ShiVi Anecdotes: Bachpan Ke Kisse | Anecdote 7 - Pg22- Updated 1/26| - Page 10

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Posted: 3 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

very sweet! reading about ShiVi's childhood crossing over with the present day is always a bliss


Thank you Aaliya!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: mpks1

Anu, this was so cute! I loved it when you created the scenario for Shiva to start calling Raavi MKBKB😆

Raavi as always is forgiving, didn’t make big deal about his makeover. She will never find out even if she said they will talk tomorrow.
Waiting for the next one.


AAH thank you prema! Updating soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: nafees5

Aww that's such a beautiful drabble❤️

I really loved how you linked the shit door incident to their child hood and to the day of marriage❤

You won't believe but it actually had crossed my mind while watching that scene.. Like how it was Shiva who kicked open the door and held her when she was the most vulnerable❤️


Mazaa aya❤


Thank youuuu! comment on my other story.....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww. Beautiful. Loved it. A mix of childhood, fb to to the wedding day, and now this! ❤️


TWIN! Thank you!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Nups_mish

Ufff!! Anu these are soo beautiful! I always, always wanted to see more ShiVi childhood scenes, flashbacks, their past/childhood helps them realize that they cannot stay without each! Alas I dont think makers will ever show us that! Sad truth! But anecdotes like these help me explore their childhood, ShiVi ne bachpan me ye kiya hoga, wo kiya hoga! Such stories help fulfill my expectations that zi had from the show! Thank you for that Anu! And love you❤️❤️


Thank you so much nups!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Iktara22

My akkaa is the bestttumbest aakkkkaaaaaaaa...thank you for this,this is soo 😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️....this one is the bestest of all okay😭


jannnnnuu one moree cominggggg

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Posted: 3 years ago
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east or west, sara is best. give me audio please!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Note:

Y’all! I haven't written in a while but Miss.M tempted me to write this anecdote. Also, this is a purely Shiva only anecdote and a what if situation with a throwback to the haveli scene where Dhara asks Shiva to get Raavi a gift for her birthday! This anecdote is structured differently than the rest :)

I wrote this in 20 mins, so please forgive!


Anecdote 5

Present Day:

The Pandya family was discussing during breakfast about how to plan the perfect surprise party for Raavi as her birthday was the next day. Raavi was not in the haveli that morning as she stayed the night at her Maasi Maa’s house to complete the phagphera ritual.

Amidst the chaotic discussion about how Krish would not be able to keep the party planning a secret from Raavi, Dhara turned to Shiva and said, “Aur Shiva, shaadi ke baad yeh Raavi ki pehli birthday hai iss ghar mein, sochle kya gift dega!”

“Bhabhi main usse kuch gift vift nahi dena wala” Shiva responded sharply.

“Kyun nahi dega? Dena padega”

“Bhabhi-”

“Kuch nahi sunna mujhe, tu gift dega matlab dega” Dhara said.

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Shiva went back to his room, trying to think of a gift to give the chipkali.

“Kahan phasa diya bhabhi ne, uss mami ki behen ki beti ko toh maine zindagi mein tofa nahi diya, an kya doon?” Shiva thought to himself as he was pacing the room.

He looked at the dresser, “kuch make up ka samaan doon kya?” he thought but then shrugged that thought off.

Shiva walked up to the closet and opened it, “Saree doon? Chee” he left that thought as well.

“Shayad handbag? Nahi nahi, kuch gehene? Arrey nahi.” he continued to think.

He went and sat on the bed and released a sigh, “abbey, kya gift doon uss tubelight ko?” he asked out loud as he closed his eyes in frustration.

“Oye, bade Shiva” said a voice

Shiva opened his eyes in confusion and saw a 10 year old version of himself in front of him.

“Tu yahan?” Shiva asked

“Haan teri help karne aaya hoon” Chotu Shiva said

“Help? Kaisa Help?”

“Tujhe yaad nahi hoga pan mujhe yaad hai, tu ne na Raavi ke 9th birthday par usse ek gift diya” Chotu Shiva continued.

“Bilkul bhi nahi, maine usse kabhi koi tofa nahi diya”

“Arrey diya, main keh raha hoon na. Yaad karo. Accha ek hint deta hoon”

“Haan Please?” Shiva asked the younger version of himself excitedly.

“Hint hai uska nickname!” Chotu shiva said and vanished as Shiva blinked his eyes

“Oye! Kahan gaya tu?” Shiva asked as he looked around the room

“Nickname? Gadhedi? Nahi nahi. Umm. Dhakkan diya tha kya maine? Bilkul bhi nahi. OH CHIPKALI!” Shiva exclaimed as a memory came back to him.

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It was Raavi’s 9th birthday party and Gautam gave each of the brothers 15 rupees to buy a gift for Raavi.

Dev got her some hair clips, Krish bought her chocolates and a 10 year old Shiva picked up a plastic lizard to give her. He overheard Raavi and a friend conversing about their fears where Raavi mentioned her fear for lizards and the prankster Shiva could not let go of this opportunity.

Later, during the party, a 9 year old Raavi was opening all the gifts she received and thanking her friends. She then opened a small packet that did not have the name of the person who gifted it.

As she opened it, she let out a scream as soon as she realized she was holding a plastic lizard and went to hug her Maama.

Everyone at the party was trying to calm a screaming Raavi but there was only one person laughing, Shiva.

As Raavi heard the laugh, she looked at him and ran toward Shiva to teach him a lesson. However, before she could get hold of him, Gautam and Maama intervened and tried to stop a fight from erupting.

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Present Day:

Shiva chuckled at that memory and quickly got up to run to the market and buy another plastic chipkali for his chipkali’s birthday!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#99

Beautiful❤❤

Chottu Shiva was commendable 😘🥰😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ani!! Yay!!! I love it 😍😍😍😍 that's why she hugs him.. Secretly usse pata tha if he gives her that he'll get a hug (my brain has gone next level)


Omg for a 20 min write, that is amazing... Talented Anu!!! Wrote more more more!

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