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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey yaa people ❤️

I hope you all are doing well...i m back after so long .!!

So this is an OS or a drabble because a cap from the episode strom my mind to think n write abt this...!!

I dunno how's is it...but yeah,I hope you will like it...

Happy reading



Shiva is in vadodara since 2days, raavi and all the other pandyas are in somnath only.

Today is the day for his comeback. He is on the way to the somnath, he take out his phone and message raavi "mei thodi der m phauch raha hu"

But unfortunately raavi couldn't receive that because she had a hetic day and fall asleep.

He reached the pandya niwas after some time he knocked the door and found krish standing in front of him with closed heavy eyes..he hugged him, shiva caressed his hair "thankyou krish ab tu soja" he said with a bright smile and krish went back to sleep.

Shiva look around the house, damn he was just two days away from this house but it looks like it's been 2 months.

And what he missed the most is his chipkali, he couldn't resist to live away from her although they didn't confess yet but they know each other heart so well.

He made his way for the room silently sneaking into it and found raavi on the bed sleeping peacefully like a sleeping beauty.

His heart bump once when his eyes fall on her, the moonlight adding more charm to her beauty. She is gorgeous.

He kept his bag in corner and take out thhe box which is wrapped with the beautiful pastel colour sheet. It was small but the way he is looking at it seems like it is has his whole heart.

He looked at her once before heading towards the cupboard, he open it and put he box on the top of clothes in such a way that her eyes will fall on it,

He remember the day when raavi brought a shirt as a gift for him, the only difference between them is that she had put that box on the bed on his side and herself was standing near the cupboard whereas he put the box into the cupboard while she is sleeping on bed.

He silently drag his feet on ground towards her..he took a moment to admire her and then cupped her small face with his hand..he love how her face look into his hands.

The wind blew and take her swrils on her face, which caught Shiva's eyes. He used his fingers and put those swirls behind the ears. Raavi can sense his warmth touches, she turned her way and grab his hand into her in sleep. Shiva smile by her antics and lay down for a good sleep.

He is now awaken a little and moved his hand on Raavi's side..that side was cold, he opened his eyes and found raavi is already awaken.

He remembered his gift and jumped out from the bed in excitement

"Ab tak toh dekhliya hoga raavi ne"

He opened the cupboard and stunned for a second the box is still there in the position in which he put it..the clothes underneath it is changed but he didn't heed at that.

The fact that raavi didn't notice his gift has left him in stunned...but somewhere his heart know there is definitely something.

He come outside in the courtyard and found no one, he look at wall clock, it was going to be noon, so no one can see that..rishita is oon the job and krish will be in College while his dev and gaumbi will be in store but a question roam in his head "where is chipkali"

He step ahead towards the swing and a melodious sound got in his ear, he ignored that but again the melodious voice got into his ear..He look around found no one, he recognize this sound

"yeh toh dhara bhabhi....kitchen m hongi"

He rushed in kitchen and found raavi there unexpectedly she is wearing baby pink saree with the pallu tied around her waist. Her curves are getting highlighted with his hungry eyes.

Raavi feel his presence and turned toward him without moving her legs

"Shiva tu uth gaya....tu na bahar ja m chai lekar aati hu" she said in a softer tone

Shiva is still wondering from where the sound come if dhara bhabhi is not there and this chipkali not wear anything that makes a sound.

Shiva is lost in his thoughts that is unnoticed by raavi she asked again "kya hua shiva kuch chahiye kya"

"Haan" he come out from the blunder of thoughts

"nahi nahi kuch nahi tu kar kam"

He made a turned and again hear that melodious sound coming from inside but there is his chipkali how it could be possible..!!

He again ignored that "shayad mere kaan baj rahe h"

He again made his way towards the corridor and again hear the sound, this time he notice the sound only comes with raavi move...his lips curved into a bright smile.

He moved towards her..closer...closer...she turned and jerked back with a jolt, he grab her from the waist so that she won't hurt herself..

She look at him who is already looking at her with his dark deep eyes, the gaze is so intense that she couldn't resist her hazel eyes to drown into his...there eyes are like an open book that both of them want to read.

The intensity and proximity is affecting them so much that his grip on her waist become tighter and she clutch his shoulder with more force.

The way he is getting close with her that she couldn't stop her wild thoughts...they can feel each other warm breath and just about they are move to proceed for the next time, the pressure cooker whistle do the work to interrupt and spoiled the moment.

Raavi averted her gaze while shiva eyes are fixed on her. She looked at him once agian "what he is upto" she think.

"Raavi" he called her name sweetly.

"Mei sapna dekh rahi hu kya tu itne pyaar se bol raha h"

"Sapne ka toh pata nhi shayad mere kaan baj rahe h muje na baar baar pyaari si awaz sunai de rahi h tujhe bhi aa rahi h kya...??" He asked

Raavi took a moment to answer

"Voh...mera matlab hai nahi toh..muje toh esa kuch nhi sunai diya tu na neend m hoga shayad isliye" she said facing towards the wall.

"Acha" he said mischievously and brought his hand down grab the some fabric of saree and lift it upwards till ankle.

"Yeh bhi sahi hai" he smirked at her while raavi cheeks turned from peach to red in no time.

"Muje laga tune dekhi hai nahi kyuki box toh vesa ka vesa hi rakha hua tha" his throat filled, eyes filled with the hint of tears with smile that hurt cheek so hard.

Raavi pinched his cheeks seeing her husband innocence "shiva" she wanted to kiss him right now but control herself

And said "bachpan se lekar aajatk tune muje khoob preshan kiya hai toh meine bhi krdiya"

Shiva smiled hard "is chipakli ko smjhna namumkin hai" he said by himself

"Tune meri di hui payal peheni" he asked looking deep into her eyes

She cupped his face and said

"Tune itne pyaar se di hai toh kesi nahi pehenti"

"Thankyou shiva" she said with a tears rolling on her cheek. He wiped it using his thumb, touched his forehead with her and close his eyes..!!



Their heart finally found the peace..!!❤️




So this is it..!!

Apologies for errors🥱


ROTTEN TOMATOES ARE NOT ALLOWED 🤣


See yaa..

Love

~Sakshi❤️


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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's Beautiful 🥺❤️

Loved it❤️

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Ahhhhhhh dillll ko sukoon milaaaa......this is superrrrrrrr cuteeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!



& what a great surprise this is!!!pyaar pyaar pyaarrrrrrrr!

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That was really nice.

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It's beautiful

Hope we get to see the same once in show😳

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GLAD THAT U LIKE IT❤️

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So sweet! ❤️

Shiva giving a gift to Raavi ❤️

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Originally posted by: Kfof

It was cute😍😍❤


THANKYOU SO MUCH❤️

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❤️🥰💕What a wonderful story👏….totally love it😍

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Array kinna pyaara gift haiii .. I was smiling the entire time while reading this 😳


And I love how you kept the gift a suspense till the end 😎


This has been my dream for so long ... Shiva getting Raavi a gift .. preferably a paayal


So thank you so much for writing this 🤗

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