Moments that break (PART- III pg 11) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Iktara22

Update soonn

Originally posted by: mpks1

First off, I agree with the way they are portraying Raavi in the jealousy track on the show. Already the girl has lost all her self respect, now they are making her look like a fool. It is not done, didn’t expect the writers to stoop low. Now I feel Raavi should leave and go away from this madness.

That said, my heart goes to Raavi in your story. The girl is broken, everyone around her is responsible for her state, starting from Dev, Shiva all the others including the new girl, her maasi and her so called badi behen, Anita😕

Hope you are going to bring life back into Raavi in the next part

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

This was so sad and heart breaking💔

We really need to see something like this on the show. Raavi has so much pent up inside which needs to come out!!

Beautiful update...please update next part soon❤️

Finally read it... It's really heartbreaking to see Raavi like this🥺

Her side of story is truly never explored but I do feel these monologues feelings will surely help audience to connect to her more and also it will be good way to fetch trps don't know what cv's planned but apart from jealousy all that is piled up inside both Shiva and Raavi needed to be out... I really feel the root of your story needed to be shown on tv😊

It was really well written and I always said that both Shiva and Raavi never deserves the family they had... Still Shiva had these people who are self centered but atleast did something for him at some time but Raavi being always alone... I really hope we may get her mausa pa or any other family member who supports her in future atleast.... my heart always goes for her😭😭...

It's awesome story waiting for next chapter👍🏼

Post it asap🤗

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Finally read it... It's really heartbreaking to see Raavi like this🥺

Her side of story is truly never explored but I do feel these monologues feelings will surely help audience to connect to her more and also it will be good way to fetch trps don't know what cv's planned but apart from jealousy all that is piled up inside both Shiva and Raavi needed to be out... I really feel the root of your story needed to be shown on tv😊

It was really well written and I always said that both Shiva and Raavi never deserves the family they had... Still Shiva had these people who are self centered but atleast did something for him at some time but Raavi being always alone... I really hope we may get her mausa pa or any other family member who supports her in future atleast.... my heart always goes for her😭😭...

It's awesome story waiting for next chapter👍🏼

Post it asap🤗

I hope you will like the next update😃

oh god😭😭😭😭😭😭this is so so so heart touching...........I am feel like crying...my heart broke, literally....my god each and every emotion is just uffff😭😭😭😭😭

please update soon.......

Originally posted by: virangna2005

oh god😭😭😭😭😭😭this is so so so heart touching...........I am feel like crying...my heart broke, literally....my god each and every emotion is just uffff😭😭😭😭😭

please update soon.......

This was so beautifully sad, love.... I loved that Rishita understood Raavi's pain here, and Suman is truly crossing the line now..... And thank god Shiva finally knows how she feels, though....

Do write more dear... ❤️

Love Raavi Too.

I also feel she could have had a better track... with this anath angle and now Shiva leaving her...

This was so emotional

Continue soon Please

awwww raavi🤗😭💔🥺

pura pandya parivaar😡🤬

tum log oily he deserve karte ho....wo aa jati to ye teeno hostel and Suman old age home mein hoti and ab bhi dhara ko jab back stab karegi tab maza aayega.....

Raavi don't do anything sweetheart.....see how everything unfolds.....

shiva 😡 naukar nahi hai wo....

maagin😡 u sided one daughter and proved that raavi has no value for u....