FATE 2 Updated LAST PART on page 12 / 6-11-2021 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Dragon-Heart

This is last part of this os. I hope you like my work like previous one.

Hope to see good comments but not expecting much as I know readers are not interested in replying on last specially which is available like this in open.

No worries. This OS is a birthday gifts for my friends and I hope they like my work... Nishu Debu it's for you guys... ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

Yeeeee thank you baby 😁 lovedddddddd this beautiful birthday gift so much ❤😁

Awesome end baby . truly fate played a big.... geet thought that ronnie guy is her life partner and for that jerk she refused to marry maan but that same night (she saw that ronnie's betrayal) fate took to maan , he didnot know the reason of her pain but he told her how to learn from mistake , geet understood everything . her father got discharge and geet finished her study and support her father by doing a job , later she spent time with maan and both knew each other and then got married ..... ❤

Wow loved the part so geet got to know about Ronnie and was broken 💔 thankgod maan came there to console her and made her understand...so Ronnie and maan taught her lesson in different perspective she become more stronger to face her situation finally maaneet were together atlast..thanks for the beautiful story 💗

Nice story... Sweet n simple... Loved the way story progressed... Last part was full of emotions... Betrayal n love of both maan n geet was touching.. Hope to read more...

Nice update. Ronnie actually betrays her and she sees with her own eyes. Feeling betrayal from him and her father who betrayed her with money. But as the title suggests fate if Geet is with Maan. Ultimately he is the one she meets on the dreadful night and helps her overcome her grief. They get married after Geet herself is ready post her education, she starts work, she understands him.

Wow wat an update fab fab it was good that geet came to know about Ronnie and she herself went there to check about it great that maan was there to help her for maan geet means a lot and later even geet understood who is d correct person in her life fabulous superb ending that they got married will u also give epilogue it ll be good to see what Ronnie faced and did geet slap him or not.

I am so glad Geet found out about Ronnie on time. For a moment I thought maybe maan set it up to make Ronnie look bad. But am happy that’s not the case

Wish that guy was honest with geet. But everything works out for the best. So liked maans way of explaining to geet about ignoring the hurt to move forward. He was kind and caring and wanted to only see her smile. That’s what attracted him to her in the first place

Yes it’s not a typical love story but they are together in the end. That’s what matters. And am sure they will be happy

Originally posted by: chauhan1796

Thanks for PM dear

Great end

Why giving so much pain to your fingers in writing this much

Originally posted by: metromasti

Awesome end baby . truly fate played a big.... geet thought that ronnie guy is her life partner and for that jerk she refused to marry maan but that same night (she saw that ronnie's betrayal) fate took to maan , he didnot know the reason of her pain but he told her how to learn from mistake , geet understood everything . her father got discharge and geet finished her study and support her father by doing a job , later she spent time with maan and both knew each other and then got married ..... ❤

Thank you baby. I hope you like you gift🤗

So ronnie is cheater i wanted geet should slap that cheapo so he knows his standard

Maan saved geet and also told her that sometime we have to let the pain go away if we hold it

It will gave us.more pain

Like how geet gave maan a chance maan also realized that what he feels for geet its not infuatation but love for her

I really wanted that ronnie got punishment for.his doings because he not only cheated geet but other girls too

Really enjoyed whole story nice part di 😊can we get a epilogue for.it

Thnks for pm di😊