Fate -Shivi TS(last part pg.2) - Page 3

Oh thank God Raavi was okay. Nice story, an emotional one! ❤️

Oh my! From the teaser, I thought it would be a tragedy and Raavi will be gone forever. Thank God, everything was ok at the end. We needed to see Raavi’s NDE fir Shiva to express his love for her😕 All is well that ends well. Thank you for writing this.

Beautiful dear❤️I almost cried🥺🥺

I wish we could get atleast 1% redemption like this

My most fav lines -

His heart ached as his eyes saw all the wires attached to her body, her colgate smile replaced with a frown , her hazel eyes covered with dark circles under and her glowing face wrapped in bandages .

What did she do to deserve this? Tears not stopping he sat next to her while gently holding her hand.

Kdice would nail it🔥🔥🔥 if given something like this❤️

Love you for this🤗

This is soooo ooo good yaar

I am crying like a mad this midnight 😢😢😢😢😢

Thanks for this wonderful TS

Plz write moree

Originally posted by: SakshiD

OMG tani dii

So glad to find you here after THR forum

I missed your stories so bloody much ❤️❤️

This one had me in tears

Please write more

And make this an SS ❤️❤️❤️

Lots of love

Tysm sakshhh

I miss you too baby

Yeh story toh Maine kab ka khatam kar diya 😂😂

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was so emotional

Loved it❤️❤️

Thank you jaannn

Originally posted by: Foxii

So wonderful, Maami was so caring and her unconditional love for Raavi was sweet.

Yess

Mami acts like a psycho in the serial

Wanted to show her as positive here 😂

Originally posted by: kayinat

Great but would have been best if pandya niwas people suffered in guilt for some more...it seems like they can get away from anything easily...

Totally agree with you

They get away with things wayy to easily

Originally posted by: Dandellion_22

Though I would not want to see something so bad happen to Raavi on the show, but this might be a way in which the misunderstanding will be solved so I will be okay with it👏

So well written dear❤️❤️

Maami was spot on here, I wish show wali Maami ko bhi thodi akal aa jaye🤣

Beautiful TS dear, do write more!!👏

Thank you jaan

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Noodles baby...you made me cry❤️

This was super emotional and heart touching!!

Loved it❤️

Aww thank you jaan

I’m glad you liked It