ShiVi OS: I will always find you - Page 5

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Riya... I love everything you write!!! The twist you have given the prompt was amazing...I would love to read more about the hedonism mentioned 😉😉

Trying not to leave a too detailed comment since it will likely spoil it for others, but I will always await more of your work!! Thank you for writing such a wonderfully intense piece. ❤️❤️

Oh my God, thank you Min! This is high praise indeed!

More on the hedonism! LMAO! Well, let me see. I haven't written an entirely explicit piece yet. I like doing the teasing, tantalizing ones more. But perhaps I might try!
Thanks, babe! 🤗

Originally posted by: Serpensortia

Lizzzzzzz!!!!

Thank you so much sweetheart for writing on this 🤗

I am definitely not surprised with what you did to the prompt 😂

No one can beat you in twists and turns. This was so thrilling a the beginning, and I smiled towards the end❤️

This piece is such a treat

Thank you once again!

Awww Shiri, my darling! I love that emoji!! ❤️

You're not surprised at what I did? 🤓Matlab meri koi reputation ban gayi hai as a writer? 😆

I'm so glad you liked this. I loved your prompt, I just wasn't sure I could do justice to it if I wrote it as intended, so I did this thing instead!

And you're very welcome. I'm happy I didn't have to hide from your belan! 😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

It was good!!! I have a raunchy prompt but ain't able to write on it. Would you try it out? 😳

Hmm raunchy prompt! 😆😔 Idk, Idk..not saying No, but I don't wanna mess it up. Send it my way and I'll see if I can write it.

Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this! I have been asking people to edit their 'spoilery' comments so as not to take away the suspense for other readers. So if you could do that too, I'd be grateful!

Thanks again for your kind words about my writing! 😳

Originally posted by: BlackWitch

What a wonderful twist! 👏 I didn’t see that coming at all. I was just wondering where the sexual tension was coming so soon in the story. Something seemed missing. And then bam! You bring this twist. I was floored! Everything before made complete sense 🤩

Such a gifted writer you are! You elevated a simple prompt into something so captivating and…and kinky 🤣 I love love it!

Btw, Raavi’s fantasy of queen and handsome prisoner is one of my own fantasies 🤣 I think it stems from my Made In India obsession for Milind Soman

Aww thank you, Prats! 🤗 I hope it wasn't too kinky? It was actually my mind ka keeda that pushed me on this path and all because I didn't think I could do justice to the prompt as it was given because of my uneasiness with Stockholm Syndrome and all. But I had taken it up, and I liked the prompt too, so this was one way I could make it palatable for myself! 😳

Also, it was my first time trying an 'unreliable narrator' type narrative so was apprehensive if that would work well. I kept going back to see if the earlier bits made sense in the face of the final reveal. So this one was tough to write in more ways than one. I'm so glad people have liked it!

Ahh-- I know..Milind Soman and Made in India! He was soooo delish! ☺️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Lizzie!!! You really had me convinced for a moment there!!! And then she said I give up, and it was like someone was screaming April Fool at me.... 🤣🤣

Ahhh, thank you! 🤗

It really makes me happy that I was able to sustain the surprise element in my writing. Throwing off the reader is what I aim for, I love reading works like that and if I've been able to achieve it myself then it's all the more rewarding for me as a writer! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Woww 🔥🔥

This was really good

The emotions, the set up, the thrill and finally the twist which was the cherry on top 😍😍

Loved it ❤️

Thank you so so much, for reading and for your kind words of appreciation! ❤️

I cherish every comment made and it validates my writing, so please keep commenting (if you read my work that is!) 😳

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

When I see a story written by you my expectations automatically go super high🤣

And I wasnt disappointed this time either

Hayeee kya parh liya

Loved the twist!

This actually made me feel anxious! 😒Matlab I have a certain standard to uphold now. Kuch bhi nahi likh sakti

Glad you weren't disappointed this time, but if you are the next time, please be kind.😳

I'm not infallible, you know.

Just tagging a few people (who have read my other stories) in case they missed this one.

Why? Why would you think this is too kinky? You want to read kinky, you go through my stories 🤣 This story is suitable for all ages 13+ onwards. Don’t worry. But I would love to read something truly kinky from you - maybe on Wattpad.

Stockholm syndromes are quite interesting to write. It gives a kind of push and pull chemistry in the story. I don’t know what’s it with me and an obsessive hero. But I love them 😍 This was my last obsessive hero fangirling

I love sanki grey shaded heroes

I like that you experimented with the unreliable narrator way of writing. It did the job beautifully. It felt strange in places and that’s exactly what it was supposed to be like 😍

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Aww thank you, Prats! 🤗 I hope it wasn't too kinky? It was actually my mind ka keeda that pushed me on this path and all because I didn't think I could do justice to the prompt as it was given because of my uneasiness with Stockholm Syndrome and all. But I had taken it up, and I liked the prompt too, so this was one way I could make it palatable for myself! 😳

Also, it was my first time trying an 'unreliable narrator' type narrative so was apprehensive if that would work well. I kept going back to see if the earlier bits made sense in the face of the final reveal. So this one was tough to write in more ways than one. I'm so glad people have liked it!

Ahh-- I know..Milind Soman and Made in India! He was soooo delish! ☺️