Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 2 years ago

They are back at each other’s throats does maan even realize what he is doing 

Geet needs to get out and leave him

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 Look like Maan is confuse about his relationship with Geet but Geet gave him time to realize her importance but he not yet over off his mom 

 Geet not willing to leave him but his behavior make her take this decision now they broke up still both still attract to each other 

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Hahaha wonderful update

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hi there

thanks for the update


Part 99

Sensational update.... terrifically written

Gosh these two are too much

Geet and Maan are indeed bold and shameless

looks like they forgot that they have broken up

old habits indeed die hard

Ha ha Maan checking his abs out

so will they make up?

update soon

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Posted: 2 years ago

Both were busy checking the other out but neither wants to admit it.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Nice update 👍

They like each other a lot and can't live without each other still fight with each other

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Part 100

 

M-Also you forgot to say ‘please'

 

She raises an eyebrow

 

M-Fine. But stop clinging to me

 

He walks out

 

G- Who the hell is!!! You are the pervert who hides and watches

 

Maan turns

 

Aajkal toh Maan ka anger rise hone mein second lagta hai

 

He clenches his jaw

 

G - What? You didn't check me out while pretending to go out?

 

M-Who was watching me shower, huh?

 

He asks grabbing her arms

 

G- So I watched. Did I touch? Did I cling? Did I ask you to take off your clothes? Can't I see what's is in front of me?

 

M-You are always the victim, and I am always wrong

 

He smirks

 

G- Fine. You play victim today then

 

Geet smirks back and grabs his towel pretending to pull it away

 

Maan is shocked

 

G - Feels good? Am I seducing you now? Still won't leave the room?

 

He pushes her and doesn’t realize ki force zara zyada ho gaya, she almost falls on the bed

 

G - Are you the pervert now or is this victim fighting back?

 

Geet rises on her elbow

 

Maan pins her down on the bed holding her wrist and half mounting on her

 

M-I will wipe that smirk off your face

 

Geet abhi tak kaafi confidentially Maan ki bottom line bait kar rahi thi. Abhi usko thoda apprehension hua ki uh oh...

 

Her smirk & smugness reminds him of her playing with him, since he knows about her looking into matches for dating/marriage

 

G-Maan, get of me. This isn't funny anymore

 

M-Why? Are you scared?

 

He moves his face so close to tip of her ear

 

G – Why would I be scared of you, are you gonna commit a crime?

 

He slowly moves his finger over her towel, almost pulling it

 

She could feel the tip of his fingers just micro inches away

 

Geet is staring at Maan’s eyes

 

Not breaking eye contact

 

Don't get distracted. Whoever blinks losses

 

He sniggers, thinking- I don’t affect you at all

 

Then moves away and walks out

 

Geet lets out a breath she didn't know she was holding

 

Maybe it's the most muscle definition. If you are being superficial…or maybe it's all the emotional hell he had been giving her

 

Geet quickly gets ready

 

Maan dekhe na dekha, bhad mein jaaye

 

Maana she said goodbye…but he can still push all her buttons so well

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Geet bahar aayi room se

 

Fir usko laga ki abhi bhi jo uska personal item sab hai idhar udhar uska kya kare?

 

Abhi aur suitcase toh hai nahi

 

Wapas Maan ke ghar aana sahi nahi hai

 

Geet soch mei khadi hai Maan ke bedroom ke gate par

 

Ek pair andar ek bahar

 

Ultimately although there were some clothes which she really liked but then decides to leave them there

 

Without Maan ... Where will she show those clothes off

 

Making up her mind she starts to leave

 

Raaste mei wohi take out ka dher dikha

 

Aas paas dekha toh poore ghar mein kabaad hai, take out stuff, some bottles, cigarette stubs, kapde, saamaan

 

Pata nahi kab se safaai nahi hui hai

 

Udhar Maan toh towel pehenke sofe pe pasra hua hai

 

He wanted to get out but realized his attire

 

She walks to the kitchen to get some water... Treating Maan like air

 

Geet ne dekha, the post it note she had left on the fridge is still there

 

She thinks- Cardboard huh?

 

She takes away the note, crumples it and puts it in her pocket.

 

This she will take away if nothing else

 

Geet is tempted to clean up the mess

 

But she holds back

 

This is fitting for a pig now... look at him slobbered on the sofa like one

 

Unke kuch pictures the ghar pe woh bhi ulte karke rakhe huye hain

 

She picks up one frame ... one of her favorite pics

 

Glances at Maan…ki he doesn't seem to be caring what she is doing

 

Fine then

 

Geet frame khol kar photo nikaalne lagti hai, since Geet ki fav pic hai and he didn't want it

 

Let's take this away too

 

She looks around, aur kuch loot kar le jaa sake toh

 

Hai to bahut kuch including the pigheaded man on the couch…lekin…

 

She sighs

 

This time, time it's final. Not coming back here

 

Geet leaves without another glance back

 

Warna jaana mushkil ho jayega

 

While walking out she hears Maan snoring

 

Sofe pe half naked so gaya

 

She halts

 

Goes back to the room, brings a blanket to drape over him

 

Closes the curtains

 

Takes away the stinking pile of waste boxes in the corner

 

Throws away the soiled food

 

Takes out the trash

 

Puts his clothes in the washer to wash

 

Mota-mota kaam toh kar diya...Aur khatt-patt hogi to Maan ki neend khul jayegi

 

Trying to not turn back and look at Maan one last time, Geet leaves shutting the door behind her

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Posted: 2 years ago

Is this a final goodbye. Really!!  This is it??

Maan because of his ego is going to let her go after all that happened between them??

geet could not help but clean up a bit before Levi g 

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    Geet final goodbye to his house but still she cleans some mess 

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Why maan don't realise his mistake and talk to geet , poor geet cleaning house only she is affecting maan not showing any emotions.


Update soon