Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

🤣🤣🤣

This was hilariously amazing😆

I loooved this devil puppy😈😈

I will say the same it was not his fault Raavi started it😆...Shiva just grabbed the opportunity😆

Thanks to you Riya I am never gonna look at bungee jumping and bike ride lessons same ever again😆🤣

Looooooooved this one🤗

Waiting for more

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Coleus

🤣🤣🤣

This was hilariously amazing😆

I loooved this devil puppy😈😈

I will say the same it was not his fault Raavi started it😆...Shiva just grabbed the opportunity😆

Thanks to you Riya I am never gonna look at bungee jumping and bike ride lessons same ever again😆🤣

Looooooooved this one🤗

Waiting for more


Ha ha yes, not Shiva's fault at all! Raavi led him to the gutter! 😈

Thank you for the appreciation, Alisha! 🤗

Like I said before, I'm gonna have to take responsibility for ruining these activities for you people! 😆

Hopefully both businesses take off and become more profitable as a result! 😈🤣

I'm writing the next one - it's gonna be 'mature' as well thanks to the last part that I could not resist adding in - Shiva getting his comeuppance! 😆 Watch this space! 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet


Ha ha yes, not Shiva's fault at all! Raavi led him to the gutter! 😈

Thank you for the appreciation, Alisha! 🤗

Like I said before, I'm gonna have to take responsibility for ruining these activities for you people! 😆

Hopefully both businesses take off and become more profitable as a result! 😈🤣

I'm writing the next one - it's gonna be 'mature' as well thanks to the last part that I could not resist adding in - Shiva getting his comeuppance! 😆 Watch this space! 😳

Excited. I love mature stories

My dark romance novels have spoilt me too much🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Also, if you guys wanna read a particular ShiVi story you can request it here and tag your favorite authors!


Submit a writing prompt

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

The next one-shot is almost done. This one will be 18+ as well.


This takes off from where the previous one left off. ShiVi are returning from their business trip to Veraval still on the bike.


I wanted to explore one of my favorite romantic tropes here: fake married and sharing a room/bed.


Also, I try my best to write the dialogues in Hindi but some of them just don't work, so I will be leaving them in English. Hope you guys don't mind this too much! 😳


This one is titled: Liar, liar pants on fire!

Hope you guys will enjoy this one too! Thanks for all the love so far! ❤️

Edited by LizzieBennet - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

pls write something.....anything...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: maanmeet1

pls write something.....anything...


On it! Just getting ready to post! Chk my post on previous page for intro

Edited by LizzieBennet - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Oh my god🤣🤣

The story was hilarious but awesome😂😂😂❤

Noise part, Raavi doing it and Shiva's reaction 😂😂😍😍

You write so awesome....please do continue this only if possible😍❤❤

Loved the story❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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woahhhhh..... pleaseee continuee☺️

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