ShiVi OS: I will always find you - Page 4

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

i meant .....at the end

suspense was till the end definitely........y do u think i felt silly and shocked ......

That’s good to hear!

Waise this is the first time I’ve tried an unreliable narrator type narrative so I really, really want to know how that went down with ppl!

Riya... I love everything you write!!! The twist you have given the prompt was amazing...I would love to read more about the hedonism mentioned 😉😉

Trying not to leave a too detailed comment since it will likely spoil it for others, but I will always await more of your work!! Thank you for writing such a wonderfully intense piece. ❤️❤️

Lizzzzzzz!!!!

Thank you so much sweetheart for writing on this 🤗

I am definitely not surprised with what you did to the prompt 😂

No one can beat you in twists and turns. This was so thrilling a the beginning, and I smiled towards the end❤️

This piece is such a treat

Thank you once again!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Yep the prompt was great but wasn’t sure I could do justice to it, considering my queasiness with Stockholm syndrome and all, so it ended up the way it did.

Hopefully it wasn’t too much of a mess!

It was good!!! I have a raunchy prompt but ain't able to write on it. Would you try it out? 😳

this was another sizzling hot piece! ☺️

I was expecting a kidnapped Raavi falling for her kidnapper and vice versa like you mentioned in your description.. but the twist at the end was totally unexpected!! 👏

I loved it a lot! ❤️

What a wonderful twist! 👏 I didn’t see that coming at all. I was just wondering where the sexual tension was coming so soon in the story. Something seemed missing. And then bam! You bring this twist. I was floored! Everything before made complete sense 🤩

Such a gifted writer you are! You elevated a simple prompt into something so captivating and…and kinky 🤣 I love love it!

Btw, Raavi’s fantasy of queen and handsome prisoner is one of my own fantasies 🤣 I think it stems from my Made In India obsession for Milind Soman

Lizzie!!! You really had me convinced for a moment there!!! And then she said I give up, and it was like someone was screaming April Fool at me.... 🤣🤣

Woww 🔥🔥

This was really good

The emotions, the set up, the thrill and finally the twist which was the cherry on top 😍😍

Loved it ❤️

When I see a story written by you my expectations automatically go super high🤣

And I wasnt disappointed this time either

Hayeee kya parh liya

Loved the twist!

Originally posted by: Anon21

My god It's just 💫

I don't get the emoji you used 😆, but I hope it means it was good!

Thanks for reading! ❤️