Random meows in my head (drabbles only) 8th up pg26 15/2/2022 - Page 15

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Oh how I've cried after reading this first thing in the morning.

This was beautiful beyond belief.

Loved it to the core.

Loved Shiva holding on to her until the end. ❤️

Ritu!!! I didn't want to make you cry😭!!! But I'm also happy that my writing moved you to tears.... ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was way to emotional...... I am literally in tears......... Loved each and every line of it...........

Thank you dear, I'm glad you loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

I am here!


Sathya❤️!

I loved your drabble! Sathya it was everything girl! the way you've written, the flow to those words, the way you've presented Raavi's pain, I can see everything happen in front of my eyes!

I loved they way the Tandav was brought in here, Shiva in so many ways is like this Namesake Lord Shiva, and I love your comparison. It reminded me of a Telugu songfic AU OS I was working on a few minutes ago.

This kind of angst just makes me so happy to read, I know it sounds a little weird but I don't know how else to put it into words! Keep writing bub! I love this!


Love,

Inny

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Inaayaa_sidiqui

I am here!


Sathya❤️!

I loved your drabble! Sathya it was everything girl! the way you've written, the flow to those words, the way you've presented Raavi's pain, I can see everything happen in front of my eyes!

I loved they way the Tandav was brought in here, Shiva in so many ways is like this Namesake Lord Shiva, and I love your comparison. It reminded me of a Telugu songfic AU OS I was working on a few minutes ago.

This kind of angst just makes me so happy to read, I know it sounds a little weird but I don't know how else to put it into words! Keep writing bub! I love this!


Love,

Inny

Inns🤗!!! How's the health now? I hope you're much much better!!!

I'm glad you loved it. Knowing our fandom most of Raavi's pain will be forgotten once the MU is cleared, but she's been fighting so hard despite being so alone these days.

And the Tandav isn't just dance. There's a reason not every dance student is taught it. It's a raw expression of emotion, something that Shiva would very much identify with.... And it isn't weird that you like the angst. A very exploratory style of angst lets you go through the character's pain and acknowledge it. To be there, but to not interact with the emotion. To let the pain be just pain. And I love it that way....

I'll be waiting on your OS girl....

Love,

Sathya❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Not a drabble, I'm thinking of a multi chapter fiction that's kind of a Shivi rewrite, some things the same from the show, some things not, an exploration of their feelings developing slowly....

The thing about collaborating is that I don't watch the show regularly and my schedule makes it hard to write, so yeah... It's still not decided yet, though. It's just ideas in my head, nothing concrete yet.

And you write perfectly well, Choti! So, I'll ask for help if I ever need it, you know I will.... 😆

I got you Sathya , and I actually wanted to read one like I still feel that they rushed so many things their feelings and everything. And I completely support Raavi in this with her decisions uss ko time hi nahi mila like baccha pan ka pyaar ko side mein rakhte but kaisa ;lagta hai jab tum kisi ke saath shaadi karne waale hote ho if you love him or not love him doesn’t matter but when you decide to get married you do see a happy future together right and dream of it. But then suddenly ek ladki aa jati hai and your grooms says he can not marry you ? How humiliating and heart breaking it is. The time to heal from 6th is is not given but then they say move on with another guy immediately by marrying and that too with his brother who says he hates you ?

So I would like you write one do. Focus on Raavi’s point of view more and explore it.😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

I got you Sathya , and I actually wanted to read one like I still feel that they rushed so many things their feelings and everything. And I completely support Raavi in this with her decisions uss ko time hi nahi mila like baccha pan ka pyaar ko side mein rakhte but kaisa ;lagta hai jab tum kisi ke saath shaadi karne waale hote ho if you love him or not love him doesn’t matter but when you decide to get married you do see a happy future together right and dream of it. But then suddenly ek ladki aa jati hai and your grooms says he can not marry you ? How humiliating and heart breaking it is. The time to heal from 6th is is not given but then they say move on with another guy immediately by marrying and that too with his brother who says he hates you ?

So I would like you write one do. Focus on Raavi’s point of view more and explore it.😳

Exactly what I want to explore.... But I think I'll be exploring both their POVs, personally i've always felt that Shiva was as forced into the marriage. They were both tied down by love for their families, and Shiva a sense of guilt for staying silent.... Khair, I have an exam tomorrow so I really shouldn't be thinking about this fanfic idea right now!!! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Exactly what I want to explore.... But I think I'll be exploring both their POVs, personally i've always felt that Shiva was as forced into the marriage. They were both tied down by love for their families, and Shiva a sense of guilt for staying silent.... Khair, I have an exam tomorrow so I really shouldn't be thinking about this fanfic idea right now!!! 😆

Yes please don’t think we will discuss this later 😆

All the best for your exams Sathya 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh my! What did I just read😭 Both unhappy and alone gone from this world😔 But you made it up by making them meet in the other world which maybe a happier place for them.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Oh my! What did I just read😭 Both unhappy and alone gone from this world😔 But you made it up by making them meet in the other world which maybe a happier place for them.

Well yes, I do feel that there's only so much abandonment a person can take before they want to let go. And you'll definitely never get any sad endings from me Akka! Humse naa ho paayega!!!! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Holy Fukcing Lord

You have my heart and soul for writing this

The angst in this is so beautiful

You penned down every emotion soo precisely

Hands Down my fav work of yours so far

This piece made me tear up but this was so so necessary

Ahhhh I love you so much for this jaan ❤️

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