Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 21

Sorry to make you guys wait but I can only post this late evening India time!

Sorry folks for raising your expectations and thanks for your patience!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Sorry to make you guys wait but I can only post this late evening India time!

Sorry folks for raising your expectations and thanks for your patience!

np dear........

take your time

OS 4: Never (Have I Ever) Had This Feeling

Summary: Shiva and Raavi play a game of 'Never have I ever' and things happen! 😳

Based off of a prompt by Hinna (evilxbalaa) that I modified slightly, mainly because I'd already written something like this for my OCs and found it easier to adapt! 😆

Mature content warning again! So I'll just put it under the Tag to be safe! 😳

Okay, so for those who have never played Never have I ever, and don't know how it works:

One player says something they have never done, for eg. Never have I ever watched a Marvel movie, and if any of the other players have done it (watched the movie), then each of them takes a drink. If no one has done it (highly unlikely, I know 😆), then the person who asked the question drinks. The object is, of course, to avoid drinking and get the other players to drink as much as possible. And of course, you have be truthful but then that is more of a tacit rule than anything! 😆

There's a more conservative version too without the drinking, but this one obviously is the drinking version!

Also, I have to warn you- this is going to be a very long chapter! So I'm posting it in two parts for ease of reading.

There are a couple of songs in this, I've provided the links for them in the text when they appear. This is told in alternating PoVs, switching between Shiva and Raavi, but will, for the most part, be Shiva's.

As always, please leave your likes/comments because I thrive on them, and they motivate me to write more! 😳

excruciating and torturous update.....every second i was like now they are doing something, now they are not, now they are and they are not.......

their game was unique.......1st time in a story i have read........emotions running high and feeling safe and secure with each other and tempted to do something sinful ......along with shiva it was readers test too....

almost kiss se almost next level se, she just slept ho gaya, and i was coz all the got all hyped up and worked up........

kitna buildup hua tha....i was

patience is a virtue i have heard but kitna patience hai shiva ka😲 the self control on his desires ........oh my.....love him more and more......he announced, as if seeking permission that i am gonna kiss u now.......how much cuter he can get........

shiva raavi to each other

Tattoo story :-

normal talks they had, got to know each other, getting protective of her, both were being J......this update had everything......u r a master of this art liz darling....

ok i have a confusion.........did he lie or did he not? coz there was a sentence where she said that u lied.......dont tell me as a reader we have to figure out........hehehehe

one more point.....initial para or so was different........i thought i am reading a new story till mrs S was mentioned.......this can be read as a standalone too......and by this i mean in a good way..........

i appreciate your writing, the time you give.........👍🏼👏⭐️

wont say any more now......

Oh my my!!! It was fab mahn❤❤❤

Their game, their deets, their jealousy😍

I so not wanted their game to end😂💖

Shiva has damn self control😂😂

It was hot and intense at the same time🔥

I really want to know what happens next

Lizzie🤗!!! This was the sweetest❤️!!! Raavi's innocent desire was so heart touching, and Shiva's had a wild, wild life already!!! 😆

Riya.. This was definitely worth the wait... I've just finished reading both of them and I loved it!!

The efforts he made to be good about not taking advantage of her was commendable and Raavi pushing his buttons was definitely entertaining.

The best part though is you don't necessarily have to read the previous three to follow along!! Your thread is quickly becoming a favourite!

Eagerly awaiting to see what you serve up next!

How can a piece be this sweet and innocent and yet so freaking hot at the same time !

You've completely touched Shiva and Raavi's personality at all the right points.

Also a confession, people called me a patthardil cz I never cried at the movies, no matter what. Not when bahubali died, not when ishan was sent to boarding, never. But when Mufasa died, I had tears rolling down my face 🥺. It was really 💔.

Coming back to the piece, this is an exceptionally well continuation of a fabulous series.

Eagerly awaiting more