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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tejo returned to Moga to visit her ill father leaving angad and riya at shimla. She wanted an excuse to be away from him, jasmin and Fateh. She found out about the fake marriage and was shattered that she was kept in the dark. On top of that angad pushing her into a marriage and his lately awkward behavior was too much to handle.


The sudden turnaround in him was unbearable. A grey shade that she never saw before. She suffered two betrayals in a row expecting the third man to be a jewel of her life .


Unfortunately her evil destiny only gave her sorrow and nothing else. She was a good human. There's a saying be kind and u get the fruit of ur deeds' but she received none. She was puzzled.

When will i bear the fruit of my karma.


The next morning

10am , sandhus residence

She sank into her chair dropping the phone on the marble floor. Sati ran towards her. Tejo was extremely shocked.

"Kya hua tejo", . The other Sandhus joined along . She was shivering in fright from head to toe.

" Pani lao", biji instructed Dolly to get some water for her granddaughter.


A few minutes later, she calmed down and explained to her family that Angad's lawyer called stating that he left for London the previous night leaving Riya with her grandma.

The shocking part was not him leaving suddenly but the fact that he made her a heir to his Moga residence which was worth 300 crocres and 10 crocre worth fixed deposits with two crocre fund transfer into her three savings accounts.

Tejo Sandhu was a millionaire now.


Sati enquired , " kyun kiya usney aisa". They were all puzzled to angad's sudden act of kindness towards tejo to which she replied

"The lawyer will drop by in a while to explain the details. ".


Two hours later


Tejo ran upstairs to her room and locked the door, weeping badly and wanted some time alone.

Fateh , Virks and Sandhus were devastated . Jasmin was shocked.


A flashback

Virks came over as soon as they heard tejo receiving Angad's wonderful gift . Jasmin tagged along hearing the news from Nimmo who taunted her on the phone." Ur sister became a millionaire".


The lawyer passed to tejo angad's note in which he(angad) explained the truth of latest events in his life

After that she cried and locked herself in her room

What was the note about?


The note stated

Angad took off to London after tejo left for Moga. He was suffering from chronic liver disease for sometime and his condition became serious. Doctors told him that he didn't have enough time. He decided to come to India to settle unfinished business and when he met tejo , he felt like living again. He was fond of her but was not in love with her as he still loved his ex dearly who passed away with his parents in the same car that she was driving five years ago.


He lost all of them in an accident in London. Her name was Pooja. She was his fiancee. They were about to get married. She took his parents to some last minute marriage shopping that the deadly accident with a speeding truck took place on a highway due to heavy rain and a slippery road.


He surrendered to liquor and lost all hopes of living till tejo came into his life. She brought freshness but he knew she won't be there long as she was in love with her ex. He couldn't get his love but wanted her to get hers. So all the i love u and marrage proposal was an act just to push her towards fateh.


He requested Riya's nani's help to unite fateh and tejo promising her riya's custody after all he was not gonna live for long. Nani was aware of his illness. He came to India to settle the custody case and give riya's responsibility to her grandma. The custody fight was an act as well and nani telling fateh that he'a a psycho even that was planned. The whole shimla trip was a plan indeed. He got mr.sharms on board for a help as well. All of them knew about his disease.

He didn't have time and he had to do it fast.

He wanted to spend his last days in London with his grandparents.

The note ended with

Keep smiling Tejorita. I will always be there for u perhaps not physically but in ur thoughts.

May our beautiful friendship be always cherished even after i am gone far away and keep smiling.


In her room

She sat at her window. Wiping off her tears

She remembered the time she spent with him. He came as a cool breeze in her life extending his friendship and support. He was a healer. He was God sent. Then she realized that it was a fruit of her karma. Angad coming into her life and giving her the wonderful journey of friendship and leaving prosperity behind for her. It was all her karma . She became a millionaire overnight. She can run a business of her own or perhaps her own college


She looked up at the shining sky with twinkling stars that wished her the best for her new journey.


The end


Ps

Wished makers had taken this route to give their cameo a positive closure in the name of unexpected major twist. Though difficult to digest after the character butchering for trps but at least something was better than nothing on humanity grounds

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Posted: 3 years ago
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An idea came in mind so i wrote this today while having lunch . When u guys are free can read and comment .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I am not in EDT any longer. So tagged u all here.

This thought came to me last nite

A twist that writers can bring last minute for angad's closure if they have some brain s after all the raita they phelao with his negativity twist . They are getting backlash from viewers. They ruined their first caneo for ML

They have closed doors for future cameo or parallel lead when required for the story by constant torturing of their FL with betrayals.

Too much negativity .

U can read when u are free and give ur reviews

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging few more

A twist that came in mind . Thought of sharing

It won't happen onscreen as they are only keen for negative drama

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I Loved It.

It Was A Great Story The Series Really Sucks

Too Much Negativity With Angad Negative His Was The Perfect Character.

Now Fateh Will Be Together With Tejo.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is something sensible Ani.. finally I read something sensible.. 👍🏼 ( before going to bed)

To the makers of UD

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Well this is really nice plot and quite realistic too😆

I enjoyed reading this ❤️

But the way makers have shown Angad I don't think they can end him positive , but there are chances that his love for Tejo can change him atleast that way the character can end positively , but I don't see this coming too😔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Something sensible and much more logical than the crap currently going on. His sudden u turn is too shocking to digest. His popularity and fans wanting Tejo to move on with him came in between


I would love it if they give him proper closure rather than this pathetic negative work.


In UD world everyone who is problematic and pathetic is enjoying life and a good person is getting hurt and sadness. What kind of message is this.


Way to good Ani...u are too good a writer to make sense of this UD crap. Your stories are only good thing about this show and ofcource KVG and Ankit in white 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Something sensible and much more logical than the crap currently going on. His sudden u turn is too shocking to digest. His popularity and fans wanting Tejo to move on with him came in between


I would love it if they give him proper closure rather than this pathetic negative work.


In UD world everyone who is problematic and pathetic is enjoying life and a good person is getting hurt and sadness. What kind of message is this.


Way to good Ani...u are too good a writer to make sense of this UD crap. Your stories are only good thing about this show and ofcource KVG and Ankit in white 😳


Tq dear

The thought came last nite . But too sleepy to write.

Wrote today lunch time.

Hearing rumors major twist coming

Hopefully no heartaches

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: SilverBell

I Loved It.

It Was A Great Story The Series Really Sucks

Too Much Negativity With Angad Negative His Was The Perfect Character.

Now Fateh Will Be Together With Tejo.


I am hearing major twist coming in

Let's wait and see

Hope no heartaches

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