CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 3

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

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Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

When you are going to update. Eagerly waiting

PART-II

Shiva sat on the bench with krish he was feeling dejected as after searching from last 2 hours there ws no trace of Raavi and whatever happened this morning was flashing in his mind as how his Raavi was humiliated and he can't do anything tear escaped from his eyes thinking of her.

2 boys of hardly 8 to 9 years came towards them one stood in front of Shiva while other sat bear him the one who was in front of him wiped his tear and said,

"Lambi saans lo khuli Hawa mein , dil ki jakadan kam ho jayegi..... "

Shiva's mind struck at the words these were the same words Raavi spoke to him while they were returning from haveli.... Before he could react the other kid took a look of Raavi's photo from Shiva's phone and said,

"Yeh toh Raavi dii hai... "

Shiva looked at both of them and again ask,

"Tum dono jante ho inhe..... Dekha hai kya inhe kahin par.........App jante ho ki yeh kahan hai........ "

One of them,

"Ha.... Par app kon hai..... "

Shiva replied,

"Main Raavi dii ka pati hoon beta....... Hum unki family hain...... "

One of them spoke,

"Oh toh app Shiva bhaiya ho......... "

Other one adds while pointing krish,

"Aur krish bhaiya ho na"

Shiva and krish nod and say app dono le chalo ge hume unke pass,

Both replied in unison,

"Haa chaliye... "

Krish asked while following them,

"Tumhara naam kya hai........ "

"Mera naam rounak hai...."

"Aur main nishant... "

Rounak added nonchalantly,

"Vese bhaiya app toh hume nahi jante par hum na apke bare mein sab jante hain..... "

Nishant adds while looking at Shiva,

"App hi Raavi dii ke bhoothnaath ho na"

Shiva chuckles hearing this and rounak continues,

"Vo na apke bare mein bhut batein karti hai........ Kaise app dono ladte ho kaise ikk dusre ko tang karte ho..... Sab kuch....... Apse ikk baat puchu... "

Shiva says,

"Haa... "

Raunak speaks slowly,

"Ajj Raavi dii ko pehli baar rote huye dekha maine...... Vo aaj rote rote aayi thi subah.......Raavi dii toh hamesha fun mood mein aati thi....par ajj aise kyon aayi apko pata hai.........upar se voh hume milne bhi 6 mahine baad aayi hai........"

Nishant adds angrily clenching his fist,

"Ikk bari mil jaye na jisne Raavi dii ko rulaya hai main na usko choduga nahi"

Than rounk says,

"Lo paunch gaye.... "

"ALL SAINTS ORPHANAGE....... "

Shiva and krish both look at each other in shock.

"Raavi orphanage mein.......kaise....."

"Ha hum yahi rehte hai..... Ayaan bhai ke saath aur Raavi dii ayaan bhai ki help karne aati rehti thi.... "

"Bhabhi ne kabhi bataya kyon nahi..."

Before Shiva could react on it both kids the went jostling and shouting,

"Raavi dii...... "

There Raavi stood and both kids flung their arms around her she sat on their level talking to them and smiling Shiva was mesmerized by the view as after a long time he saw this carefree Raavi who is smiling for herself and not yo mask her sorrow. Krish and Shiva went near them and than nishant says,

"Didi aapse do log milne aaye hai... "

Raavi looks up and her eyes met krish and Shiva's she gets teary eyed seeing them all the humiliation came crashing on her which she had kept aside for some tome is now again visible each word vibirated in her ears Shiva sat on his knees and tried to wipe her tears but she stopped his hand in way, Nishant who saw all this got angry and said,

"Itni mushkil se Raavi dii khush huyi thi apne fir rula diya inhe....... App jao yahan se hume lekar hi nahi aana chahiye tha inhe yahan..... Dii chalo chale aap mat ro main hoon na apke pass yeh kuch nahi kar payenge..... "

Meanwhile raunak and nishant hug Raavi and raavi cries even more. Shiva can't behold this side of Raavi in front of him he days,

"Raavi meri baat sun please"

Nishant interrupts,

"Nahi koii baat nahi sunege hum app jao chalo dii andar chale ayaan bhai dhundh rahe honge hume...... Chalo"

Raavi tells the kids,

"Tum dono jao aati hoon....."

Raunak opposes,

"Nahi app chalo hamare saath.... "

Raavi wipes her tears and composes herself and says,

"Nishu rounak ....bacha....Meri baat suno aur jao andar main abhi aayi...... Okay"

Nishant speaks to Shiva,

"Agar di ko rulaya na toh main...... "

Krish also leaves with the kids in order to give privacy to the couple and Shiva speaks,

"Raavi Tu theek hai na tune bataya kio nahi kii tu yaha aur...... "

Raavi retorts with least emotions,

"Sorry meri wajah se itni takleef huyi.... Mujhe massi maa ko batana chahiye tha....... Main bata dungi unhe.... "

Shiva speaks,

"Ravi yeh tu kya keh rahi hai...... Hume chinta ho rahi thi teri....ki pta nahi kahan ho gi tu kaise hogi tu......"

Raavi said without meeting his gaze,

"Itna stress lene ki kya jaroorat hai mere liye........ Aur kyon kis hakk se...."

Shiva replies firmly,

"Raavi meri biwi hone ke hakk se"

This was it and what raavi was controlling was out she spoke with hurt evident in her voice her eyes had volumes of emotions which reflect betrayal,

"Yeh pehle kio nahi bola........ Pehle kio nahi bola abb yaad aa gya...... Sab ke samne mujhe itna kuch suna na pada sabke samne....... Ajj fir mera tamasha ban gya aur sab log bas khade ho kar dekhte rahe.... Sab log........"

Shiva tried to reason,

"Raavi maa ne kasam de di thi main kya karta..... "

Raavi now had tears on his explanation as she thought a swear is more worth than her whole being,

"Tu kuch nahi karta.... Tu kuch bhi nahi karta........ Tu sab ke liye stand leta hai sab ke liye apni jaan takk dene ke liye tyaar hota hai.... Aur meri bari par tu yeh bhi nahi keh pata ki main teri biwi hoon..... Sirf itna sa bol deta Shiva....... Sirf itna sa..... Maine koii aur demand nahi rakhi thi..... Sirf itna sa chahti thi...... Par tune vo bhi nahi kiya....... Kasam ikk kasam aur mera wajood uske samne kuch bhi nahi haina....... Maine sab ko itna pyaar diya.... Itna samaan diya par kisi ne mere liye kuch nahi kaha....... Mera bag pack kiya aur phenk diya bahar Sare somnaath ke samne........ Mujhe phir beizzat kar diya phir se....... Sab khade hokar dekhte rahe....... Kaki ne mujhe baalon se kheech kar bahar dhaka de diya aur kisi ne kuch nahi kaha........ Kuch bhi nahi...... Main hamesha sochti thi kii sab mujhse pyaar karte hain par main galat thi.......... Ajj sab logon ne mujhe meri aukaat dikha di......tab kio nahi yaad aaya ki main teri biwi hoon........."

Shiva speaks with guilty as he know he is the one who is solely responsible as if he would have came in her support this won't have happened,

"Raavi i am sorry Tu please ro mat bhut badi galti ho gayi yaar bhut badi galti....... Tu mujhe mauka de main sab kuch theek kar dunga please..... Tu ghar chal..........."

Raavi said dejected,

"Main nahi jaungi Shiva vahan..... Mujhe nahi jana vahan jahan par log mujhe apni khushiyon par grahan samajhte hai....... Yahan par Shiva yeh bache sab log mujhe apna kehte hi nahi samajhte bhi hai........Shiva better hi ga ki tu chale jaa yahan se........ Yeh jagah kisi ko batana nahi chahti thi main......... Tu chala ja Shiva ja kar apni kasam puri rakh......... "

Shiva begged her,

"Raavi main tujhe lene aaya hoon.......... Main janta hoon main ikk acha pati nahi hoon please mujhe maaf karde please........ Main tere bina apni life imagine bhi nahi kar sakta yaar......maine maa ko aur sabko bata diya hai kii hamara divorce nahi huya hai....... Maa ne galat kiya hai Raavi main janta hoon aur maine maa ko usske liye bhut bola bhi hai......... Tu please hamare saath chal.........i am sorry....i am really sorry........."

Raavi cannot bare this she went on knees and said and Shiva also came to her level,

"Shiva please ikk baar aur sorry bolega na toh main mana nahi kar paungi........... Aur mujhe iss baar nahi jana......... Mera dil toot gaya hai Shiva...... Itni buri tarah se ki abb fir se sapne dekhne kii himmat nahi hai......... Bhut sapne dekhe sab tod diye..... Sab ke sab...... Tinka tinka karke dil jodti hoon aur kuch na kuch aisa ho hi jata hai kii dubara se sab bhikhari jata hai...... Abb main thak gayi hoon........ Bhut jyada thak gayi hoon......jin jin se pyaar karti hoon......vo sab chale jate hain........koi bhi mere paas nahi rehna chahta.........."

She was devasted and eventually speaking she kept her finger on his chest and said,

"Jab tujhse pyaar huya na Shiva....... Nahi socha tha ki tu bhi chod dega mujhe........ Par bhul gayi thi meri kismat hi aisi hai main hi aisi hoon kii koii mere saath reh nahi pata....... Tu bhi chod raha hai mujhe.....tu building mujhe..... Chod......"

Saying this Raavi clinged to him crying.... Her vails her loud she was screaming her each scream were filled with heartbreak, dejection, fear of losing, betrayal........ She cried her heart out Shiva put his arm around her and let her cry her each scream each vail made him cry himself........ She was choking and sniffling she doesn't deserve this........... He made a silent promise that from now he has to stand by her no matter who's swear is their in his way he has to protect her and he will not let her diginty on crease.......... He said,

"I love you Raavi........ I love you Raavi...... Maine bhut dukh doya hai tujhe bhut takleef di hai na Tujhe...... Tu jo bui deserve karti hai na tujhe vo dunga........... Aur ijjat se ghar leke jaunga....... Kio kii tu Shiva pandya ki biwi hai............ Mera jitna bhi pyaar hai sab tere liye hi hai........ Main tujhe nahi chodunga...... Bas ikk akhri mauka...... Apne bhootnath ko ikk mauka dede...... Please...... Phir iss sab ki naubat nahi aane dunga..... "

Raavi looks at him Shiva cups her face and Raavi says crying,

"Shiva mujhe vapas nahi jana vahan tu fir se badal jayega........ Tu mujhe firse chod dega..... Mujhe nahi jana.......... Kaki ki baat ke aage tu kabhi nahi bolega main vapas jaungi na toh kaki...... Mujhe fir vohi sab bolengi....... Nahi jana...... "

Shiva knows her fear is not wrong whatever he has done is not easy to forgive so he said,

"Raavi abb jo bhi hoga main tere saath khada rahunga...... Pure hakk se tujhe lekar jaunga ure maan samaan ke saath le kar jaunga......... "

Raavi looks at him he assure her by kissing her tears out and Raavi gives in....... Shiva knew that Raavi was so easily forgetting so naive that even after this much she agreed to come with him....... He has to maintain her trust as now she loves him and he loves him.... He cannot let her be humiliated he has to have a spine.....

And he says,

"Chal ghar chalen... "

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So you are here...... Guys this was all from my side from this part next part is their....... Hope so you like it..... Do tell me your views about it as I have wrote this in hurry ............

Suggestions are most welcome........

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Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great part.

Wow❤️

This is how the track shud hv gone...👏

Loved it🤗

Pls update soon😳

Amazing!!! Just loved it. Raavi ke Emotions ko bahut acche se describe kiya apne jo Show me to hone se raha. And I am glad ki is story me there is no interference of mahanta ki murat dora di sab kuch shivi ke irt girt hi ghumata hai very nice. Jitna wait kiya tha sb worth it ho gaya😍😍😍

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Amazing!!! Just loved it. Raavi ke Emotions ko bahut acche se describe kiya apne jo Show me to hone se raha. And I am glad ki is story me there is no interference of mahanta ki murat dora di sab kuch shivi ke irt girt hi ghumata hai very nice. Jitna wait kiya tha sb worth it ho gaya😍😍😍

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰Beautiful 💜💚