow.. poor Anu, she would have been left so flushed and hot.... how would she even look at Anuj post that.... so hot !!
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Posted: 3 years ago
#40

These dreams of Anu are getting sensual and erotic. Damn, are you trying to manifest something through this one-shot.😉


Though disappointed with the ending, liked the new drabble. 👏

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