Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 66

Omg!!! You're updating.. And i need to sleep for work tomorrow... Sooo, unfair!!! Okay. First thing tomorrow when I get a chance!!!

Lizzie, I loved the first part.❤❤

Shiva making his mom understand the situation and coming out of it with respect but not sacrificing himself was perfect 💚💚

Raavi Shiva sneak out 😂🤍🤍

I loved the description and words Raavi used to convince Maami infront of Shiva - for a girl they are so apt 🤎🤎

Waiting for next part💕💕

Riya!!! I read really quickly and can i just put one word down for now ( because typing my comment on my phone will take too long)

LOVE!!!

Okay longer comment and hopefully part 2&3 tomorrow!!!!

Okay.. Now I'm definitely not getting enough sleep

Part 2 was Hot!! Also unexpected...

Res this for comment on part 2!!

EK SECOND!!! YE KYA HUAAA???!!

MAIN ZARA SA DINNER KRNE GAYA AUR YE HOGYA??!!!

GALAT BAAT HAI YEEEE>>>

Kbse 1st position ke liye tehel raha hu main subeh se forum pe aas paas 😭😭

#NazarHatiDurghatnaGhatiMannnn🥺

RES hi kar deta hoon...

Chapat tho lag hi gayi hai🥺🤪

UNRES

Haaayyyeeelooooo?! Intensive Care Uniiiitttt?! We have a patient here.....

We need an oxygen cylinder and ice for the survivor.

HOLY MOTHER OF A WAESEL WALKING DOWN THE ROAD IN CROCS! What happened here?

Okaaay first of all we had a spine wala Shiva in the show up until a month back where they ruined him like no one's business...Moving on. This Shiva reminds me of him. The Shiva we all fell in love with because even if he was hot headed he still stood for the right whenever necessary. I loved him manaaofyying Suman. Like a level headed man. Young but also mature in ways that only show on occasions.

Shite.

This had me so bad. SO BAD. I giggled like no tomorrow.

“It was my own ass I was saving,”

If it your own ass you're saving and you cannot see her with anyone else please tell me you're up for commitment because I sense that you're not and you want her SO MUCH you might as well sleep with your insides curled with need to hold her close.

I KNEW THERE WAS SNEAKING UPCOMING! I SENSED IT!

And I sensed it right. HAHAHAHA. Everyone in PS universe knows how much I love him sneaking in her room and how I crave it in stories. I loved him sneaking and her getting worried but I wanted him to pine a bit more for forgiveness. Mujhe thoda aur manaana maaangta tha haan. She said thank you to him very easily. Which is gonna mean nothing because he gonna be incorrigible AF again.

For a minute I heard every woman in Raavi when she gave her monologue.

I have a feeling this Disha business is gonna come and bite him in the ass.

[Ughhhh he shouldn't have done the movie thing he gonna fuel the feelings she has and then he wouldn't be willing to give her the commitment she wants and = lord save her from the hurt]

Okaayyyy so this was the scene you wanted Disha in for? Sooooooo we done with her? She gone? Or she gonna be back?

Imagine 'Shiela Ki Jawani' in a function like that...

Dress and knee high boots? She gonna reduce him to pulp. Aaahhh the self conscious bit, the little things, always the little things that set the preset.

that’s my man, hands off!

Woahhhh woman! My man? Your man will break your heart in 30 mins stat. Tbh I didn't expect the singing to be in her list everything else was ranging from scandalous to mildly adventurous but this was something believable and something you'd totally imagine your Raavi writing in the list. The self conscious girl.

He silently berated himself for putting her in this position.

Yeah I did too until I found it was on her list. Sigh the FBs of Never have I ever. Sigggghhh// The confidence boost and making her loose her fear on stage? Massive plus point man! Not many would have cared. No one actually would have cared until it was someone who knew her inside out and since years. Shows care.

you’re so beautiful and I want you so much it hurts.

Then for the love of god say it but also don't because the minute you open your mouth everything goes south. Shush we'll work on that. Okayyy I know he was stopping him from kissing her because he'd really screw her up [and rightly so] good going. But we all know how that ended. I didn't expect her to get on and go head on with Disha. I thought she'd lurke and lay it on. She impressed me.

“Do you want to know what those kisses and hugs mean, Raavi? Exactly nothing. I let those women kiss me platonically because I feel nothing for them!”

My stupid heart jumped. Ik I'm pathetic. It shouldn't have. Wretched stupid heart//

“Yeah, Krish and I call her ‘The Octopus’."

I didn't understand my fuse has been off since yesterday and for some reason none of the innuendos register mannnn...What;s wrong?

“Because with you it wouldn’t be platonic. Because I wouldn’t be able to stop at just the one kiss.”

It started from here. My erratic heartbeat. It started here. I just- I...Nooo...Imma stay shut. Its too much of belonging and putting a plain simple girl on a pedestal above all he'd ever had and yet hurt her in the end. Its something I-...Nevermind. We move forward aaaannnnnddd BAM!...He gives a choice. Heart, all my heart. Asking..letting her make a choice. Why don't people learn this?

“Is it your wishlist? I don’t check all the boxes, do I?”

Oh My lovely lovely lovely girl. My poor baby. A mini heartbreak before the actual one. Ohhhh she went in for the KILL. Riled him up right. I didn't think she was capable. I don't know why she did it. Maybe because she'd felt he could do more and even though he had kept himself at bay she was kind of...like curious...or...full of need?... that she said it was disappointing?...He went wild didn't he? Probably because of how he'd flaunted his experiences before. MEN AND EGO. Arrghhh. Ughhh. God help them and their Karma for actions they do. And he dragged her her...what a sob.

That escalated quickly, the kiss, I mean. I didn't know if it stemmed from ego or from proving a point or from need but it was hot and I LOVED how it transformed to a full blown make out session. He smirked? Ughh. Please someone...just...HE MARKED HER. Holy smokes he marked her. I ask why?? I demand an answer why??? She really would have given herself to him if she was a little courageous and he hadn't implied what he did later on. For someone as a first kiss experience [even though I have zero] this was intense, even I can tell that.

“God, Raavi! Tell me to stop. Please. Tell me!”

I think somewhere in the middle he lost too. He might have started with a different reason but one taste and he weak. I knew she'd already addressed the fact about her feelings but for him..I don't think he has the slightest clue yet that there are feelings involved somewhere. He just thinks its pure attraction and something else that drives him to think he should be the one to protect her. He has no clue there are feelings involved even from her side and I feel once he gets a whiff of it we having a drama. Which I always ADORE! He must have stepped back because of the faux sense of protecting her from himself and probably knowing she wasn't the casual kind like him and she'd regret it later on. Maybe.

“Item # 1. Be kissed passionately in the rain or in the moonlight. There’s no chance of rain now, but we had the moonlight. You can tick that off your list!”

She almost reeled in shock, and sank to the ground, bewilderment and rage flooding her. She felt like she’d just been slapped. And now she wanted to slap him back. Hard. She wanted to make him bleed.

PLEASE PLS PLS PLS PLS can I do it? I'd love to. What a jerk. Why would you do this? That was a low blow. You know it was her first kiss and you shrugged of any possibility of a sentiment..even attraction. It was indeed like a slap. Hard and scalding and uncalled. He could have just left...but well.. I almost cried when she motivated herself not to. I would have cried. For a min there she was absolutely SO HURT that I couldn't breath...oh the agony. HE SHRUGGED? THE INSOLENT CAD. I hope he pines and she resists before he gets tears in his eyes. Make him suffer in that ONE WISH that was the first one you sent to me (the nymph one..he deserves it).

And that is why it hurt her more because she had willed herself into a fairy land where she thought he couldn't resist her either, forget feelings at least he'd never be someone so inconsiderate. Oh how I've sat there reading with hands to my mouth. This section felt brutal. So he's grinning and shrugging and doing everything and she'd breaking beneath the exterior she put up merely because some idiot refuses to accept the intensity of need he has within himself.

What's her 11th? Make Bhoothnath miserable and BEG for her? I'd love to see that. Truly.

My hands hurt but I have to ask ....YOU SAID 3 PARTS??!!!

Haaeeyooollooooo!

This is only two. Where the third?

Mama needs the third part. NOWWWWWWWW

First of all - Oh My God!!!! OMG!!! I swear I did nit expect kiss to happen so soon and in this chapter but that was so HOT🔥🔥🔥

Now from starting -

Disha - Mahn how can she make herself joke infront of Man and try to kiss forcing him but I was actually laughing and pitying her😂😂🤭

Shukla Aunty - Sloppy kisses😂

Raavi entry and Both are floored looking at each other🙈🔥

I really loved the whole song sequence - how Shiva encouraged her, what Raavi felt at start and I could totally relate to her as I seriously have stage fear where even thinking of saying infeont of public I used to shiver. The way you have described her fear, her nervousness, Shiva's support, Shiva helping her to the last with singing her and Raavi becamong free was superb ❤❤❤❤

Then Mistotle and Raavi thinking why Shiva does not want to kiss her but the first kiss - mahn to be truthful while reading it I was also so disappointed like Bas!! Itna sa hi!! And Raavi's word to Shiva were fabulous 🙈😂❤ but I like Shiva's concern ❤❤ But before the kiss - it was so intense how Shiva described where he wanted to kiss her 🔥🔥

Then Second kiss - I have no worda for it to write how amazing you had written I could actually feel all the emotions and feelings - it was PERFECT 🥳🥳❤🔥

Last Part - Alongwith Raavi, My heart also broke - I mean you just do not say that after Kissing a girl like you are doing a favor on her. The way you have projected Raavi's pain and anger was perfect. And I like Raavi's attitude of not letting hime get under the skin and last word of war ❤❤❤❤

It was awesome 🤎🤎

Ps - so sorry if I bored you 🙈💚

Oh my lord whatthef you updated ! I'm literally so lucky !!

Okay imma go read noww!!

Thank you so much riyaaaaaa