ShiVi Drabble- My First

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ShiVi Drabble- My First



Shiva had been enjoying Raavi’s attention, her jealousy over him. He was on cloud nine. He had decided after the Ramleela he would take her somewhere away from Pandya House and talk to her. He was hopeful that maybe Raavi was in his destiny and if she was he did not want to let go his first love. Who had thought that his number one dushman would his wife someday and he would end up falling in love with her.


He watched Disha smiling to him. He smiled back awkwardly and went to the green room to check on his chipkali. She was too angry when his mother forced Disha on him. He saw her sitting in the green room. Her eyes were dull very unlike Raavi. She had been like this for few days now. He hated it and he knew somewhere this was all his mother’s doing. He sighed and moved towards her.


“Aye chipkali idhar kya kar rai hai?”


“Tuje kya? Tu jana apni Disha ke pass.” She said with no emotions


This was new. She always spoke with sarcasm or with jealousy evident in her voice. He could not hear it today and it upset him.


“Kya hua Raavi?” He spoke seriously


“TUJE KYA.” she shouted


He saw his mother, bhabhi and Disha approaching. He quickly pulled her into a changing room in the green room. She saw them as well and understood why Shiva pulled her inside.


“Parayi ladki ke saath toh khule aam aayashi chal rai hai par family ke saamne biwi ke saath baat tak nai kar sakta.” She laughed in tears


“Dekh Raavi, tu sab jaanti hai.”


“Mai kuch nai jaanti, naahi ab jaana chahti hoon.”


“Raavi, please tu rona band kar.”


“Tuje yaa teri zindagi mein kya hi farak padta hai mai kitne dino se ro rai hoon. Kaki ko saare kaam karne Raavi chaiye par jab baat haq ki aati hai vo sab Disha. Ussi ko kyu nai keh deti ghar bhi sambhal le.”


“I’m sorry Raavi.” His eyes welled up seeing her cry


“Tera bhi alag chal rha hai. Kamra mera saath share karta hai par baki sab uss Disha ke saath.”


“Kya matlab hai tera?” He spoke hurt


“Pehli mulakat mein kiss. Ab toh baat kahaan tak paunch gai hogi na? Ho bhi kyu na teri biwi ka role toh uska hai mai toh side character hoon. Dhara di ki tabyat theek nai thi toh fatafat kaki ko meri yaad aa gayi” Her voice broke and tears didn’t stop


“Raavi, tu bhi jaanti hai mai ye shadi nai chahta. Ye sab maa ki vajah se hai.”


“Mai teri biwi hoon Dhara di ki vajah de. Disha teri biwi banegi kaki ki vajah se. Teri zindagi mein tera kuch apna hai bhi?” She shot him a death glare


“Raavi tuje pata hai haalat…”


“Halaat ka lecture mat shuru karna. Please. Ek cheez bata humari 5 mahine ki shadi mein tuje mai kabhi attractive nai lagi? Mere hote hue first kiss Disha ke saath….first thi bhi?” She said looking into his eyes after days. She felt betrayed.


“Aise kaafi pal the jab mai tere saath aage badhna chahta tha. Par hamara rishta kuch aisa tha ki.” He lowered his head


“Pura jawaab nai diya tune”


He looked up at her caressing her face like he normally does. He leaned closer to her leaving no space between them.

She kept her hand on his chest stopping him. A lone tear fell off his eye. Never had she ever in any circumstances stopped him from coming near to her.


“Nai Shiva. Tuje dono nai mil sakti.”


“Disha ko mai pasand hoon. Muje vo nai.”


“Apni maa ke kehne pe shadi toh kar rha haina?”


“Nai karunga. Muje aapnale.” He cried unable to hold back his tears


“Maine toh chodne ki baat tak nai ki thi.” She sobbed


They both cried finally letting out all the frustration. They were tired of fighting each other. All they wanted was each other.


Shiva moved closer again and this time Raavi let him. He smiled widely and leaned in. Raavi closed her eyes in acceptance. He smiled looking her. He wondered how did he end up hurting her so much and she gave in so easily. He moved up and kissed her forehead gently. Raavi opened her eyes shocked she did not expect a kiss there.


“Ye hai meri pehli kiss, meri consent ke saath. Tu meri zindagi ki ek lauti ladki hai.” He smiled


She hugged him tightly sobbing in his arms. She finally felt home.


“SHIVAA”


They heard his mother.


“Shiva, ab kya?” Raavi panicked


He intertwined his fingers with hers, reassuring her.


“Sach ka saamna” he winked


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Hi guys!!🤗

I’m back after too long!

Hope you guys like this one. Too annoyed by the way Raavi is getting treated. They have absolutely forgotten that both are at fault and not one.


I have come here after so long… So many new stories! Cannot wait to read❤️



Ani🌸

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This wass soo perfect ❤️

Raavi's dlgs were brilliant 👏👏👏👏

I hope we get something like this on the show someday .

Soo gladd to have you back 🤩🤩

Please keep writing ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awwww So lovely ❤️

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Loved it ❤️

Keep writing .I am glad you are back 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it! Perfect! ❤️ Keep writing more.

We can only get to read such things in the forum but in the actual show everything is going on in downward spiral.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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kya correct questions puche raavi ne.....he can't have both...grow a spine and face the fact....tell the truth or let her go and move on with your life like others want....


wish this had happened in serial....


I loved the last sentence and dem being together

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was perfect!!!😍❤

Loved it❤❤😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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That's soo amazing


But chances nahi hain that we will get this anytime.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Loved it!! Missed reading your stories!! Do write more if you can.... ❤️

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Welcome back Ani❤️

Loved this so much!! How I wish we get something like this on the show❤️

This was so heart touching...I am so happy Raavi vented out everthing. She has been going through so much. Her dialogues were on point..Bang on!!!

Loved this so much❤️

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