Arylie OS: First lessons, first poems, rated 16+ - Page 2

Nice......amazing as always... Do write more....😊

This was beautifully written. Loved how Aryan & Imlie expressed themselves.

Eagerly waiting for further updates!

This is my favourite. I teared up a bit.

Originally posted by: lovereading14

This was such a cute update... you captured the apprehensions of a young girl venturing into sexual territory for the first time along... a similar apprehension for aryan when it comes to being all mushy with Imlie. So beautifully captured!

But the heat dial on this one was down ... darling I need something steamy soon!!!!

Also what kind of editor you have hired? Must cut her salary... THREE spelling mistakes!? Pooja... what is this behaviour 🤪🤪???

Spelling mistakes are all mine 😳 Just hasty stuff. Teri pyaas bujhane

Girl I woke up at 5 and wrote this in 1hour flat. This one I will own. It is not Pooja.

The most beautiful love lesson I have ever seen. I read it with such a slow pace just to savour every moment you have written. This was outstandingly breathtaking. Those subtle moments and then that gift of poem and her confession. Everything was beautiful about it.❤️ waiting for more.

Originally posted by: mltr16

Spelling mistakes are all mine 😳 Just hasty stuff. Teri pyaas bujhane

Girl I woke up at 5 and wrote this in 1hour flat. This one I will own. It is not Pooja.

darling writers can make mistakes ( i write too, terribly but still 🤪) Editor kis kaam ka agar spelling mistakes thik na kare toh?

Waise chill... just pulling her leg... all fun and games

pyaas bujhane ke liye heat dial ko badhao... yeh toh ghat gaya 😭

BTW kya dedication hai 👏,

Awwww, you wrote Imlie's awkwardness and excitement soo well, felt very real.

Aru's lesson 🥵 👌🏻, seems like it's a lesson she forgets even after marriage ( in the ff) 🤭

The end made me emosh and now I need to find chocolate for that 🍫

#KadhiGang 💪🏻

Originally posted by: lovereading14

darling writers can make mistakes ( i write too, terribly but still 🤪) Editor kis kaam ka agar spelling mistakes thik na kare toh?

Waise chill... just pulling her leg... all fun and games

pyaas bujhane ke liye heat dial ko badhao... yeh toh ghat gaya 😭

BTW kya dedication hai 👏,

Dedication nahi, I tell Pooja there are two monkeys on my neck, that make me write whether I want to or not. I am just trying to get them out of my system so I can get back to my life 🤪🤪🤪 Damn, I used to wake up at 5 to meditate on spiritual stuff!!! Now I meditate on mundane matters......sigh, such is my life post Arylie.

I know, I pull her leg too, seems like she is everybody's favorite scapegoat. But I try to clean up my writing as much as I can when I have adequate time, which of late....I need to slow down and go back to Full Circle. As far as writing steamier stuff, girlies, I started writing, what less than one month ago? first story ever. Before that I had not ventured into writing of any sort, except test papers and a couple of articles in residency for our resident journal. So, to be able to graduate to anything steamier than this is going to take time or maybe never.

I am a fairly Satvik person after all 🤣🤣 With these stories I am Rajas-Tamas and now tum log to pure tamasik banane pe tule ho!! 🤪

Waise, seriously, I still say, you guys do keep me going. And I am having fun along the way, so thanks!! 🤗

Originally posted by: captain_waffle

Awwww, you wrote Imlie's awkwardness and excitement soo well, felt very real.

Aru's lesson 🥵 👌🏻, seems like it's a lesson she forgets even after marriage ( in the ff) 🤭

The end made me emosh and now I need to find chocolate for that 🍫

#KadhiGang 💪🏻

Ahhh, does she forget ....or does she pretend to forget?! Two can play that game, like she says. 😉😉

Haye..so good ..Akadu Rathore is secretly a softie..hum ladkiyon ko bad boys with soft heart..pasand hote hain..