SURROGACY AND HEALING RELATIONS (PART-VII pg 15) updated 27/2 - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
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thank you ❤❤
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#62

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Awesome. Well written👏

... waiting for next part. 😊

thank you😘🥰will update soon...
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Heyy..

It isn't clear in this story if they have consummated their marriage or not..


So please include it in next part

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishika2003

Heyy..

It isn't clear in this story if they have consummated their marriage or not..


So please include it in next part

I was writing the same thing in the next part........ Hope you will like that... 😘🥰😍
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

I was writing the same thing in the next part........ Hope you will like that... 😘🥰😍


Update soonest ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART-VI


Raavi woke up next morning, she was feeling so dizzy but when her sleepy eyes open she look at her husband both of their limbs were entangled and was literally laying on in him in a way that her head was dugged right in crook if his neck and shiva's hand were right on the lower back holding her to him.Only a blanket was covering both of them . Events from last night make her feel shy, slowly a clip of thoughts played in her mind.

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FLASHBACK STARTS,


Raavi retired to her room after all the evenings event she felt so happy about how Shiva handled everything how he hugged her in front of everyone just to comfort as he was not the man who shows PDA but just for her he stood against her mother, he concluded that he loves her , she knew this before too but when he declared this in front of ehole house made her utmost astonished, she was thinking and blushing when Shiva came in room he saw her like that and sat beside her and said,


"Kya soch rahi hai..... "


Raavi trance broke and she looked in his onyx black eyes and just got lost, not receiving an answer he asked again,


"Bolegi bhi kuch..... "


Raavi just leaned forward and kissed him shiva was taken aback by her sudden step it was not their first kiss it had happened frequently since Raavi was few months pregnant, but everytime they kissed it felt new it felt great but everytime Raavi kissed him it reflects affection in it but today it was something else it was a vote of thanks, abundance of love but if he is not wrong it has a tinch of longing and desire........ He kissed her back with equal passion deepening it still processing what she needs, and than they seperate, and both touch their forehead and Shiva spoke,


"Raavi.....koii baat hai kya"


Raavi hugs him and both lay on bed in each other's embrace, and Raavi says,


"Shiva....... meri jindagi mein aane ke liye thank you...... Mujhe apnane ke liye thank you...... Main janti hoon ki mujhm mein kitni kamiyaan hai par jab tu mere saath deta hai na mujhe lagta hai jaise main perfect hoon......tu mere liye ikk aisa gift hai jo khud Somnath ji ne mere jholi mein dala hai........ Thank you...... I love you...... "


Saying this raavi digs her head in his chest and Shiva looks at her and thinks how can she be this pure thanking him for being her life... He is thankful to her for making his eyes shine and does she thinks she is any less she is the one and only his Raavi his chipkali and than he make her sit and sat beside her in way that her back and his front flushed he rested his chin on her shoulder and said,


" Tujhe lagta hai main tujhe perfect banata hoon aree gadheri tu hai jo mere liye ikk gift nahi somnath ji ka ashirwaad hai jo unhone mujhe diya hai aur kaha hai yeh le Shiva tu apni Gauri, yeh vo hai jo tujhe jeena sikhayegi tujhe pyaar karna sikhayegi tujhe ehssas dilayegi kii tu bhi kisi ka ho sakta hai....... "


Before he could say further raavi looked at him still her back glushing with his chest and kissed him a lone tear escaped from her eyes, Shiva was now on cloud nine he also kissed her back and than after a while they seperated he started kissing her neck shoulder and tugged her kurti dori and and her sleeves fell down giving him access he continued his work when Raavi turned around and he busy in his ministration kissed her clevage she laid on bed and Shiva peppered her with wet kisses and she moans......the night was spent in each other's arms making love and feeling each other and crossing the barriers to walk together till eternity.


FLASHBACK END

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Meanwhile Raavi was in her thoughts Shiva woke up and caressed her back and kissed her forehead, Raavi also untangles her from him and moves towards other side of the bed to leave but Shiva hold her and pulls her towards him on his lap he looks at her new glow and crimson red cheeks and says nuzzling his nose on nape of her neck,


"Tu agar har subah aise dikhegi toh mujhe har raat ko control nahi kar paunga....... "



Raavi blushes hard and rest her head on his chest clinging to him she still on his lap her legs straight parallel to the bed rest and shiva rested his face on the bed rest covered with blanket after few minutes Raavi says,


"Inn kuch mahino main kitna kuch ho gya na Shiva.... "


Raavi continues to talk about their up and lows and shiva than plays a song,


Aao Sunao Tumhe Ek Kahani

Aao Sunao Tumhe Ek Kahani

Jaha Ka Tha Raja, Waha Ki Thi Rani


Suno Chanda.. . .. .


Mohabbat Ka Qissa, Sab Hi Ka Tha Hisa

Mohabbat Ka Qissa, Sab Hi Ka Tha Hisa

Thi Chandi Ki Guriya, Tha Sone Ka Guda

Nazar Lag Gayi Hai, Is Dosti Ko

Tha Guda Tha Deewana, Thi Guriya Deewani


Suno Chanda.. . ..


Bahut pyaar hai yeh, Ya takraar hai yeh

Bahut pyaar hai yeh, Ya takraar hai yeh

Jo Roothay ga koi, to iqraar hai yeh

Ajab silsila hai, Muhabat to dekho

Yeh uska dewana, Woh uski Dewani


After song finishes Raavi looks ar shiva and says,


"Shiva yeh toh hamari jindagi par based hain aise laga jaise hanare liye hi likha gya hain... . "


He played again and both hummed the song

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We may not make a perfect pair according to the societal norms.......

We may have many flaws and have a incomplete story......
But two of us together can fulfill each other's flaws.........
All people may expect the same outcome of our story as of other people but how can we be the same as we have always been on extremes of everything......
Be it be love.... Our marraige...... Everything never went smooth but the best part is we came out of all the extremes together.....
This phase is not pleasant but being on your side it will pass.......

THE END.. . ..

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Hope you all like this last part.. . Please comment below and tell me and give suggestion for me to improve.. . .. .

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Edited by Odette_delusion - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

https://youtu.be/kyf-E2KhmcA


Link for above song..... If not available go search suno chanda season 1 ost.....

It is agreat song guys i love it..... Hope so you will enjoy to......

Edited by Odette_delusion - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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The whole story was awesome ❤❤

Loved it ❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kfof

The whole story was awesome ❤❤

Loved it ❤

Thank you😘🥰it means a lot
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Posted: 3 years ago
#70

Sooooo beautiful❤️ I loved each and every update of this story👍🏼Waiting for more🤗

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