Shivi Os : bhootnath Proposal for chipkali : completed

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Hy guys ... Hope you all are doing well... From the day i saw ravi n shiva romantic sbs this idea click in my mind bt due to some busy schedule i was unable to write it down .. now i got little bit time so here it is...

Scene started from where shiva left the spot angerly... and comes downstairs rushing toward main door but before leaving he through the stuff which blockes his way from leaving.. everone shocked on his behaviour ..specially Dhara that what happens suddenly between them so serious.. here anita felt glad for the success of her plan and she quickly type msg to motiben

Thanks alot .. ap n jesa bola tha mn n wesa hi kia bilkul... N guess what ravi r shiva ka jhagra ho gaya hai ... Jitnay kadm ek dusray ki traf barhaye thay unhn n .. use 10 kadam peechay a gaye wo log... Hope so age bhi hum isi traha successfull hotay rahain...

Moti ben is in meeting when she got the text and felt happy and proud on her evil mind ... And place her cell back on table ..

Here shiva was walking on road with mix of emotions...


Roothi rothi. sari raatein

Fikhe fikhe. sare din.

Virani si virani hai

Tanhai si tanhai hai

Aur ek hum hai.

Pyaar ke bin

Har palchin

Chhan Se jo tute koi sapna


He felt anger, betrayal, heartbroken...

Few moments ago he was on the full swing of joy... He was restless to felt the newly found emotion with his chipkali... only His chipkali ... restless to felt and touch her tiny waist... Her face surrounded by his strong palms...


Patharo ki. is nagari mein

Pathar chehre. pathar dil.

Phirta hai mara mara kyun rahon mein tu awara

Yahan na hoga.

Kuch hasil.


All shattered .. every emotion every moment which he dreamt to spent with her broken into pieces...


Mere dil chhan se jo tute koi sapna

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna hai toh

.

Unable to tolated more he collapsed on the ground and screams ...

R...A.. a....a ..a v...iiiii....


Yeh kyun hota hai. (kyun hota hai)

Jab yeh. dil rota hai (dil rota hai)

Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein

Jag suna lage

Chhan Se jo tute koi sapna

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage


Shiva : islye darta tha mn tujhe kuch bhi batanay s ... Kaha tha tujhe tu apni zindgin azad hai chali ja mere s door... Sambhal leta mn khud ko jesay tesay kar k ... Magar ti hi zid p ari hui the na ... Phr ab kun ..... K..u.....n........ Kun.......


Koi rahe na jab apna

Jag suna suna lage

Jag suna suna lage re...

Suna. lage. re...


And he cried his whole heart out...


Here ravi realized whats going in her surroundings and shocked ... Shocked to realize what will going to be happened and actually what happens ...


Hua hai aaj pehli baar

Jo aise muskuraya hoon

Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye

Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon...


Ravi monologe : yeh sab... Kia shiva aj mujh se....

How she didn't notice the decore and his intentions she was happy that her dream will going to be true....

but suddenly realized she just runied everything away...

Ravi monologue : kia mn n shiva ka dil toda hai ?.... Kia shiva mujh s door.... Nahi nahi .....

she sits on her knees and took the petals in her hand.... Which just flew away from her hand with wind she try to hold them but all in vain....she felt someone snatched him from her...

Ravi adamant that :

He was hurt she need to pacify him.. she need to rectify her mistake .. she need to confess her feelings for him... Now she have to made the things falls on their right place....

Ravi stands with frimness on her face...

Ravi monologe : ab mujhe sb kuch sahi karna hoga jo kuch bhi bigra hai ...

Here shiva rushing back ...

Dhara : shiva tu a gaya... Kia hua tha ..? Sb kuch theek to hai na tum dono k beech.... tu bolay to mn ravi s bat karon kia ?

Shiva : nahi bhabhi mn use khud nipta loon ga ap bech mn mat paroo...

Dhara : par shiva mn wo ..

Shiva holds her hand in his

Shiva : bharosa hai mujh p ?

Dhara nodes...

Shiva : bs phr ise banay rakho

And he rushed back upstairs...


Shiva monologue : bs buht ho gaya chipkali tera yeh natak ... Aj ar ya par... aj ya to hamesha hamesha k liye meri ho jaye ge ya phr....


Hua hai aaj pehli baar

Jo aise muskuraya hoon

Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye

Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon

Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri

Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon

Main tumse ishq karne ki

Ijaazat rabb se laaya hoon


As he opened the door light got on and shiva is surprised to saw all the things back to their places ...


Zameen se aasmaan tak

Hum dhoondh aaye jahan saara

Bana paaya nahi ab tak

Khuda tumse koi pyaara

Zameen se aasmaan tak

Hum dhoondh aaye jahan saara

Bana paaya nahi ab tak

Khuda tumse koi pyaara


Shiva was about to left the spot he felt frim arms arround him again he tries to move but all was useless...


Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan

Sab bewajah ki hain tarifiyaan


Shiva : aye chipkali janay de... magnet ki traha kia chipki hui hai...

Ravi : mujhe ase akela chor k jaye ga bhootnath

Shiva : ye sb kia hai ravi...

Ravi : wahi jo pahle tu n banaya r bad mn sab bigar k chala gaya... To mn n dobara sawar dia sb...

Shiva again tries to leave... ravi again holds him more tightly...

SHiva : nahi aj nahi....

Ravi : wahi to mn kehna chahti hun aj nahi shiva... Please .. with puppy face

Shiva : dekh ravi mujh mn ab himat nahi hai k ek bar phir mera dil too...

Suddenly he stops as he felt the little lips of her touches his back....

Ravi : please shiva.... please ....


Main likh doon aasmaan par ye

Ke padh lega jahan saara

Hua na hoga ab koi

Yahan hum do sa dobara


Shiva : aye chipkali peet peechay kia kar rahi samnay s a na bataon tujhe...

Ravi smiles little

Shiva holds her hands frimly and turns toward her... He can easily felt the pain in her swellen eyes ... and she also felt his heartbroken in his redish eyes...

Both cups eachother face... And wipes eachother tears

Ravi : kia kehna chata tha ... Bol mn sunana chahti hn...

Shiva : abhi jb mn nikla tha na to..

Ravi holds his Collar...

Ravi : to kia shiva..


FB :

Shiva cries on ground ... Suddenly he got thought of ravi ... How he switches off the lights before leaving and left her in darkness... she must be scared...


Shiva : tera khayal aya to phr s mn khencha chala aya ...

Ravi mummers : Megnet jo theri mn ... tujhe to khenchna tha na...


Main duniya bhar ki taarifein

Tere sajde mein laaya hoon

Main tumse ishq karne ki

Ijaazat rabb se laaya hoon

Rabb se laaya hoon


Shiva bent on his knees


Shiva : kia tu zindgi bhar is bhootnath ki chipkali ban k rahe ge ? Kia mujhe sari zindgi k liye teri punch kevjnay ka haq dege? Kia zindgi bhar ase megnet ki traha mujhe chipki rahe ge?


Tu hai jo rubaru mere

Bada mehfooz rehta hoon

Tere milne ka shukrana

Khuda se roj karta hoon


Ravi nodes with teary eyes... and make him stand back and hugs him ...


Tu hai jo rubaru mere

Bada mehfooz rehta hoon

Tere milne ka shukrana

Khuda se roj karta hoon


Shiva : i love you ravi...

Ravi : i love you too shiva...

Shiva break the hug

Shiva : to phir chalain ?


Humko pata hai yeh nadaniyaan hain

Aawara dil ki hai aawariyan


Ravi happily straighten her hands to sign him to carry her in his arms...


Yeh dil pagal bana baitha

Ise ab tu hi samjha de

Dikhe tujhme meri duniya

Meri duniya tu banja re


Shiva : bachon s zyada bachi to tu hai...


Hoon khushkismat jo kismat se

Tumhe aise main paaya hoon

Main tumse ishq karne ki

Ijaazat rabb se laaya hoon..


And happily carry her in bridal style toward their room .. or new destination of their relationship

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Tagged you guys

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Beautiful❣️❣️

Hope so in show also this happens as i don't want the fight to stretch 🤩

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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Beautiful❣️❣️

Hope so in show also this happens as i don't want the fight to stretch 🤩

Thanks alot... 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️

Hope asa kuch ho i also don't want that they strech the fight 😒😒😒😒

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Originally posted by: virangna2005

😘😘😘

that's lovely......

Thank you 😇😇🤩🤩🤩

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Beautiful and they're back in their room!❤️

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Amazinggggg Aimmy😍🥳

I felt so happy reading this

Just perfect💗

Loved it sooooo much🤗

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Originally posted by: majoni03

Beautiful story❤️

Thanks alot dear 😇😇😇

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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Beautiful and they're back in their room!❤️

Thanks alot ... Yes they are back with bang 😂😂😂😂

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Originally posted by: Paru95

Amazinggggg Aimmy😍🥳

I felt so happy reading this

Just perfect💗

Loved it sooooo much🤗

Awww thanks alot.. this means alot for me... ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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