Worth- ShiVi Drabble

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Worth


“Emotionless, this word didn’t make sense to me until a while ago. How can a human not feel any emotions I wondered

But today I got my answer. I was just being stupid and making a fool of myself In front of everyone


She , a girl who he met hardly a few days ago flung into his arms as if her life depended on him, he who was her husband never let her even touch him.

Here there are 2 possible reactions one could get out of me


  1. Blaming myself and feeling unworthy
  2. Knowing my worth and walking out of this toxic relationship


It is a matter of habit I realized

He was my habit, staying around him was a habit. Having him with me was a habit


But taking bullshit from anyone was not what I was raised for.”


She continued to write in her diary

When she heard him walk in


“Raavi, can we talk?” He asked expecting her to in a vulnerable state

But to his surprise she looked serene


The kind of look on her face was of pride.

She slowly raised her head as she heard him speak


“We have nothing left to talk about shiva, I have always been known for being forgiving and naive, but some people don’t deserve that side of me” she said with a smile


Why did you leave the venue“He attempted to ask

“That wasn’t my place to be. Finding one’s self worth is a very big accomplishment and I am proud that I was able to find mine.”


“But I must say , you took me by surprise today. Changing your appearance for her, that’s impressive. But I hope one day you find someone who loves you for the way you are


“What do you mean?”

“Just know that if you leave someone at least tell them why, because what’s more painful than being abandoned is feeling that you aren’t worth an explanation”


I thought you broke me, but to be honest you helped me find my true self and I’ll always be grateful for that. We just weren’t meant to be together shiva. I don’t know what you think but I definitely deserve happiness and I will find my own happiness” she said with determination


Gaumbi who stood outside listening to their conversation felt immense pride on Raavi


Irrespective of everything , she was his little bean and he will support her in every way possible

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello beautiful people ❤️

This was very very impromptu

No chappals or tomato’s please 😆

This was a Raavi POV

And recently I have not been liking the way shiva behaves with her and very much want her to find her own identity and be independent, hence ended up writing this

I hope you guys like it

Do let me know what are your thoughts 🤗




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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice one.

I like this raavi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I just love this Raavi and wanting to see her take a stance for herself. You are right she need not be in this toxic relationship and deserves much better. I want to see the same Raavi who earlier walked out on him for her self respect and self worth.

About the show, ever since Raavi came back for Dhara, her character sketch has been going downhill along with hers Shiva has been butchered too.

So this drabble is a welcome change from the show❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is superb...

Loved it a strong Raavi ... Need of the hour....

Why did you stop here this can be good story...

Start is awesome.....

I think a person needs to value herself / himself first , if they are happy then only they cn keep other happy...

Raavi needs to have self respect top priority which I expect every girl needs to do same..

Shiva has always taken for her granted no he loved likes don't know nt int too...


Kindly continue don't stop here....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Just the way Raavi is treated by Shiva isn't wrong. She has no respect for him either and treats him like shit as per her convenience, and makes him feel beneath her

She has lifted her hand to slap him twice, once when he didn't have any fault and the second time she actually slapped him even though she could have insulted him the way he insulted her. Shiva didn't stop her both times.

No offense but I didn't like how Shiva is portrayed as the big bad villain while Raavi is pure and blameless 😌

Also am super happy this will never happen in the show 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This is truly amazing, love 💗 this version…… your version of Raavi👏👏

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was amazing😍😍❤

Its high time, Raavi needs to step up for herself and give it back💔❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved this version of Raavi! Thanks for writing this 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it! I want to read more . It's high time Raavi starts loving and respecting herself . She needs to find her happiness. Loved the way you wrote simple yet impactful.

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